SwaRon SS: Crazy Little Thing Called Love Chapter3.PG.11

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Nishu 🤗
Character Sketches 😲
Different and I ❤️ed it
Concepts seems interesting...

1st chappy 😲👏
Sharon's accident 😲
Swayam took her to hospital..
Accident reminds him of something 😲🤔
Swayam hates Sharon coz she tried killing herself
Hmmm waiting for next chapter ...

Nishu Tu mast likhti hai yaar 👏

Here are my stars : ⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️.⭐️ 5/5

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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Dee-jay

@Dee-jay

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Great star to the story.
Love how Swayam cares abt her when he doesnt know her
Thx for pm
Update super soon!

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Hey Nishi
Pretty marvelous start to the story😊
Swayam's character is quite gripping 👏
Just want to know what exactly happened in his past and why he doesn't like his b'days
Update supersoonish. . .waiting impatiently 😉

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Great update

A emotion hidden Swayam trying to hide and throw it away all his feelings *sigh* well doctors don't emote for their patients I know that but this is way tooo much :D

Well the accident girl was a bit known and giving feeling that it was Sharon and what like before that Swayam says?He has got into this situation before?

Well anyways great update and thanks for the pm it's great for the first chap

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bhumika gaur

@minimini66

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

waooo that was something awesome 😳
amazing story line 👍🏼
beautiful writing 👏
and awesome characters 😳
you are doing an amazing job ... really in love with the story 🥳
update soon
MINI

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Vishaka

@-Vishaka-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Thats the wonderful concept nishu.. Loved the 1st chapter. Do update next chappy soon.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

read the first chapter it was really naice

nishu you are improving from ur last update to tis one each chapter

is much more than the last one

i hav to say i hav seen an exceptional growth in u as a writer

coming to the update

it was an interesting chapter

swayam's intro was very well penned

sharon is hurt but why

curious to read more

do update soon nishu 🤗

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

sorry for the super late reply
nice start to a great story
wud love to see swayam as the doc.
ther's some kind of mystery surrounding
swayam's character
and i juzz loved it
update sooonnn
thnx for the pm

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Hey nishi,

Again good concept but i am looking forward,Characterization is beautifuly placed..i liked it..but still i have to read chapter..then will be able to comment

Thanx for the PM

Prateek

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss
Res for Rachu 🤗
-edited-

the idea as a whole is very interesting...swayam being a doctor😳 why do i feel tujhe house dekhkar yeh doctor wala kayal aaya hai🤔 well whatever joh bhi ho its interesting and i am dying to read further... rukkh rukh my comment doesnt end :P
the first introduction of swayam has a very realistic touch (pata nahi kya bhak bahk kar rahi hoon😆) i mean its nishu style ekdum jhakass :v i am waiting for the update of swayam's flaskback i hope you intend on doing so...
the first meeting kuch jyada hi unpredictable hai :v khati kya hai?? first i thought the girl driving the car is sharon fir i thought the girl helping but fir meri gut feeling sahi thi pehle :v you are queen of twists!
i am looking forward for the nikhil swayam friendship as well...(this is really really resembling house...i think i am going crazy...🥱) want to more about sharon... i think youre next update will be that :P

well thats it my thoughts...keep writing caron copy..i just love you 🤗
update soon!!!!

Rach 🤗
Thank you thank you *bows down*
I dont know re..Maybe House se aya ho..But maine BAHUT pehle hi likhna shuru kiya tha..
So dont remember 😆
@Bold- Nishu style? 🤣 thank you re.. :P
Ofcourse i will give a flashback :D
Personally i Loved the first meet..😆 coz Predictable is so boring see? 😉
By the way i eat vegetables :v and yeah your gut feeling rocks B| see? we think so alike..😆
Oye..I assure you Nikhil wont be like Wilson..Atleast he wont date someone like Amber 🤣
Yep next update will be about Sharon..but next update kab ayega pata nahi .. XP
Love you too Carbon Copy. :*
Lambe comment ke liye dhanyavaad. _/\_
And yeah wait karte karte mar mat ja.. :O 😡
Future updates pe bhi comment chahiye mujhe. 😆