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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uditaudi

Oh my god didu 👏👏👏

what a brilliant part
its out of this worl
aweeessooomee

nxt part didu jaldi se *pout*
😳😳😳
love u loads didu 😛😛😛

thanx dearu
gonna update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AMadhuri

Brilliant update 👏 Next part jaldi post kardo 😊

thanx dear
posting...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

i dont know ki meine kaha kaha res kiya so sorry for that actually mein bhool gayi 🤣🤣
let it be
by the way u know na the way ri8 is really amazing and i totally in love with concept of ur stories
it was really interesting part and next will be
abhi rd and harsh ka meeting maza aayega
update soon

its ok dear😆😆
thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

so touchy...
Im shockd..
Sandhir llhh moments nyz.
but rd scolded her for harsh..
poor sanyu
n feeling bad for rd too

thank u soo much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 15

Rd-haan,what will u do?

Thats when harsh turns and rd and harsh come face to face...

Harsh-rd beta

Rd[raising his hand]-don't call me that Mr.harsh

Harsh-ok fine i will not call u that but tell me why did u fired her haan

Rd-i m not answerable to u

Harsh-i m ur dad and u r answerable

Rd[yelling]-no u r not my dad,did u hear me and i will not answer u

Harsh[yelling]-the truth will not change rd no matter how many times to

Say that

Rd- i will change it and i've changed it

Harsh- no rd u didn't change anything,u just ran away,this is what u've done all

Ur life,running away, u have never tried to solve any of ur problems

U always run away from ur problems

Rd[yelling]-just stop it and get out of my house,the day that girl stepped

Into my house,it has become a hell

Harsh-really rd,u think that she made ur life a hell thn u r wrong,u also know

Rd that i have changed but again u r running from truth rd

Rd-oh just shut up,i don't care whether u have changed or not,i don't care

What u do with ur life coz u guys never cared for us,u guys were our

Parents for name sake u have never fulfilled ur responsibilities and i

Just don't care

Harsh-stop pretending rd,i know u care for me and ur mom

Rd- i don't have a mom and not a dad,all i have is my kaka,my arpita and parth

They r my family and[to arpi] i don't mind if u want to call him ur dad but

He is noone to me

Harsh-right,thats why u used to send sanyukta to take me to rehabilitation center

Rd-what rubbish,meine kisi ko nahi bheja,why would i haan

Harsh[shocked]-what?phir sanyukta ne mujhse aisa kyu kaha

Rd-why would i know and i don't care she is noone and so is u

Now just get out[throws another vase]

Harsh[yelling]-Randhir singh shekhawat ur life is just as broken as

These pieces and someone entered ur life to set them

But as usual u didn't allowed her to enter ur shell

I just want to tell u that never do that,life will never

Give u another chance and don't repeat a mistake

Which i committed ...

Rd[interrupting]-just shut up my life is broken because of u and get out

Saying so he goes to his room and harsh sits there with a thud and kaka

Sits next to harsh whereas arpi was in dilemma whether to go to rd or to

Be with harsh but at last she goes to rd as kaka was with harsh

She enters rd's room only to find everything broken and thrown on the floor

And rd laying on his bed diagonally face toward ceiling arms spread out

Legs hanging out of bed and tears flowing out of his eyes

She goes and sits near his head and caresses his hair and rd opens his

Eyes only to find tears in her eyes and on seeing that he sits on the

Bed and wipes her tears and she wipes his tears and hugs him

Rd[rubbing her back]-kya hua meri arpi ro kyu rahi hai

Arpi-bhai app kyu rahe the iss liye mein bhi ro rahi thi

Rd[breaking the hug]-look mein roo nahi raha,dekh

Arpi-hmmm,bhai sanyu

Rd- not now arpi,pls leave me alone for sometime

Arpi-lekin bhai app ek baat sochiye usko kya zaroorat thi dad ko jhut bolkar

Rehabilitation center le jane ki,usse kya milta bhai

Rd-kyuki woh mera mazak udana chahti thi,uske paas to apne

Dad hai jo usse bohot pyaar karte hai apni mom hai...

Arpi-no bhai app yeh kya keh rahe hai,agar usse apka mazak udana hota to

Woh bohot pehle kar deti kyu ki usse bohot pehele se malum tha

Aur app ko to atleast pata hai ki apki mom kaun hai lekin usne

Apni mom ko ajj tak nahi dekha,use yeh tak nah pata ki uski mom

Kaun hai bhai

Rd-what?

Arpi-bhai app use aise kyu treat karte ho?

Rd- kyu ki sari auratein ek jaise hoti hai

Arpi-agar aisa hai to app mujhse bhi pyaar nahi karte honge na

Rd- no arpi tujhe pata hai ki tu meri jaan hai phir tu aisa kyu keh rahi hai

Woh sanyukta bhi uss renuka sanyal ki tarah hi hai,usse kisi ki koi

Parwah nahi hai

Arpi[sarcastically]-right,tabhi to usne bina kisi matlab ke hamare liye itna kuch kiya

Bhai,dad is right u r running away from truth and u r destroying

Ur life bhai,pls bhai bring her back apko bhi pata hai she is the best

As ur assistant still u always push her away.either u r afraid

Of something or u r trying to hide something,i don't know what

Bhai but she affects u

Rd- she does not affect me did u get that

Arpi-thn prove that bhai,app ko anjaza bhi hai apne use ek injured leg ke

Saath GHAR SE BAHAR NIKAL DIYA how could u bhai uske pass

Apna koi saman nahi hai,i dont wanna know anything i just want

Her here today itself

Saying so she goes out and rd again lays on the bad as before and arpi and harsh's words

Rang in his mind

apne use ek injured leg ke Saath GHAR SE BAHAR NIKAL DIYA how

could u bhai uske pass Apna koi saman nahi hai"

"She affects u bhai"

" Randhir singh shekhawat ur life is just as broken as

These pieces and someone entered ur life to set them

But as usual u didn't allowed her to enter ur shell

I just want to tell u that never do that,life will never

Give u another chance and don't repeat a mistake

Which i committed ..."

