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Posted: 10 years ago
write however u like.. As u've written it having something in ur mind.. U shouldn't change it for others.. It's ur wish..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: srinithi07

okay guys i need some help regarding my os.. u see this is not exactly going to be very mainstream. facts will change. relationships may be in a way none of u like . ur fav characters may not be shown in good light. many upcoming parts wil also be pretty bold. you wil have hell a lotta angst and misunderstandings confusion and the general. to all my fellow ardians you will probably see a lot of tensions between the couple cause in case anyone hasnt noticed this story is more of a bheem di ship. whatever i will not be stopping this OS. i have heaps of plans for it and so u ppl need to decide. im leaving it to u. whatever im not ready to be in the receiving end of any scathing or taunting remarks.

thanks
sri.



Go ahead Sri... U have written this OS keeping a modern day perspective in mind & I am reading it with a modern day mindset. I dont mind any changes or other character shades in the story. Please continue it... I m looking forward to read this story further 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Do write as ur own wish...No need of any changes here..pls cont..we will read
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi sri!😳😳
sry fr such a late rply...
nice chappies😃😃 krishna and arjun still not bondedšŸ˜•.. want to see soon how they become soo close friendsšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
and dnt wry make ur story in ur way, and about liking it?no one can hate ParAv😳😳😳
best of luck...
and update soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
well sweethearts im gonna continue this really really now that my boards are over and all and i would like a beta reader i mean someone who can read it and suggest changes and stuff before posting it ... anyone willing ?
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Posted: 10 years ago

chapter - 6

"Hi" bheem said in a cheerful voice.

"I...er...I can explain" arjun tried weakly "it was hot, I went for a walk"

"Arjun, you realize why we left Delhi don't you? We need to keep a low profile, we have a death threat, and you behaving so irresponsibly, i would've expected this from nak or dev or even perhaps bheem but not from you" yudhi said

Arjun sighed bloody death threats.

"Just promise us you'll be careful in the future and won't do something so stupid" kunti muttered walking away

Arjun nodded grumpily he had never been good at accepting faults.

Arjun walked upstairs and packed his bag. Maybe the late night excursion wasn't a very good idea, now he was going to sleep through the day.

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arjun grabbed his bag and jumped out of his car and walked inside the college, he was walking next to Nakul who was going on about the latest trend in the market with arjun nodding his head as if he understood everything for the life of him what was the difference between skinny jeans and tubes for god's sake and moreover who cares? Apparently Nakul does as he was still rambling about it..

"Hello, prince"

Arjun froze while Nakul swung around "hey" he said grinning "your Krishna right? Thanks for helping us out last night with those nutters"

"Oh, dont mention it was pleasure to help our little drama queen here" Krishna said

Arjun flushed and gritted out "I am not a drama queen" and he had actually thought the dude was okay? "Great going arjun get a grip" he muttered to himself

"You know talking to yourself is the first sign of madness" said Nakul intelligently

"Says who? You? "Arjun snapped

"actually, J.K.Rowling says that once in Harry Potter part 3 and i think once in part 5 too" Krishna supplied helpfully

Nakul roared with laughter at my furious face

"Say" he said turning to face Krishna "are you the college topper"

"That would be me" Krishna grinned

Arjun had had enough with a frustrated scream he turned around and stalked off slamming the classroom door behind him as he entered

"You know" nakul said "he usually doesn't get this annoyed, he's hardly temperamental, usually has his emotions under a tight leash"

"Well what do I do, I do things to people" Krishna laughed "now let me go and stop him before he starts destroying furniture"

Nakul laughed and nodded while Krishna entered the class himself closing the door slowly the poor door couldn't take more damage in one day

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Arjun huffed and sat down as far as possible from Krishna couldn't he like have a little peace he banged his head on the table and closed his eyes, maybe he could get some shut eye before the lecturer arrived. Satyaki plopped next to him on his seat and asked in his usual low tone "Are you okay?" Arjun jumped banging his head on the table "you seem a little jumpy" Satyaki finished with a smirk of amusement. Arjun huffed now four eyed nerds were teasing him. His day was just getting better and better

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Arjun walked out of the classroom with a sigh of relief he had fallen asleep almost twice in the class and the lecturer had grilled him relentlessly with questions almost leaving him in tears. Collapsing in a corner table at the canteen he closed his eyes and rubbed his head. What was that lovely smell? "Black tea, low fat" said a musical voice. Arjun looked up to see Krishna. He couldn't have cared less for who it was he would've had the tea even if it was Duryodhan who gave it to him. Krishna smiled at him sympathetically and placed the tea on his table. Arjun took it tentatively "it's not poisoned" Krishna said amused turning around and walking away. Arjun closed his eyes and let the soft goodness slide down his throat opening his eyes he spotted Krishna walking away "OI!" he called out. Krishna turned around "thanks for last night and "he gestured to the tea "all of this" Krishna laughed. "What's mine is yours remember ?" he called out . Arjun did remember, though from where he had no idea. Unconsciously a small smile slid across his features. His day had just gotten better.

Edited by srinithi07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was hilarious!! Krishna apparently pestering Arjun and following him everywhere!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahhh. update after such a long time😳. was waiting fr this.
so it was krishna who saved arjun the night before or was it someone elsešŸ˜• otherwise why does he call him a drama queen. And hes so sweet to arjun 😊wonder why arjun avoids himšŸ˜†.
And so we see the 1st acceptance from arjun today towards krishna. 1st bonding.😳 the little smile n thanks.
Arjun sheds his arrogance a bit at lastšŸ˜†
Edited by naq5 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful!! 😃
Haha... those ppl read harry potter, huh? 😲
Krishna- so sweet always 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very beautiful as well as cute update!!!..
Krishna...awww...he following Arjun everywhere..choo sweet...😳
Arjun finally smiled a little...That's a Good Sign..
Thanks for the update n PM...do update soon


Edited by shiningstar77 - 10 years ago

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