(ON HOLD)Vidarth FF: Sinner and the Saint .. Imp Note Page 67 - Page 46

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love

Awesome n lovely update...


Hey Bushraa.. M glad that you loved it.. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

read all the parts in one go...
this is amazing..

nd damn funny too..

loving it..
update soon..
n do pm me plz


Hey.. 😃.. Wowyy.. Its awesome to know that you loved it and found it funny..

Yes will update by Thursday and will PM as well as scrap you.. 😃

PS:- Lovely DP.. Shantanu.. Aaah.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
areyy yaar!!...i missed two parts together...next time pls do me the pm...pls pls iss bechari bachhi ko mat tadpana aur pm kar dena

now coming to the story...lets start with parth
so he got a new job ...picking vidushi up😆😆😆...from now vids will call him insted of calling a taxi and ask"pls mujhe shoping complx tak chod do"...a perfect boyfriend cum personal vehicle...hehehe
here again a new name to his already long list... SPIDY...well he deserve dis...ghadi ghadi pipe pe chad jata hai😃😃...and top of all randhirs song...hilarious...awesome combination👍🏼..i cant stop laughing...kya halat ho gyi h bechare ki...even juniors is making fun of him...
haye ram ...colie bana dia bechare ko😲...🤣...hmm unique colie...luggage k sath sath owner ko bhi utha leta h...
yeh to hadd ho gyi...gender bhi change kar diye...this what called PYAR KE SIDE EFFECTS🤣

Now coming to maya...nowa days she doing unexpecting things...cant belive the dean of FITE noticing their blushes😲...one song strikes my mind...ishq chupta nhi chupane se...
more over she is making blush meter...🤣🤣...i suggest her to show the blush meter along with annual progress reports to the authority...im sure then n there they will change the name FITE to FILR ...FOUNDER INSTITUTE OF LOVE AND ROMANCE...
oh my god!!!! she put accusations on vardhan of ogling the laptop...😆😆...im going to get a attack out of laughter...
people over there i warn you to hide your laptops...cause aajkal laptops ki izzat khtre me h...now i knw the actual consequences of high difference in male and female sex ratio...hehehe

oh meli pyali vids..want to go to a date...aur ye zalim kashyap kuch samajhta hi nhi😡
"main dream team ka captain hu"...hahaha...yeh kaisa logic tha...he seriously need a lesson on how to ask a girl for a date...what if dream team members come to his date and claim"if you are dream team captain then we are the members and we have an equal share in the date" ...tab sare captaincy ka kabada ho jayega...
yeh vids ...a correct punishment for parth...slapping on his butt...i was giggling like hell..
and her tactics of making him say those words...uff... i just loved it...she rocks yaar!!
CHINESE DANDIYA🤣🤣🤣...that was most hilarious...i wish you could hear how hard i patted my seat out of my laughter...and my sis was throwing me a you-need-a-psychiaritist wala look...

and lastly their super duper hott session in washroom...in your words ye wala shagun tha after the amezing part...loved it so much..
i was thinking winter is about to arrive and your stuffs are hot enough to keep ourself warm...so people should replace their room heaters with your hott stuffs...full on entertainment plus electricity bill will be reduced..what say??😉
KEEP WRITING MORE..

it was FATAFATI👏👏
LOVE
SUPRABHA
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Posted: 10 years ago
Will give a long review tomorrow Pakka...
Well for u to know I loved this fic... I love this fic a lot... Hell lot...

I especially loved the funny scenes dude...

Kal Pakka wada wala review...🤣

Love
Ayesha(so in this way you'll know my name)🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: senasenapati

areyy yaar!!...i missed two parts together...next time pls do me the pm...pls pls iss bechari bachhi ko mat tadpana aur pm kar dena


now coming to the story...lets start with parth
so he got a new job ...picking vidushi up😆😆😆...from now vids will call him insted of calling a taxi and ask"pls mujhe shoping complx tak chod do"...a perfect boyfriend cum personal vehicle...hehehe
here again a new name to his already long list... SPIDY...well he deserve dis...ghadi ghadi pipe pe chad jata hai😃😃...and top of all randhirs song...hilarious...awesome combination👍🏼..i cant stop laughing...kya halat ho gyi h bechare ki...even juniors is making fun of him...
haye ram ...colie bana dia bechare ko😲...🤣...hmm unique colie...luggage k sath sath owner ko bhi utha leta h...
yeh to hadd ho gyi...gender bhi change kar diye...this what called PYAR KE SIDE EFFECTS🤣