He opens and sits on his bed and bends to the side table as if remembering smt and takes

Out sanyu's earing which he got from his bed on the first day and holds it

In front of him

Rd[to earing]-do u affect me ms.aggarwal[to himself]-no u don't

Keeps it back in the drawer and goes to the wardrobe and slides the door and enters

And slides it back,and as soon as he slides it back it was pitch black in the wardrobe

And he thinks how she was staying here,he goes back and opens the door and

the wardrobe was lit up and he goes and sits on her bed and and takes the pillow

And paces it on his lap,thats when he sees a towel and picks it up and unfolds it

And he chuckles lightly as on the towel an angry face was drawn with sketch

And under that was written "AKDU SIR"

Here on the other hand sanyu was walking aimlessly and everyone was looking

At her but she was lost in her own world but she was not crying she was just

Walking emotionlessly her leg bleeding...soon she reaches the only other place

She knew -their sets

She was walking through the corridor but she bangs into someone and

That persons holds her

S-hey sanyukta woah kaha jaa rahi ho mam

It was raj

Sanyu[fabricating a smile]-hey raj

Raj-tum ajj yaha kya kar rahi ho,ajj to chuttin hai na

Sanyu-yeah chutti hai but woh..[thinking something]woh haan sir ne bheja hai

Kal ki shooting ke arrangements dekhne ke liye

Raj-oh accha arey tumhare pair ko kya hua its bleeding

Sanyu-woh haan woh andar ate waqt kahi lag gaya hoga

Raj-chalo bandage kar dete hai

Sanyu-no thanx raj i'll manage,i guess tum ja rahe the kahi

Raj-thank god yaar yaad dila diya mom das baar phone kar chuki hai.ladki dekhne jane

Ke liya[slightly blushing]

Sanyu-ohho[teasing]chalo pasand aaye to batana,ab jao jaldi

Raj-haan ok bye

Sanyu[smiling]-bye

He runs from there and as soon as he disappears her smile fades and she sits down on

The floor leans on the wall,hugs her knees and cries as with face buried on her knees

At solace

Rd was sitting on her bed when he hears a phone ringing,he searches for the phone

And finds it on the other side of the mattress,it was flashing "DAD CALLING"

A number of emotions runs through his mind before he composes himself

And recieves the call

Rd[voice shaking a bit]-hello

S dad-hello ji app...

Rd-amm uncle namaste mein sanyu ki friend ka bhai

S dad-oh haan beta maaf karna mein tumhara naam bhool gaya

Rd-ji uncle rd

S dad-rd beta woh sanyu

Rd-haan woh uncle sanyu arpi ke saath,mera matlab meri behen ke saath bahar gayi hai

Woh uska phone yahi bool gayi

S dad-oh accha,tabhi to mein itni der se phone kar raha tha woh utha rahi thi

Woh kya hai na beta usne baat karte karte beech mein phone kat diya tha

Rd-woh shayad uncle yaha range nahi hoti kabhi kabhi

S dad-accha beta app kaise ho aur baki sab,apke dad wapis aa gaye

Rd-sab theek hai uncle,ji dad waapis aa gaye,amm uncle mein sanyukta

Ke ane ke baad call karwata hoon

S dad-theek hai beta

Rd-ji

He cuts the call and a tear escapes his eye

Precap-will he bring sanyu back?


howz it guys,i hope u people liked it.Pls do hit the like button and leave

ur feedbacks they mean a lot to me😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress


Unress
Yipee moi first
I was stalking u from 1 hour
Finally my hard work paid off j m first party tym for me 😆
Smirks at everyone 😛


The update was superb
I so luved
Son father face off
Harsh was rite rd was just running from his problems

Poor arpi stuck between bro n dad
Rd reallu luvs arpi a lot
Harsh n arpi words ringing in his mind
He's quite guilty now

Poor sanyu wandering aimlessly
Sanyu so easily hides her pain she was smiling in front of raj
She's so broken


Rd was scared to attend sanyu dad fne
Bt he did
He saw dat towel

Precap exciting
Update soon

Wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it the emotions were super good... i like the way harsh and arpi gave rd a reality check he needed it...
and then when he actually saw how she was living and her fatehr knew about her was so touching...
and i cpuld feel the pain she must have been going thorugh..
all in all the surprise was goos but cliffie...ohhh nooo

shittt...



Edited by Gunseerat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb poor sanyu she is very hurt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb!!!!
Rd needs to understand siuation and poor sanyu
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was too good... feeling bad for randhir and sanyukta both..
i just want randhir to being sanyukta back but i also dont want sanyukta to give into his demands so easily... its not rigjt to insult anyone anytime and randhir should b taught that he cant behave like this, other peoples have emotions too.
do continue soon and thanks for p.m

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