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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love

RES😳

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Hey! Swa
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️


Very well you've described the scenario⭐️⭐️
lovely you've pinned emotions n each n every point👏👏
Sanyu's parent are so cute😳
They love her so much😃
Party!!! SanDhir game was awesome😉
Randhir mom😡😡such a disgusting lady😡😡
Randhir was sI much so hurt...moi got emotional
I love sanyu...The way see supported Randhir
and answer his so called Mom😳
I hate his mom😡😡


moi love you love you Swa🤗
For writing this ff...it's one of my
Excellent favourite ff...Thank you😃
keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra



1st let me blush...
thanks yar...
will update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmmm confused sanyu anyway nice update
newmoon18 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear the updte was super duper awsme

The story is getting so intrsting

N u divided orange in six parts dats awsme yr Hume zyada padhne ko mile a

So sanyu confused h apni feelings ko like

N her mom n dad they r so cool n awsme
They handled her so calmly she's lucky to hve dem ni to serial me bechari sanyu nonone cares for her happiness


The party part was mind blowing

The competition awsme tha
Den came rd mom god she's so heartless kitna ganda behave kia apne hi son k saath rd mst be so broken 😭


Bt sanyu ne rd ki side li r kya akal tikhane lagyi uss selfish women ki

Sandhir eqn changing luving it

Wtng for nxt update bt u r having ur xamz so no problem update whenever tym permits will patiently wait

All the best 👍🏼

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
SWA1992 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: twni

hmmm confused sanyu anyway nice update


no yar love already started but she doesn't realise it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Hey dear the updte was super duper awsme

The story is getting so intrsting

N u divided orange in six parts dats awsme yr Hume zyada padhne ko mile a

So sanyu confused h apni feelings ko like

N her mom n dad they r so cool n awsme
They handled her so calmly she's lucky to hve dem ni to serial me bechari sanyu nonone cares for her happiness


The party part was mind blowing

The competition awsme tha
Den came rd mom god she's so heartless kitna ganda behave kia apne hi son k saath rd mst be so broken 😭


Bt sanyu ne rd ki side li r kya akal tikhane lagyi uss selfish women ki

Sandhir eqn changing luving it

Wtng for nxt update bt u r having ur xamz so no problem update whenever tym permits will patiently wait

All the best 👍🏼

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊


ohh thanks yar...
my xams r not going on. oct last week meim hoga, shayad. but u know lots to study. agar abhi start nahim kiya toh pakka fail ho javoongi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabbb..ur writing style is soo good..I loved dis update..sanyu good job..randhir's mom is so disgusting..at least in dis ff sanyu's parents are sweet..continue soonish n pm me.

khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

fabbb..ur writing style is soo good..I loved dis update..sanyu good job..randhir's mom is so disgusting..at least in dis ff sanyu's parents are sweet..continue soonish n pm me.

khushi


thanks yar...will update tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
I wrote this part just now. Plz forgive me if any mistakes are there.

ORANGE PART2"LOVE : FOUND, LOST.

Our +1 result came. I got 98.4%, Rd got 98.6%, arpu, kausthu, jiggy and parth maintained their percentage. We all are happy.
Our +2 class started. I'm super excited bcz I can see Rd. I missed him sooo much. I wish, I may be parth, so that I can stay with Rd 24 hrs.
I reached hostel. Arpu and Kausthu are already there. We hugged each other. We are seeing others after long one and half months. Have lot to say and hear. But for now we have to go for our class"the 1st day in +2.
I reached class along with my friends. Rd is already there. I smiled at him and he waved me back. The 1st class"physics, ofcrse our Vd sir. After the class he announced that, he selected the dream team based on +1 marks. The team include---
Rd , the captain
Me
Vidushi
Parth
Arpu
Jiggy
Sahil
Kausthu
All other students congratulated us.
Little we knew, what the actual dream team competition is. And those can change my life forever.
In every month, we have to participate in one completion. After 2 such competitions, the actual one came. This year, the dream team competition will be hosted by St. Thomas higher sec school.
On Thursday, Vd sir said that the competition is on Monday and we have to reach St. Thomas school, tomorrow. We packed our things.
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St. Thomas school.
I must say, the campus is awesome. Some students of St. Thomas came and received us. They provided us a big hall for staying.

