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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update,Moony.😃
The Spiderman and Mary Jane reference was just so..cute.
The comment from the juniors "Mary Jane ko dhoondhne jaa rahe hain." 😆was like an icing on the cake.
He is making it so evident that he is in love with this girl. Hopelessly in Love.
His roommates,juniors and even the dean was making fun of him🤣.Bechara.

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Posted: 11 years ago
THIS CHANGED TO A FF!?!?! BEST NEWS EVERY

As you know my hand is now completely fine so i'm back giving a nice long comment like before 😆

... i had to read the first few lines about 50 times before i could stop laughing... "Transformers 5" 🤣 you should really try stand up comedy because you are seriously funny. And Parth's checking himself out in the mirror? Isne toh complete 180 turn mara and I'm loving it!!

Parth and Vidushi have a date? That's the only explanation nah... this is probably going to annoy you but i love guessing possible storylines... so lets see, maybe Sandhir and the gang stalk Vidarth on their date and find out they're a couple... or, maybe Parth gets jealous when some waiter stars flirting with Vids... or maybe it's the other way around... or maybe they just go on a super cute date and have lots of romantic moments...

Oh and i absolutely love the way Vids stutters when she says Parth's name in front of the Dean...
"P..Parth will continue now in the lab" 😆

Awww Parthu's fussing over his clothes... can he get any more cute? NOOO PARTH DON'T SHAVE (am I the only one who has come to love his stubble wala look?)... love the way he's so jittery about everything... it shows how nervous he is and how hard he's trying to impress Vidushi.

JIGGY IS ONTO VIDARTH 😆 he already sense something is up... ahahaha who knew that even boys asked each other's advice on what clothes to wear... really like the friendship trio here with Randhir, Parth and Jiggy... I've always loved bromances and I really wish they explored this one more on the show.

"Black" ... "Blue" 🤣 if i was Parth i would have shot them both by now... and judging by his reaction I'm pretty sure he was thinking the same thing... threw the black shirt matlab he wore the blue kya? or is he just walking around FITE shirtless

Again with the awesome magical moments of yours... this time it's the way you had Parth say Vidushi's name in his mind and the same for Vidushi... really adore this, it makes the whole reading experience even more surreal when you add small moments like that.

Yes Parthu you are the Spiderman to her Mary Jane... a match made in superhero heaven!! Uh oh angry wala Parth is back again... bichare students.

So the date wala idea of mine was a complete flop... but now I think Vidushi is going out of college to pay Parth's doc and he will follow her there and find out the truth... at first he'll be upset and angry, which is expected because it's parth, but eventually he'll just fall more in love with her because they're Vidarth and they're meant to be 😃

"Mary Jane ko dhoondhe jaa rahe hain" 🤣 again with the comedy... you're really too good. MAYA IS ONTO VIDARTH TOO!!! It's so obvious to everyone they should just come out with it and say that they're a couple! AND HE BLURTS OUT VIDUSHI!!!

So cute yaar, Parth is concerned for Vidushi since she's coming back so late... ab aisa ladke kahan pe milte hai yaar, mujhe bhi ek chahiye. "Responsibility" hmmm, just as a classmate or?? (loving this adorable and flustered Parth)

"Parth fought with her mentally" poor Parth yaar, Vidushi ke pyaar mein yeh ab pagal bhi ho gaya 😆 BACCHE??? ab yeh kahan se tapak gaye yaar... all my theories are wrong so i'm just going to stop guessing... hats off to your originality though, you have some new and interesting concepts.

Vidushi's surprisingly good with kids... who knew she could be such a gentle mother-type figure also... if only Parth was here to see this 😉 Really he thinks of Aprita... I'm sorry to all the Aprita-Parth shippers, but unfortunately she's gone, and Parth has someone really amazing waiting for him so he should really move on (Now i've started talking about the show but you get my point.)

And Vidushi's made the pain go away... like i said before, perfect for each other! HAHAH overprotective Parth is glaring at poor kids for laughing at Vidushi... tooo cute!! Parth giggling 😆 I imagine it as a more manly laugh or something... now i can't get the image of Parth giggling like a girl out of my head 😛

"He again blindfolded her" i've got goosebumps on my skin already from the anticipation. This is the moment I've been waiting for, your infamous romance scenes (I would seriously do anything for these).

