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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for late comment and by the way as usual i loved the update..
muje pehle se pata tha but i had a small doubt because u all writers have a creative mind that wen u change the plot i cannot understand only...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh it's so difficult to catch up with stories after long break
sorry anisha exams the so no if...
but wow kya twist laya hai!!!
kishore😡he should rot in hell..
aur rd is such a loving husband...
loved that everyone trusts sanyu..
continue soon..
love
vani.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay
I m late I guess

Okay super late

Okay suppperrr se upperrr waali late

Okayyy suppperrr se uppperrr se uppperrr waali late
Okay but main isse zyaada late nhi hui *pouts*

Hmmm so update k baare me kya kahu
Thnk god the grp didnt mistook her
Yeee so priti going to hlp her
Awww rd rd rd rd room me kya hui 😆😳 hehehe *smiles sheepishly*
Ye kishor ki to mainnn arghhh i wanna bash him
Omg he want kill his own wife such a #$&&%
Okay ab jldi update plzzz n happy wala
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samyukthakrish

awesome!!!!! lovely.. aww. randhir... he is such a sweetheart.. mujhe bhi aisa ladka chahiye!!! kishor ab tho gaya... par preeti ko kya hoga? i hope she wont fall into her husband's trap... loved it!!!!

aww thank you di
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love

awesome update...❤️

thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gracy27

awesome yaar loved randhir he is so romantic
and no it to sorry actually I also kinda busy in this puja so its ok

thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nkphjfr

sorry for late comment and by the way as usual i loved the update..
muje pehle se pata tha but i had a small doubt because u all writers have a creative mind that wen u change the plot i cannot understand only...

hehehhee thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asapom

oh it's so difficult to catch up with stories after long break

sorry anisha exams the so no if...
but wow kya twist laya hai!!!
kishore😡he should rot in hell..
aur rd is such a loving husband...
loved that everyone trusts sanyu..
continue soon..
love
vani.😃

yeah i am facing it r8 now!!! thanks by the way
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahhh i am sorry i could nt post yesterday!!!!
and today i almost had a mini heart attack as i saw my docs deleted!!!!thank god after lots fo searching got dis!!so thanks all for waiting and here u go wid the next update!!!!

part 43:~

Vids:arey bata na ki room mei kya huya????
Sanyu looked at rd who was smiling coyly...

Flashback
Rd carried sanyu on his shoulder to their room and latched the door...
Sanyu:rd put me down I say!!!she shouted and hit his back hard...
Rd winced and at once threw her on bed...
Sanyu:u fool...she caught her bleeding foot...
Rd:then what r u!!!kab se bol raha hu ki meri bat suno but nhi!!!now sit here quietly...
Sanyu:no I wont...she tried getting up but rd pushed her again...he opened his tie and tied it on her mouth forcefully...
Sanyu started throwing her arms and leg hitting him sometimes...
Rd:gosh u r so wild!!!!he laughed and sanyu made angry faces...
He took the near bytowel and tied it on her hands pulling it back...
He sat down sighing but soon sanyu kicked him on his thigh!!!
Rd;fool agar galat jagah lag jati to bad mei tumhe problem hoti!!!
Sanyu rolled her eyes and wriggled!!!
Rd looked here and dere to find something !!!
Sanyu:mmm she wriggled and tried standing but fell on bed due to pain!!!
Rd:beithi raho na yar!!! He tied the corner of the bed sheet and pulled her leg on bed!!!
Sanyu wriggled more!!!
Rd:wat??she pointed towards her leg where the sheet was stained wid blood!!
Rd;arrey koi bat nhi!!!kaka ko bol dunga washing powder phirse le ane ko!!!now quite ok!!!he pecked hr forehead cupping her face forcefully !!!he took the medicines from drawer and sat infront of her leg on a chair!!!
Rd:so kaha tha mei!!oh ha yaha hi to tha!!he laughed and looked at sanyu to see her cocking her eyebrows!!!