Me:" what's this? There are girls too in our team. How can we stay together?"

One of the student:" sorry, we don't know that, there will be girls in your team."

Me:" what do you mean by you people don't know'?"

The student:" all other team consist of only boys. And your authorities didn't inform us about the girls participants."

Me:" oh God, what do we do now?"

Rd:" hey, can you plz give us 2 long curtains which is not transparent and a long rope too."

Me:" Rd, here we are talking abt some serious issues, and u r thinking abt curtain and rope?? Thum kya, suicide karna chahthe ho uss rope se??"

Rd:" yes farzi. And zyada khush math ho. Even my spirit won't let you live in peace."

Me:" RD!!"
Rd:" farzi, I know you have nothing inside your skull. But pretend for God's sake, that you have some brain."

Me:" oye, sadu!!!"

Rd:" aur nahim toh kya? Tell me, for what I asked a curtain?"

Me:" how do I know?"

Rd:" you duffer, we can divide this room into 3 parts with that. So that you people can stay here comfortably."

Me:" why 3 parts?"

Rd:" one for boys, another for u girls and last one common room."

The student:" goodidea. We will arrange those things for you."

Rd:" thanks."

The student:" no need to say thanks, we should say that. You solved a big problem for us. And btw, I'm sam." (forwarded his hands)

Rd (shook hand) :" hai, I'm RSS."

After sometime, sam gave us 2 curtains and rope. He also helped us. At last we all settled. Sam said all the best and left his room. Then Vd sir came to our room.

Vd sir:" so students, all set, ha?"

Rd:" yes sir."

Me:" but Vd sir, our school authorities didn't inform..."

Vd sir:" there are girls in our team."

Me:" you already know that sir?"

Vd sir:" you people are here to participate in a tough competition. You should solve every problems that came in front of you."

Me:" but sir..."

Vd sir:" what??? You should sleep now. And you will know the topic for your task, tomorrow."

Rd:" ok sir!!"

Vd sir:" k. good night all."

All of us:" good ninght, sir."
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Next day, 10am
We got the topic: what you can do for our nation?"
We have 2 days for doing that. We came back to our room. We discussed. We got"nothing!!! Being exhausted, I began walking inside our room and scratched my head in btw.

Rd:" what are you doing farzi?"

Me:" ha, morning walk!!! Wanna join??"

Rd:" ha, but not here. Come with me."

Me:" where?" ( instead of giving reply, he dragged me out of the room.)

Me:" where are we going?"

Rd:" to hell!!"

Me:" what?" (and we reached the canteen there.)

Me:" how do you know abt the canteen here?"

Rd:" I know everything, farzi."

Me:"whatever!!"
And we sat on chair and rd ordered coffee for us. When we are having our coffee, I saw one thing. One worker in the canteen discarding some waste water onto the ground nearby. Then an idea struck me.

Me:" rd, come with me. I have got one idea."

Rd:" what's that farzi?"

Me:" I will tell you, but not here. Come fast." We came back to our room.
Me:' guyz, I have got one idea.

Rd:" what?"

Me:" that we can purify the waste water from hotels and can use that again. So that, water scarcity will be solved and problems associated with that dirty water won't be there. What's say?"

Jig:" idea toh acha hai, but how can we do that?"

Me:" hmm... That I don't know."

Vids:" yeh lo!!! Kya mast idea pheka hai!!!"

Rd:" vids please... And ha, we can make use of working of water purifiers."

Parth:" that's good. And it work on the principle of..."

Kausthu:" reverse osmosis."

Arpu:" exactly. And we should collect more information about water purifiers."

Sahil:" we can get more information from internet."

Rd:" and I will get a working water purifier here."

Me:" how?"

Rd:" leave that on me."
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We collected all the information that we needed. By evening, we started working on our model. And we completed that by Sunday night.

Monday, 10:30am
All teams assembled in the ground. Rd and I explained our model.

1st examiner:" idea toh acha hai. But is it affordable to small hotels?"

Me:" sir vo..."

Rd:" we can do a collab, sir."

2nd examiner:" plz explain."

Rd:" we can make one purifier for 10 or more hotels."