NO WORDS... *BOWS DOWN* YOU ARE GENIUS!!! I never thought that washing hands could be so romantic and SENSUOUS!! Once again my mind went places it really shouldn't have but DAMN i can't believe what I just read... which is why I'm going to read it again and again and again till all the tingling sensations inside of me disappear..

Wait, why is Vids walking? I thought the whole point of Parth's visit was to pick her up so she doesn't have to walk alone late at night... oh wait, there he is 😛 casually following her along. OH MY GOODNESS... "I told the Dean that I will pick you up" he means literally pick up... like lift... off the ground... onto his shoulders... PICK UP 🤣

Awww his rant about all the teasing and his "heart attack" is super duper adorable. Why aren't all boys like "your" Parth 😭

HE KISSES HER AND LEAVES?? NO I WANT MORE!!! CHANDU WRITE ME MORE... ABHI!!!

Seriously, though please update soon... you've literally left me on a Vidarth high and I need more fuel to feed my addiction... toh jaldi update karo please!!

Just in case you didn't get it from my comments... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT!!!

- Rae

P.S. I'm still waiting for a chapter dedicated to me for all the amazing comments i give you 😛

Edited by sweetbutbroken - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
what was that!!! loved the cuteness of vidarth yaar i was smiling all throught this update ... the dress troubles !!!!
transformer 5!!! :D
mayas taunts :P :D
spiderman ! lol!
and vids ... i loved how you made parth realise that there are a lots of faces of vids yet to be seen !!! and our mr.saint seems a bit too fond of spanking,aint it? :D but i am not complaining and by the likes of it,nor is vids!
all in all too good !
cant wait for the next part~

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Posted: 11 years ago
😳

Originally posted by: Moony87

Sorry.. fir se late ho gaye hum.. 😆 .. Now this update is for DEVILIAAA.. 😉.. Hope you love it..😳

Ash - Maaf kar de for getting late. And Naaazzz (arshisfan) - Hope this time no loopholes.. 😆😆 Sorry for late review Moons!!