Rd;yeah yeah ok!!so see I knew that u were in some problem but u were not ready to tell me!!!per ek din I felt u very tensed aur mei khud ko rok nhi paya!i fixed a detective to find the problems in your office and I came to know that Kishore is the owner !!!and aj hi sab ek sath ho gaya!!mujhe office se phn aya aur jab jar aha tha tab wo deal cancel ki baremei bat suni aur wo bol rahe the ki u did it!!i knew u didn't but aur kaun karega I was thinking about it!!!phir mujhe office mei Kishore mila aur pata chala ki dat is ur father!!!!

He tied the bandage properly and took a look at her!!!she was still looking at him expressionless!!
He slowly untied the sheet and continued...
Rd:phir sab to tum guess kar hi sakte ho!!i understood dat he was here to take revenge from u wid support from his brother and so he was blaming u for everything !!i motioned arohi and she spoke against u and eventually all looked at me and understood!!we all trust sanyukta!!and believe me wo jo meine tumhe unke sath chor k agaya wo bhi plan k liye tha!!to make him believe dat u are alone so dat he makes a mistake!!

He untied his tie and cupped her face joining their foreheads!!
Rd:trust me I kicked and slapped myself everytime whenever I spoke against u !!it was to help u!!i know u want to f8 alone and we are just helping u to weaken the opponent!!i will never ever leave u and not to that man when I know that u will die before staying wid him!!!
Sanyu looked up wid moisture in her eyes!!!

Rd:u trust me na??he pouted for which his lips touched hers!!!
Sanyu looked away!!!
Rd:babyyy...pls na!!!he pulled her face back to find her giggling!!
Sanyu;dnt baby me!!!
Rd:u trust me na!!
Sanyu ;I am sorry!!!meine kitna kuch bol diya aur soch liya!!!i am sorry!!
Rd:its ok!!uska badla rat ko !!!he winked and sanyu tried to pull her hand front!!!
Sanyu;rd mera hath to kholo!!!
Rd:ha ruko!!!he pecked her forehead taking his hands back ...
Rd;waise mei soch raha tha ki u are tied and I am so close to...
Sanyu:to?
He moved more closer making their eyelashes touch!!!
Sanyu blushed and hid her face in his crook!!!
Rd opened the towel and hugged her tight!!!

Sanyu:I love u!!!rd:I do more!!!he kissed her nape!!
Sanyu distanced themselves...
Sanyu:chalo niche!!!i have so much work to complete!!
Rd;arrey pls na!!!he hugged her again and opened her blouse knot!!!
Sanyu:rd ek mukka marungi !!chalo na niche sab hai!!!
Rd;to rehne do!!!he lined her throat wid wet kisses!!
Sanyu;rd agar abhi chora to rat ko lamba wala gift dungi!!!pakka promise!!
Rd;arrey nhi chahiye!!jo karna hai mei kar lunga!!!he winked and pecked her lips!!!
Sanyu:gosh rd u r shameless!!
Rd;arrey tumhare samne to hu !!warna tumhe to pda pasand hi nhi!!!
Sanyu:ha now pls na!!!lets go!!!!
Rd:ok!!!he pouted and tied her knot back!!!
Sanyu pecked his lips and got up to leave!!!
Rd:jab utha k laya to utha k hi niche le jaunga!!!he scooped her in his arms and she wrapped her arms around his neck!!!
Flashback end

