Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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barsana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

the story is getting better & better...👍🏼...enjoying it & waiting...😉

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Param

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

oh god superb part!! 😃

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

fabulous update

loved the phone conversation

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Arjuhisis

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

lovely update smita

waiting for the teej

rashmi, 🤗

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DDC1

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

You are killing me Smitar. Goonda Singh Raizada indeed.

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Smita, you're on a roll 😆

The names you're coming up with are hysterical 🤣

Bechara Arnavji, hasn't been able to get a word in edgeways!

Teej

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

simply adorable to find khushi calling arnav with all sorts of name 😆😉

love it already

waiting for teej special😉

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addictedx53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Came across your works yesterday & could not resist reading them almost at a stretch! Cute, halka phulka romance between this evergreen couple is so sweet without any negative undertones. Is any negativity it doesn't last beyond the first section!

Binding all these stories is the wit...sometimes I couldn't help bursting into a stupid grin! Feel in a good space when I realize I'm pretty much updated at a time when you are consistently posting new sections! Great!