Now coming to maya...nowa days she doing unexpecting things...cant belive the dean of FITE noticing their blushes😲...one song strikes my mind...ishq chupta nhi chupane se...
more over she is making blush meter...🤣🤣...i suggest her to show the blush meter along with annual progress reports to the authority...im sure then n there they will change the name FITE to FILR ...FOUNDER INSTITUTE OF LOVE AND ROMANCE...
oh my god!!!! she put accusations on vardhan of ogling the laptop...😆😆...im going to get a attack out of laughter...
people over there i warn you to hide your laptops...cause aajkal laptops ki izzat khtre me h...now i knw the actual consequences of high difference in male and female sex ratio...hehehe

oh meli pyali vids..want to go to a date...aur ye zalim kashyap kuch samajhta hi nhi😡
"main dream team ka captain hu"...hahaha...yeh kaisa logic tha...he seriously need a lesson on how to ask a girl for a date...what if dream team members come to his date and claim"if you are dream team captain then we are the members and we have an equal share in the date" ...tab sare captaincy ka kabada ho jayega...
yeh vids ...a correct punishment for parth...slapping on his butt...i was giggling like hell..
and her tactics of making him say those words...uff... i just loved it...she rocks yaar!!
CHINESE DANDIYA🤣🤣🤣...that was most hilarious...i wish you could hear how hard i patted my seat out of my laughter...and my sis was throwing me a you-need-a-psychiaritist wala look...

and lastly their super duper hott session in washroom...in your words ye wala shagun tha after the amezing part...loved it so much..
i was thinking winter is about to arrive and your stuffs are hot enough to keep ourself warm...so people should replace their room heaters with your hott stuffs...full on entertainment plus electricity bill will be reduced..what say??😉
KEEP WRITING MORE..

it was FATAFATI👏👏
LOVE
SUPRABHA


Hey Suprabha.. 🤗.. Thanks for such a lovely comment.. 😃
Oh sorry yaar.. Tab tum meri buddy list mein nahi thi.. But ab ho.. Mere har FF aur OS ka PM aayenga tumhe.. Can't miss out on your comments.. 😳

Hehehe.. Well Parth ki dolein sholein kab kaam aayengi.. LOL So I gave him the best task in the world.. 🤣🤣🤣

LOL Jab tak Dean ka haath sir par na ho.. College mein itne CCTVs ke beech romance karna impossible hai.. 🤣🤣

Hehehe yeahh.. Vardhan is always in front of his lappy.. So had to point that out.. LOL.. 🤣

Heheh .. "Dream team captain" waala line.. Er... (Andaz Apna Apna style mein bole to) "Lagta hai Kaccha khilaadi hai.. " 🤣🤣

Heheh.. ooohhh that spiderman song.. LOL.. I LOVE IT.. 🤣🤣🤣. Jo show mein dekhne ko nahi milta. I put it here.. LOL.. All what I want .. Vidarth.. and a happy leg pulling RANDHIR.. 🤣🤣

Heheh.. I know butt slapping.. It was the sadist me.. 🤣🤣..
Hehe thats a perfect song to get someone irritated and spill the beans.. Yeahh VIDUSHI rocks.. 😆😆😆

HAHAHAH... I wish could show you how much I laughed like a maniac when that comparison came in my mind.. But then you banging your seat and getting that look.. MAKES THIS WORTH IT.. 🤣🤣

Hehe.. hopefully aage ke parts bhi achhe lagenge tumhe.. 😳😳😳

PS:- Your comments are FATAFATI... 👏👏👏

Love,
Chandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BeyondDreams

Will give a long review tomorrow Pakka...
Well for u to know I loved this fic... I love this fic a lot... Hell lot...

I especially loved the funny scenes dude...