Sanyu:wo kuch nhi huya usne mujhe bas plan k baremei bataya!!
Rd;arrey jhuth kyu bol rahi ho!!dekho vidhushi mei bol raha hu!!!hum gaye phir na meine apni tie kholi aur...
Vids:bas bas!!!phir sunna nhi hai!!ghar mei bare sab hai rd!!!
Parth:huh!!!ho gayi phus!!!he murmured to arjun and dey both laughed!!
Vids:acha!!tum jaise larko ki tarah nhi hai hum larkiya ki ..she looked at vd,harsh and niha who were smiling!!
Parth;ki kya???ha ha bolo ki kya???ho gaya??
Vids:bad mei dekh lungi tujhe mei!!!
Parth:tu kya dekhegi !!!aur bad mei kyu??ab kya andhi ho gayi hai???
Vids:teri to!!
Parth:teri to kya?
Arohi:guys stop it!!!yeh kyat u tukari laga rakha hai!!!
Arjun;dekho kaun bol rahi hai!!
Vids:tum to chup hi raho!!!
Parth;kyu kyu???
Sanyu:guys stop it!!!hum yeh jhagra bad mei continue kare!!!ek bara problem hai samne!!!
Rd:arey ha per pehle mei bol to du ki tie kholne k bad kya kiya!!!
Vids:kitna besharam ho!!
Rd:oh pls!!!tie khol k iski muh banda aur towel se iski hath!!phir iski pair mei patti lagayi aur sab bol diya!!!
Vids:ooo
Parth:huh dirty minded grl...
Vids:teri to...
Rd;guys focus!!!he shouted and all sat down quietly!!
Rd:better so now sanyu plan kya hai bolo...
Sanyu:plan???kaunsa plan???mujhe kya pata ki karna hoga!!
Sahil;to phir ab tak kuch nhi socha !!
Rd:ok lets think!!all started thinking ...
Suddenly sanyu started laughing...
Rd:kya huya hai???
Sanyu:hum to kitne bare bewakoof hai!!!
Rd;kya??
Sanyu:ha!!plan to usne hi hume bataya hai aur hum kyu soch rahe hai!!!
Jiggy:matlab!!
Sanyu:see usne humse zor zabardasti properties li hai per hum nhi kar sakte!!
Rd:ha aur wo humse humesha ek kadam age rahega!!
Sanyu;ek nhi do!!!he very well knows that hum kya kar sakte hai and even he will execute his plan bfre we do something!!
Harsh:correct per we can take a lawyer r8..
Rd;ha uski patni!!i mean preeti ji!!!
Sanyu:oh shit!!rd wo insan preeti ko bhi nhi chorega!!!kya pata use pata ho ki preeti is helping us???
Vd:phir we have to tell her about this!!
Niha called preeti:hey..meine kuch der pehle phn kiya tha!!apne bataya ki ap busy ho koi aur case leke per mujhe pata chala ki it is the same case I called for!!!sanyukta is like my daughter !!
Preeti;oh ok ...its good den...
Rd took the phn;hey rd speaking...ap kya ek bar mil sakte hai humse...I am texting the address..and pls dnt tell anyone else about it!!
Preeti;ok...

Soon preeti was in vd's farmhouse ...
She smiled as she saw sanyu and rd stealing glances at each odr!!dey discussed about the plan & waited for two days for the court hearing..
Preeti moved to vd's house wid pari for their safety...
Kishore hired best lawyer and dreamt of the day when shekhawats would finally hate sayukta as he managed to get some proofs against her wid his black money!!!!

