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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: Viji79
Smita help up with work
Readers are going berserk

Is khushi ready for the killer smirk

Saying yes to ASR has it's perk

Uthra...

That was so sweet... a lovely way to tell someone you love their writing.👏👏👏

Edited by rulama - 10 years ago

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segad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#562

Smitaji

The last section was some of your best work yet. so well written that I think almost everyone saw it happening on their mind's screen.⭐️

I am trying to keep count of how many different names she comes up with for him, i think i am up to 7 now but i could be off. will reread to confirm.

great job!

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smitar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: rulama

Uthra...
That was so sweet... a lovely way to tell someone you love their writing.👏👏👏

Edited by smitar - 10 years ago

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: segad
Smitaji
The last section was some of your best work yet. so well written that I think almost everyone saw it happening on their mind's screen.⭐️

I am trying to keep count of how many different names she comes up with for him, i think i am up to 7 now but i could be off. will reread to confirm.

great job!