Blind Trust

Two heads kept moving to and fro from right to left with their mouth hung open. Their eyes went wider and wider tracing the path of the object moving in front of them.
"Randhir bhai... Ye hum kya dekh rahe hain?" The first head whispered.
  • "Transformers 5" The second whispered back.😆 Transformers??
"Hain?".. "Aur nahi to kya? Transformers 5 hi to hai.. Ye saala Angry Young Man se Mr. Gladrags mein transform mein ho gaya hai raaton raat." 😆 Mr.Gladrags?? Vidu ne jaadu kar diya!!
Both the heads giggled as they saw Parth checking himself out in the mirror. The giggles turned into stunned disbelief as he started fixing every strand of his hair.😆
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"Mam Please.. I'll be back by 11:30 PM. I have already given you all the details." Vidushi pleaded to Dean. "Hmm.. Ok. I want you in the college premises by 11:20 and IN.MY.CABIN by 11:30. Is that clear?" came her stern voice.
"Yes Mam. Thank you so much." Vidushi squealed with excitement. Turning around she rushed towards the door. "Vidushi", came the Dean's voice again.
"Yes Mam, I have already finished the lab work assigned to me. P..Parth will continue now in the lab." Vidushi turned around and said in one go assuming her query.
"What I wanted to know was why you stole the gadgets in the first place? What you are doing right now to repay, you could have done this before as well?" She asked.
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"Tchh... Black or Blue. Shit.. Kya din hai. Na kapde set ho rahe hain na baal. Shave karoon kya?" Parth rattled his brain looking at himself in the mirror and scratching his stubble.
"Abe, juniors ke extra lab sessions lene jaa raha hai ya ladki dekhne" Randhir's taunt broke his thoughts. Parth almost choked at the word "ladki" as last night replayed in his mind. "Shit, do they ... Idiot hai tu Parth... Freak.. Sanyuktaa... Kaustuki.. they might have heard 😆😆😆
Moving towards the cupboard, not meeting his roommates' eyes, he asked.. "K.. Kya Matlab?"
"Matlab ye ke jitni der se tu cupboard aur mirror ke beech up-down kar raha hai.. Utni der mein to main 3 baar nahaake 4 baar taiyyaar ho gaya hota" Randhir rolled his eyes. Jiggy chuckled.
"Thank God", Parth relaxed and rummaged his cupboard again."Haan Parth bhai.. Itna to kabhi taiyyar nahi hote aap. Chakkar kya hai?" Jiggy teased.
"Chakkar ye hai, ke samjh nahi aa raha hai mujhe... ye pehnoo ya ye. Chalo tum dono bataao." Parth asked them, holding a black shirt against the blue shirt he was already wearing.😆 Look at Parth! Asking advice from RD AND JIGGI!!😆
"Black"... "Blue" came the responses. Twitching his upper lip, Parth closed his eyes holding himself back from strangling both his roommates, till they gave a common answer. Opening his eyes he glared at both of them. Raising his eyebrow, he threw the black shirt on Jiggy's face and stormed out of the room muttering a curt "Thankss". Good for nothing fellas, he cursed mentally reaching the lab.😆
"Noo. Not again.. NOW, why are you not here? Did I go overboard yesterday? Is she avoiding me? Of course, she is avoiding me." Parth concluded as he was again standing alone in the lab and the table had all the welding material set up for him. "Vidushi" Parth's mind spoke.
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"Parth", Vidushi's mind said. The answer to both the questions was "Parth". She did all that for him. And what she was doing now was again for him. Why she stole? She couldn't lose him. So, Desperate times desperate measures. Why is she doing all this now? She can't afford to lose him now. So, Right times right measures. But Dean won't understand this. So, Vidushi just looked down standing there in complete silence.
😕
"Hmm.. Leave. Be back on time." The dean dismissed her. Leaving the office, Vidushi rushed to reach the place ASAP.
"Great. So now I have to climb pipes for her every day. What does she think? That I am Spiderman and she is Mary Jane? Awesome Parth.. Now you are talking like her." Parth angrily muttered to himself, while showing the students the proper way of welding.😆😆😆 Loved this reference. Mary Jane!!
"Spiderman to nahi.. Lekin Sir Dr. Octopus ki tarah behave kar rahe hain. Akele akele baat kar rahe hain" One of the students whispered. And the gang started giggling. The giggles distracted Parth from his distraction and he looked up with a murderous look.😆😆
"Daant andar karlo nahi to INHE weld kar doonga. Take the metal pieces and start the work on your tables." He warned them through gritted teeth. The giggling stopped immediately and everyone rushed to their tables like scared chicken. Sparing them one last glare, Parth walked towards the window to get some fresh air. And that upped his Blood Pressure by notches.😆
"Vidushi", he said horrified as he saw her going out of the college. "SHIT", he shouted and turned around.
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This is SO not happening, he mentally cursed, as the entire batch of students looked at him with horrified expressions. Clearing his throat, he said "What? Keep working. I have some important task at hand. Will be back in 10 minutes.", and walked towards the door with as steady pace as he could. Behind his back, the students looked at each other, flickering their eyebrows. The moment Parth left the room, one guy commented "Mary Jane ko dhoondhne jaa rahe hain." And the class howled with wolf laughs.
"I HEARD THAT YOU MORONS" Parth roared from the corridor. The lab fell into muffled giggles.
"A.. AA.. Language Mr. Kashyap" He stopped dead as there stood Maya clearly miffed with his outburst. And that made Parth blush. The same words which he had used for Vidushi were now being thrown at him now.