Kal Pakka wada wala review...🤣

Love
Ayesha(so in this way you'll know my name)🤣


Hey Ayesha,

Sabse pehle to Welcome to this Fic.. I am so glad you gave it a shot.. 🤗

Even happier that you wrote a comment.. 🤗

And happiest that you used so many rollies.. LOL.. Mission successful 🤣🤣

Detailed review - No worries take your own sweet time.. 😆

Have sent you buddy request .. Please accept it.. Will PM you the next part.. 😊

Love,
Chandni (This way you'll know my name too... 😉)
Edited by Moony87 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally read last three parts together.
OMG...What is going on.

Well Vidarth is doing their stuffs as expected but Maya gave me the attack. What is she up to?

Vardhan is loosing to someone...interesting very interesting.

Randhir-Jiggy they made a Parth-Teasing-Team? Hilarious and naughty.

I so missed this.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

Finally read last three parts together.

OMG...What is going on.

Well Vidarth is doing their stuffs as expected but Maya gave me the attack. What is she up to?

Vardhan is loosing to someone...interesting very interesting.

Randhir-Jiggy they made a Parth-Teasing-Team? Hilarious and naughty.

I so missed this.


Hellooo.. After a Looong time.. 😃🤗

I am so glad that you missed this FF.. Same way I have missed your comments.. 😆😆😆

Heheh.. You'll come to know what is she upto as the story progresses.. 😆😆

Yep.. Ser ko savaa ser mil gayee.. 😆😆

Heheh.. High time they do some normal stuff... Randhir-Jiggy.. 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Chandini,
Omg!!!!!!
Wow!!!!!!
I m completely blown away!!!!
I m.totally LMAO N ROFL !!!!!!
This is definitely d best Rom-Com FF ever !!!!!!!
It has love n hilarious moments!!!!!
I blushed n laughed like a maniac (Lol...My Baby bro thinks I have gone mad...Hehe)
U were right...Totally I not only liked it BT hell I loved it to d core.
Totally in love with this FF..Chalo 1 aur FF mil gaya stalk karne k liye;)
Bdw I loved each n every chapter v much!!!
Loved dat Blush meter n Varya convo...Oh n e1 that spidy thing...Lol...I was hysterical!!!!!!!!
I had a ear to ear smile plastered on my face d entire tym i was reading it :)
Bdw Tysm 4 writing it...I had a bad start to my morning...I woke up with a killing head-ache,blocked nose n high fever n not to forget d crappy specail epi of yday bt u made me forget abt it all...I enjoyed ur FF much!!!!!!
Loved it : *
U rock girl!!!!!!!!!
Kash!!!!!!!! Vidarth aise hote show mein bt Alas!!!!!
I have given up on d idea of Vidarth in d show BT i sure as hell enjoy them a lottt in ur FF's:)
Love them here !!!!!!!
N bdw That watchman Kaka thing was also awesome n yupnhow cn I forget d teasing of Jiggy N Randhir lol!!!!!!
They Danced on dat song n Rd's that dialogue" Yeh Angry young man se Mr.Gladrags mein transform hogaya hai" i was holding my stomach!!!!!!
Maja agaya yaar!!!!!!
Dil khush kar diya :)
N yup...I really like d possessive n kinky Parth.
God!!!!!! Their make-out in storeroom was hot as hell!!!!!
Infact all their make-outs r ;)*Dnt worry yaar main bigdi hui hi hoon*
N That forced confessio...Smarty pants Vidushi ;)
N 1 of d best part abt this FF...Dur dur tak no Sanyukta Devi ka giving earful to Parth n making him realize!!!!!!!! N no auperhuman task!!!!!
Its an awesome light -hearted herartfelt story...NOW I noe dat all Engineers write equally well as much as they noe their technical things :)
Chandini dekh abhi Diwali khatm hogayi toh jaldi ss jaldi update kar is fic ko!!!!!!!
PlZzz...
its a request.
Love you loads!!!!!!!!!
Dil khush kar diya tere is fic ne :)

P.S. V V V V sorry 4 commenting this late actually family functions n due to Diwali tym hi nahi mila :)
Sowie :(

Love
-Pihu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by Moony87 - 10 years ago

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