Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: toeditor

[DIV]Same here...I have already started keeping khushi
Aur Maine start ki he Finding Khushi.

/DIV]

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imma chek

@imanech

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

amazing stories that you write
everytime I found myself waiting for the next

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Arnav shud be sorry and he is.. I liked what Shyam asked Anjali.. 🥱 She shud have asked Shyam first before involving Arnav and Khushi.. And now Arnav has come to know how good Khushi is.. Waiting for sparks to fly..😳

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

hey when is the update buddy? y is it taking so long?

Am so desperate to read!!

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: deepa.e
hey when is the update buddy? y is it taking so long?
Am so desperate to read!!

Uffo!

Tum bhi naa Deepa...😆

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: rulama

Uffo!
Tum bhi naa Deepa...😆

Kya karo mei di?? u know me na!!

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
whats up smita and rashmi

As simple as busy Priya...😉

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

This new story by you Smitaji is damn Good! ^_^
Shyam as a +ve & sensible character is indeed a sight to watch ..
& Both the Raizada siblings as dumbheads ! Dah! *Sigh

Specially fr anjali ..
She'z the dumbest female I've evr seen !! -_-
Making her lil brother the pawn of her hands !! -__-

ThankGod, Arnav learnt the truth before it bcame too late ..
& Shyam went wid givin away a Useful threat to tht dumbscum !! .__.

Waitingg to see hw arnav manofies khushi !!
This piece is sure gonna be my present fav of all the fics of Ipk forum recently !! <3