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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

Sooo amazingly written sri!!!!!!❤️🤗arjun-satya relationship was shown beautifully!!!!😃love this sakha-sakhi!!!😛Awww arjun saw the mor pankh!!!*he can hear the flute!!!!😳😳☺️hayye ParAv can't wait for them to meet!!!☺️❤️plss continue soon😉😳


anshi theyre not gonna meet with roses and honey theyre gonna meet with sharp words and sarcasm and a lot of fights
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: sri_160799


anshi theyre not gonna meet with roses and honey theyre gonna meet with sharp words and sarcasm and a lot of fights

ohhh😲after hatred comes love😉😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

ohhh😲after hatred comes love😉😳


there is a fine line between love and hate , actually .. NO ! read and find out 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved It Just Too Much ! The Morpankh And Flute Most Of All !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved It Just Too Much ! The Morpankh And Flute Most Of All !!

Aww thankuuu soo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My nxt chappy is ready...will,post by tonight
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Posted: 11 years ago
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there u go . my second chappy, its a pretty small one, but ! madhav makes an entry... yah! i know its not all that good... but that shouldn't stop u from giving ur reviews ! negative reviews are more than welcome .

Chappy 2

The flight journey was long and tiring , they reached their house and it was unbelievably huge,Arjun collapsed in his bed, more than a little nervous about the next day..

----dream----

The room was dead dark , dimly lit candles,on the corners,of the room...the sound of anklets echoed around the room,the white robes of the dancer caught fire , someone was screaming in the distance

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Arjun got up with a jerk..he frowned trying to remember his dream, but all he could recall was darkness, Arjun giggled what was going on with him? He never trusted fate to guide him, he had always relied solely on his hard work and dedication not to mention his undeniable intelligence ,he shook his head he was becoming like sahdev...he got up had his bath and opened his wardrobe.For some reason he felt like dressing in all black that day, combing his long hair he chose to keep it loose despite mumbai's melting heat...he walked downstairs to his car and got on, the house was in dead silence,bratha yudhi would be getting ready now and his other brothers would probably still be in bed...the road was trafficless,as he drove to college, in the entrance , he was invited to the lobby , were a woman told him to submit a form, with a little bit of flirting he got the school map and some inside information about the professors, swimging the car key around his finger , entering inside his classroom he bagged the last bench by the corner..

Ehm!

Arjun turned around and figured out his interider was way taller than him, grumbling under his breath he looked up, into brilliantly mischevious jet black eyes,

You see MR.Whoever you are , this place belongs to me.

Arjun put a great show of checking the place , I dont see your name in it

I dont need my name written to prove its mine. Everything belongs to me, he stepped closer.. Even you do..he whispered in arjuns ear..pulling back he smirked and stretched his hand out, Im Krishna, and you are ?

Arjun stared at the mysterious eyes,and felt blinded...

Ehm..

Arjun blinked, Krishna had his hand stretched out..he looked at him , grabbed his bag and swung around , walked away pointedly ignoring the man..

He heard laughter behind him,IM watching you prince , you can run but you cant hide

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!! Awesome, yaar!!! First meet!!! Thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmm both meet like this and arjun ignores krishna's outstretched hand hmm interesting. to yaha 1st one sided love hai kya😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!!...simply superb chappy Sri...Madhav intro was lovely...his mischievious eyes,his tall structure...aww... imagining my madhav now...so sweet.😳... why arjun ignores him...but my madhav wont leave him at anytime...

its small chappy yaar...its ok...dont forget to give long one next time...
thanks for the pm😊

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