Two days later in court..
Judge gave permission to Kishore's lawyer sharma to speak up as he was made to stand on the box..
Sharma:mr Kishore singh is not new to business..he had a small factory and gradually emerged as one of the leading industry head!ms sanyukta had given her own company to him willfully!!this case against my client is to defame him and I can give u the proofs..he handed a cd and judge played it on laptop where it showed sanyukta hugging Kishore and smilingly signing the papers!!!
It was den showed on tv to show the audience and all were shocked!!
Judge:mrs preeti singh would u like to say something...
Preeti nodded in no and Kishore smiled.
Sharma;moreover ms sanyukta is his daughter to his first wife!!i would like to call mr ksihore's brother on box..chachu acted the same way and talked the same which was taught by the lawyer to speak about his frst married life!!
Sanyukta was controlling her anger by tighly clutching her saree!!
Sharma:so the case is crystal clear where my client was framed ...
Judge:mrs preeti do u want to question mr kishore...
Preeti got up and stood bfre kishore..
Preeti:so mr Kishore when was u married the first time??
Kishore: 23 years back...
Preeti:ok but how come sanyukta's age be 24?
Kishore:because me and anju was in love and we made love bfre marriage!!
Preeti:oh..ohk !!i want to call doctor sulochona mehra who treated ms anju aggarwal during her pregnancy period..
Kishore was shocked..as he got to know that the doctor was dead..
Sulochona stood in box infront of Kishore
Preeti:so do u remember ms anju aggarwal ??24 years back u were treating her!
Sharma;itni salon ki batei yad kaise rahegi??
Judge:mr sharma sit down and speak when ur turn comes...
Sulochona:I know I am old but I was her neighbor!!!she was very scared when she came to know about her pregnancy and I am just 65 so I remember everything clearly!!kishore usse pyar karne ka natak kiya aur jab wo pregnant ho gayi to wo bhag gaya per anju ki papa ne use dhund ke shadi karwa diya per phirse usne dhoka diya!!!!anju meri patient thi jab sanyukta uske pet mei thi!!aur yeh Kishore sirf ladkiyo ko use karta tha!!
Kishore:yeh jhooth hai!!
Preeti:doctor ap ja sakte hai!!so now meri dusri gawa...yeh footage..she handed three cds..
Pehli cd usdin ki hai jisdin Kishore aur uska bhai yeh plan banaya mr sharma k sath!!dusri usdin ki hai jisdin ankit ne jan buj sanyukta ko dhakka deke property k paper gusaya aur akhri mei wo cd hai jaha harsh shekhawat ko zorzabardasti kiya gaya!!
Kishore eyed sharma ...
Sharma:objection my lord!!
Judge:objection overruled.
Preeti smiled and tv showed all the footage...
Judge:mr sharma u want to say something about ur plan wid dem??
Sharma;my lord nowadays a video can be made..and I am sure this is also fake video..i want to call mrs preeti in box..
Preeti got up
Sharma:so mrs preeti u r married to mr Kishore for 6 years r8!
Preeti:yes bt not to Kishore but he disguised himself as...
Shrama;my lord just look !!she is supporting a lady who herself is deframing her father and now mrs preeti is f8ng against his husband who loves dem wholeheartedly...
Preeti:I think u have forgotten mr sharma dat law comes first in our proffesion!!
Shrama rolled his eyes:so mrs preeti would u deny the fact that kshore is loyal father to pari!!he has attended every meetings in her school,loved her to fullest and even fulfills her wishes...
Preeti:den where was his love for sanykta!!why didn't he found out about her???where was he when his own brother and his family was treating her like a maid at her tender age!!my lord not only Kishore but his whole family should be punished!!for treating a girl child like a maid when she should go to school,den for forcing her and harsh ,den forcing office people to badmouth about their owners and most important for raping all those grls and leaving dem when dey were pregnant!!dis man should be hanged!!hanged till death!!she pointed to Kishore speaking her heart out wid eyes full of tears!!
Judge:now u can go mrs preeti...
Preeti:that's all my lord...
Judge replaed all cds twice and den started writing..
Judge:I hereby declare mr Kishore and his family wid mr shrama to be guilty for planning against people.i hereby declare mr Kishore to be hanged till death for raping girls 24 years back...and his family to be jailed for 5 years!!
Kishore was pulled away by police wid his family members...
Sanyukta kept a hand on preeti's shoulders who was crying..
Sanyuta:I am sorry...
Preeti:no don't be!!!its just I couldn't see his real face in this years even being a lawyer!!
Rd;but what about pari??she is small and I think she is fond of him too...
Preeti:I know!!but this two days I have tried to make her understand dat he is wrong and she will understand in few years I guess...she has too..
Niha:beta u both can shift wd us!!
Arjun;ha aur hum sab bhi jayenge milne taki she doesn't feel her father's absence specially sanyukta and rd!!she is very fond of them too!!!
Preeti;no no !!!i will shift to Jaipur!!my aunt's house..
Vd;no!!u cme wid us!!hume nana nani banne ka kabhi mauka milega ya nhi yeh to nhi pata ,pari se hi sahi!!
Parth looked away and vids pressed his hands while odrs looked confused...
Preeti;per...pari??
Sandhir:hum hai na!!!!!dey both smiled and hugged preeti ...



humph...finally ended !!sorry again and thanks again for liking dis!!!
next mat puch na kab !!!kyuki abhi sirf durga puja khatam huyi aur lakshmi aj aur kal hai phir kaunsa chala ayega pata nhi!!!!i will try to update soon...kal miserans and row!!!pakka!!!abhi i have to go and pms kal !!!kal subah subah puja hai!!!bye bye!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres!!

lovely... kya flashback tha.. hehe.. randhir ne apne tie se sanyu ka muh band kiya!!! 😆
and preeti.. wah!! salutes to her.. awesome... 😊
and now even vardhan knows how arpita is... awww.. tho vidarth ho jaayega... 😊

on the whole it was an awesome update!!!!!
Edited by samyukthakrish - 11 years ago

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