"I didn't know that a warning is supposed to make you BLUSH, Mr. Kashyap. Missing someone?" she inquired.
"Vidushi", Parth blurted out.
"What?" .. "No.. I mean I was looking for Vidushi, Mam. I needed her help in the lab. I can't find her Mam. Er.. Do you have any idea where she is?" Parth coaxed her. It was Saturday and students were allowed to go out but only with permission. Sure she would have asked the Dean.
"Hmm.. Well.. She is out for some important work. She won't be back till 11.30." With that she turned back to go to her cabin.
"11.30.. YOU MEAN 11.30 PM?" Parth screamed horrified.
"Oh yes, Mr. Kashyap. Its 12:00 PM now.. So obviously 11.30 now, would be directly in the night, I suppose" she turned around amused.
"Well.. Yeah.. Umm.. Mam.. If you don't mind can I pick her up from the place she has gone?" Parth asked. Maya narrowed her eyes. "Actually, I'll be going to buy some stuff for myself. So I can pick her up. It's not so safe at that hour. Plus she is my classmate as well as colleague. So it's my responsibility." He again blushed as the last word again reminded him of the other night.
"I didn't know that a responsibility is also supposed to make you BLUSH, Mr. Kashyap. Fine, now BOTH of you be on time. She should be in my office by 11:30. Come to my cabin. I'll give you the address."
😳? Was giggling again!! HAHA! Back at you Parthos!
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Taking the address, Parth rushed to the door. "Parth", came the Dean's voice again. "I can see that how eager you are to fulfill your responsibilities, but I would appreciate a bit more if you first complete the extra lab sessions and then go in the evening. I hope this should not hamper your jumping spirits right now." She smirked.
"Of course Mam! I was going to the lab only. Thank you Mam." Parth managed to speak amidst all the embarrassment.
"Vidushi.. What a day you have made this to be. I should have smacked your other hip as well that night. Mujhe bataa ke nahi jaa sakti thi" Parth fought with her mentally as he walked back to the lab.
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"OKKK Enoughhh.!!" Vidushi roared at the top of her voice. "Bachhe hain ya monsters. 4 ghanton mein naak mein dum kardi hai. No wonder, they are paying me heavy for babysitting these devils." Vidushi cursed looking at the twins creating ruckus in the room.
"Dekho... Agar abhi so jaaoge na to hum log shaam ko game khelenge" Vidushi tried to bribe them.
"Hum game hi to khel rahe hain" One of the twins said as he hit the other with the pillow again.
Holding them both she said, "Garden mein khelenge. Blindfold waala game. Main aankhon par patti baandhoongi aur tum logon ko pakdoongi. Okk?" she again bribed them.
"YAYYY.. Ok Ok" Both the kids jumped and finally lay down on their beds. "Finally, at least 2 ghante ke liye to shaanti hui." Vidushi breathed a sigh of relief as she cleared the mess the boys had created.
Looved this part. Too adorable!
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Parth checked his watch as he stood in front of the backyard of the posh bungalow. 6.45 PM. "Watchman se kya kahoonga. Obviously he won't allow any other person. Aaah forget it", he thought. Seeing that the coast is clear, he climbed the wall and jumped in to the backyard. Sneaking towards the garden in the front he hid behind the wall. His legs froze at the sight in front of him.
Memories of him and Arpita rushed to his mind as he saw Vidushi blindfolded infront of him. And then her voice bought him out of the painful reverie. "This is not fairrr. OUCHHH...!!.. Ek baar pakad lene do mujhe, tum dono ki khair nahi" Vidushi screamed in frustration as one of the twins playfully hit her on her waist. Shaking his head, Parth giggled as he forgot everything and enjoyed the scene in front of him. As they moved more inside the garden, Parth tiptoed into the house.😆😆
The next 15 minutes were a roller coaster ride for the twins and Parth. Vidushi got hold of the pillar, trees but not the boys. They pulled the hem of her t-shirt and hit on her waist to tease her even more. Her "What the HELL?" made the boys laugh like maniacs. Parth couldn't remember the last time he had laughed so much. Clutching his stomach, he bent down as it hurt now from so much laughter.😆
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His eyes snapped open as he heard Vidushi's scream, "AAAHHH". He looked up and the garden fell into deathly silence. "Vidushi. SHIT" he whispered to himself.😉 concerned are we?
And then, the garden roared with laughter. The twins rolled on the floor, pointing fingers at her. Parth glared at the boys for laughing at her, but the moment Vidushi turned around he cupped his mouth and giggled uncontrollably with eyes tight shut. She had fallen down and was smudged with mud. And boy, she was a sight to watch.😆😆
Taking off the blindfold, she looked at the boys and started giggling as she saw herself in the glass door. And that stunned Parth. The girl who never took any comment from anyone in the college was taking up a funny situation on herself, and on top of that enjoying it. Indeed, he needed to know a lot about her. No wonder, she intrigued him.😳
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"Ok.. Very funny. Chalo now go to your room. It's dark. Main ye sab clean karke aati hoon." Vidushi told them. The boys ran inside giggling and Vidushi made her way to the washroom. Keeping the blindfold on the basin, she opened the tap.
"What?.. Who the hell?" .. "Shhh.. It's me".. Parth whispered in her ear from behind her, as he again blindfolded her.
"Parth.. " She gasped. "Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho" She asked horrified. Nuzzling his nose on her nape, he whispered, "Do you trust me?". Vidushi gulped and exhaled slowly.
Kissing her earlobe, he chuckled "I guess this means YES". Tracing his index finger down her arms, he took her hands in his palms. "Don't move" he again whispered as Vidushi titled more towards him. Taking the hand wash in his hand, he rubbed their foamy palms together. Vidushi shivered as he moved his hands slowly up the elbow and down to her hands. The torture ended as he finally cleaned their hands with water and dried them with the towel.😳
Turning her around towards him, he whispered against her lips "Few more minutes". Vidushi's smiled, as he softly wiped the mud from her forehead, nose and cheeks with the foam and then with his wet fingers. Her breathe hitched as he moved his thumb along her lips. "Parth" she breathed. "Bas ho gaya", he said and dabbed the towel softly on her face.
Catching her breath, she moved her hands up to remove the blind fold. Stopping her midway, he put her hands down again. Cupping her face, he kissed softly on her forehead. "Thanks Vids", he said as he softly kissed her cheeks. "For what?" Vidushi whispered. "For making me so happy today." He said stopping against her lips. Sensing his hot breath, she leaned in.
"Parth", Vidushi opened the blindfold not feeling his lips. He was gone.
😳
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Walking towards the college, on the deserted road, she cursed herself for being so stupid. "What were you thinking Vidushi. They offered to drop you back to college and you refused. Ab itni raat ko auto kahaan se milega?"
"Why didn't you tell me about this job?" Parth's voice made her jump as she turned around to see him leaning along the street light. Feeling relaxed, she said "Wo.. umm.. I thought ke I should tell you. But then I thought.. Ke kya zaroorat hai. I mean I have to repay the money anyhow. There was no point dragging yo..."
"PARTH KASHYAPPP... I WILL KILL YOU.. PUT ME DOWN. YOU MORON.. YOU JERK" Vidushi screeched as Parth had flung her on his left shoulder.
😳
"I TOLD THE DEAN THAT I WILL PICK YOU UP" he laughed like a maniac.
😆
"ASSHOLEEE!!!", Struggling violently on his shoulder, she hit his back hard with her fist.
😆
"ARRGHHH... STOP IT", he roared and smacked her right hip hard.
😳
"OUCHHH.. HOW DARE YOUUU... PUT ME DOWN. YOU SCOUNDREL."
😳
"STOP THIS ABUSIVE LANGUAGE"

