Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Belated Happy Onam Smita and Rash ! 😊

And am extremely sorry about not commenting .. Wasn't around during the weekend. But this is another wonderful addition ! Simply frank and brutally honest and I apparently love the positive Shyam ;) Arnav's feelings for Khushi .. Absolutely intense ! And also his stance on letting Anjali live her life .. Perfect ! Kudos :D

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Glad that Arnav finally Anjali to live her life.

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

wow!! i really loved it...

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Love your new tryst, it would be interesting if Shyam makes Arnav marry Khushi as part of his repentance !!

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Finally Arnav is talking some sense. Nice update.

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Awesome parts Smita!!

Loved the way Arnav stood his ground and told Mami and Nani, and Anjali that he will not interfere in her life. She needs to stand on her own and handle her marriage. She is mature enough to get married, but not independent enough to handle her life?! What is she, twelve? 🥱

"Chotey, bring your Jiju back. Make everything as perfect as it was before. You will do this for your Di, won't you?" Anjali pouted." l feel like slapping the silly pout off her face!

Shyam is right. What if the girl involved was someone who wouldn't have thought twice before ruining Shyam's reputation? Then Anjali's state would have been one to watch. I'm not a sadist though 😛

I wonder how Arnav will rectify this. It's sure an uphill task.

Loved it ! Looking forward to the next update :)

Thanks for the email Rashmi :) x

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

It was worth the wait but I am hungry for more!!! 😳

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Yay finally we got an update. ... the update was just amazing. ... what is the use in feeling bad after hurting khushi... and seriously I just hate this anjali.. she is sooo stupid. . 😆 😆 I have never seen someone like her.. so annoying. .