"STOP BEHAVING LIKE AN APE. WHAT DID I DO THIS TIME NOW?"
"WHAT DID YOU DOOO? YOU SHOULD HAVE TOLD ME ABOUT THIS JOB. MY DAY STARTED LIKE HELL. MY ROOMMATES, THEY MOCKED ME. THOSE BLOODY JUNIORS WERE MAKING FUN OF ME. AND THEN I SAW YOU. I AM JUST FREAKING 19 AND I GOT A MINI HEART ATTACK WHEN I WATCHED YOU GOING OUT. I THOUGHT YOU LEFT. ON TOP OF THAT, EVEN THE DEAN MOCKED ME. SO YOU RIGHTLY DESERVE THAT SMACK. AND WHAT WERE YOU THINKING COMING BACK ALONE AT THIS HOUR?" He roared and smacked her again harder this time.
😳😳😳 Kinky Parth! Loving it!!
"Youuu bloody .." she was again stopped as Parth had put her down and kissed her lips softly. 😳
"Now, that's a good night." Parth grinned and ran towards the gates leaving behind a flustered Vidushi rubbing her butt.😆


Phew.. Sorry for being late.. Plz comment karnaaa.. 😆


Ahhh!! It's 11!! I finally mangaed to review!
Sorry for being late! Mom had banned me from laptop!
Gtg will be on AT and scrap from cell?
Love you!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anuaskif

"Hain?".. "Aur nahi to kya? Transformers 5 hi to hai.. Ye saala Angry Young Man se Mr. Gladrags mein transform mein ho gaya hai raaton raat."

🤣

And Maya's sense of humor... a fresh lease if life from her regular snobbish behaviour...

Very beautifully penned dear... Update soon


🤣🤣🤣🤣 I myself laughed whole time writing this.. 🤣

Yep, humour coming from a serious person with a poker face.. ITS THE BEST 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovearohi

awesome update
loved it dear
mujhe detail mein comment karna tha par xams h 🥱🥱
aur maine kuch nhi padha 😆
getting late
update asap
m so addicted to ur ff


Arohiii... 🤗 ... Now I wait for your comments..😃 Tujhe is FF ka addict banaane mein jo khushi mujhe mil rahi hai.. Waaah waaah.. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 ..

Jaldi exams do aur fir mujhe ek detail comment maangta.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --aimy--

Loved the update,Moony.😃
The Spiderman and Mary Jane reference was just so..cute.
The comment from the juniors "Mary Jane ko dhoondhne jaa rahe hain." 😆was like an icing on the cake.
He is making it so evident that he is in love with this girl. Hopelessly in Love.
His roommates,juniors and even the dean was making fun of him🤣.Bechara.


Aimy.. 😳

Hehe yeahh.. Pipe chadenga to yehich hoyenga... 🤣
Heheh... lab mein comments are the only good thing about college.. 🤣

LOL sab ne maar li bechaare ki.. 🤣🤣🤣

Ab ujdi dharti par ghaaans ug jaayegi achaanak se to sab notice karenge na.. 🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetbutbroken

THIS CHANGED TO A FF!?!?! BEST NEWS EVERY

As you know my hand is now completely fine so i'm back giving a nice long comment like before 😆

Yippieee..

... i had to read the first few lines about 50 times before i could stop laughing... "Transformers 5" 🤣 you should really try stand up comedy because you are seriously funny. And Parth's checking himself out in the mirror? Isne toh complete 180 turn mara and I'm loving it!!

LOL .. Well, thanks ... 😳😳😳 .. Filhaal to saara tadka IF ke liye hai.. 😆😆😆😆😆


Parth and Vidushi have a date? That's the only explanation nah... this is probably going to annoy you but i love guessing possible storylines... so lets see, maybe Sandhir and the gang stalk Vidarth on their date and find out they're a couple... or, maybe Parth gets jealous when some waiter stars flirting with Vids... or maybe it's the other way around... or maybe they just go on a super cute date and have lots of romantic moments...

Oh and i absolutely love the way Vids stutters when she says Parth's name in front of the Dean...
"P..Parth will continue now in the lab" 😆

LOUVEEE ho gaya hai ise to.. 😆😆😆


Awww Parthu's fussing over his clothes... can he get any more cute? NOOO PARTH DON'T SHAVE (am I the only one who has come to love his stubble wala look?)... love the way he's so jittery about everything... it shows how nervous he is and how hard he's trying to impress Vidushi.

Same here.. Stubble rocksss.. 😆😆😆

JIGGY IS ONTO VIDARTH 😆 he already sense something is up... ahahaha who knew that even boys asked each other's advice on what clothes to wear... really like the friendship trio here with Randhir, Parth and Jiggy... I've always loved bromances and I really wish they explored this one more on the show.

"Black" ... "Blue" 🤣 if i was Parth i would have shot them both by now... and judging by his reaction I'm pretty sure he was thinking the same thing... threw the black shirt matlab he wore the blue kya? or is he just walking around FITE shirtless

LOL he was already wearing the blue one.. 😃😃😃. Vidushi says .. "Shirtless Parth par Sadda HAQ hai".. 🤣🤣🤣

Again with the awesome magical moments of yours... this time it's the way you had Parth say Vidushi's name in his mind and the same for Vidushi... really adore this, it makes the whole reading experience even more surreal when you add small moments like that.

Thank you thank you.. M flattered. 😳

Yes Parthu you are the Spiderman to her Mary Jane... a match made in superhero heaven!! Uh oh angry wala Parth is back again... bichare students.

So the date wala idea of mine was a complete flop... but now I think Vidushi is going out of college to pay Parth's doc and he will follow her there and find out the truth... at first he'll be upset and angry, which is expected because it's parth, but eventually he'll just fall more in love with her because they're Vidarth and they're meant to be 😃

"Mary Jane ko dhoondhe jaa rahe hain" 🤣 again with the comedy... you're really too good. MAYA IS ONTO VIDARTH TOO!!! It's so obvious to everyone they should just come out with it and say that they're a couple! AND HE BLURTS OUT VIDUSHI!!!

Heheh yeah.. sab ne maar li bechaare ki.. 🤣

So cute yaar, Parth is concerned for Vidushi since she's coming back so late... ab aisa ladke kahan pe milte hai yaar, mujhe bhi ek chahiye. "Responsibility" hmmm, just as a classmate or?? (loving this adorable and flustered Parth)

"Parth fought with her mentally" poor Parth yaar, Vidushi ke pyaar mein yeh ab pagal bhi ho gaya 😆 BACCHE??? ab yeh kahan se tapak gaye yaar... all my theories are wrong so i'm just going to stop guessing... hats off to your originality though, you have some new and interesting concepts.

Vidushi's surprisingly good with kids... who knew she could be such a gentle mother-type figure also... if only Parth was here to see this 😉 Really he thinks of Aprita... I'm sorry to all the Aprita-Parth shippers, but unfortunately she's gone, and Parth has someone really amazing waiting for him so he should really move on (Now i've started talking about the show but you get my point.)

And Vidushi's made the pain go away... like i said before, perfect for each other! HAHAH overprotective Parth is glaring at poor kids for laughing at Vidushi... tooo cute!! Parth giggling 😆 I imagine it as a more manly laugh or something... now i can't get the image of Parth giggling like a girl out of my head 😛

"He again blindfolded her" i've got goosebumps on my skin already from the anticipation. This is the moment I've been waiting for, your infamous romance scenes (I would seriously do anything for these).

Now m flustered with this compliment.. Infamous.. 🤣🤣

NO WORDS... *BOWS DOWN* YOU ARE GENIUS!!! I never thought that washing hands could be so romantic and SENSUOUS!! Once again my mind went places it really shouldn't have but DAMN i can't believe what I just read... which is why I'm going to read it again and again and again till all the tingling sensations inside of me disappear..

I don't mind.. Keep reading.. I aim to please.. 😉😉😉 And with that Blindfold ki new memory hai Parth ke paas.. Ek teer se do nishaane maar diye maine.. 🤣

Wait, why is Vids walking? I thought the whole point of Parth's visit was to pick her up so she doesn't have to walk alone late at night... oh wait, there he is 😛 casually following her along. OH MY GOODNESS... "I told the Dean that I will pick you up" he means literally pick up... like lift... off the ground... onto his shoulders... PICK UP 🤣

LOL ,, Man of words.. 🤣🤣

Awww his rant about all the teasing and his "heart attack" is super duper adorable. Why aren't all boys like "your" Parth 😭

LOL Tabhi to ye FF hai.. Fully Fiction.. 🤣🤣

HE KISSES HER AND LEAVES?? NO I WANT MORE!!! CHANDU WRITE ME MORE... ABHI!!!

Seriously, though please update soon... you've literally left me on a Vidarth high and I need more fuel to feed my addiction... toh jaldi update karo please!!

Just in case you didn't get it from my comments... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT!!!

In any case I declare.. I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS.. 🤣

- Rae

P.S. I'm still waiting for a chapter dedicated to me for all the amazing comments i give you 😛


Chapter 6 is only for you.. Time for you to prepare yourself to comment on each and every paragraph.. Yaadgaaar banaa doongi.. 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: enigma1997

what was that!!! loved the cuteness of vidarth yaar i was smiling all throught this update ... the dress troubles !!!!

transformer 5!!! :D
mayas taunts :P :D
spiderman ! lol!
and vids ... i loved how you made parth realise that there are a lots of faces of vids yet to be seen !!! and our mr.saint seems a bit too fond of spanking,aint it? :D but i am not complaining and by the likes of it,nor is vids!
all in all too good !
cant wait for the next part~


Hey ther.. 🤗.. Thank you.. And I am so so happy to make you smile.. Hehe yeah.. socha Parth ke forever straight face ke opposite atmosphere create kia jaaye. Funny.. 😆😆

Yep, as they don't show anything about Vidu's past in the show.. it leaves a lot of room for imaginary situations.. 😊
Hehe yeahh.. Saadhu banaa shaitaan.. 😆

Will update ASAP.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

😳

Ahhh!! It's 11!! I finally mangaed to review!
Sorry for being late! Mom had banned me from laptop!
Gtg will be on AT and scrap from cell?
Love you!
A SH


LOL kitna hansi tu poore chapter mein.. Aunty ne isliye bann kar diya hoga.. Lappy dekh dekhkar hansegi to log kya sochenge.. 🤣🤣🤣

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