1st examiner:" ok"
And examiners moved to next team. I was hell nervous. Rd squeezed my hands and assured me. At last the result came---- the 1st place shared by our team and St. Thomas school.
We are all happy. Authorities of St. Thomas throw a party for both the teams. We all got ready for the party. Packed our things and kept that in our bus.

At party.
That was amazing. Hum sab khoob masti kiya. Then I remembered, I forgot my mobile in our room. So I went to room.
I walked through the corridor, took the left one when the corridor parted into two. I walked again. But I reached a dead end. I was stunned. May be I lost the way. So I walked back. Again ended in another dead end. Oh god, what's happening? What should I do now? Nobody know where am i? even I don't know, where the hell am I ?
I wasted whole 2 hrs in finding the way out. When I was thinking abt what to do, I heard a voice.
Oh God, what's that? Ghost ? then the scenes of all scary movies came onto my mind.
A girl who is alone in a dark room, like me. And she is searching for the way out, again like me. And suddenly she hears a voice, like b4. Then there comes the ghost. It chases that girl. At last,at last...

"Ahhh" I screamed and ran.

And I collided with someone. I looked up and saw Rd. my Randhir!!!
I hugged him as tight as I can. Then Rd broke the hug and
SLAPS ME.
Me:" what's wrong with you Rd?"

Rd:" where were you?"

Me:" I lost my way back to..."
B4 completing that, he gave me a bone breaking hug and said
Rd:" do you know, how much I was scared? (I looked at him) the mere thought of losing you..."

Me:" Rd, I'm here."

Rd:" don't dare to do that again." (I hugged him back)

Me:" I won't repeat that. I swear."
Rd broke the hug, took my wrist and walked to outside.
I don't know when I reached in bus. I simply sat beside Rd. then he gave me my mobile.
I looked at him with surprise. How did he know that I went in search of my mobile.
The journey was silent. Throughout the journey, I just watched Rd. he knows me very well. He understands every action of mine. Just like my mom and dad. I thought only they know me very well. But I was wrong. Rd , my Rd too knows me.
He is always there for me just like my parents. Cares for me, taunts me,
Who is Rd to me? A friend or ...
Then my heart said: you love Randhir.
I was shocked. More than that I was happy.
Yes I love Randhir Singh Shekawat.
I have fallen for my enemy come friend.
I love him.
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Our days passed. But for me, those were the most difficult ones.
Now I know, I love Randhir. But what he feels for me? He doesn't show any signs of love for me.
If I confess my feelings without knowing his feelings for me, I may lose my friend also.
I can't take that risk. At least he will be with me as a friend.
I should know more abt him. So I continued our healthy enmity come friendship. We argued over silly matters, always quarreled with each other. By all these, I got more chances to know different shades of Rd.
Now, I know abt his fav books, dishes, songs, films. I know him more than I knew abt myself.
And one more thing, we study together. He teaches me lessons only on one condition, I have to make sandwiches for every one class. But I like that, after all he is my Randhir, he na?
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And our final exams came. And we worked very hard.
On the day of our last exam,
Today is our farewell party. After the exam, I searched Rd.
I found him near library. I ran towards him.

Me:" hai Mr. sadu. Waiting for someone, ha?"

Rd:" ha, for parth."

Me:" how was the exams?"
Rd:" went well. What abt you?"

Me:"hmmm. And are you free in the eve?"

Rd:" hmm why?"

Me:" If you are, then come with me for shopping."

Rd:" nope. I'm not. I want to go with Parth. I'm sorry."

Me:" it's ok. Bye, see you in the party."

Rd:" see ya."

I went shopping with Arpu and Kasuthu. This time, I selected me. I wish, Rd will be here. But he will be with Parth. Then I heard parth's voice.

Parth:" hai Arpu."

A:" why are you here?"

P:" ha? For selling banana."

A:" what?"

P:" for shopping yar. What else? Hai Sanyu, what's up?"

K:" I'm too here."

P:" oye, Kasuthu. And how is shopping going?"

K:" good. Come join us. So that we won't carry Arpu's bags also."

A:" shut up Kasuthu."

Me:" and wise, Parth, where is Rd?"

P:" don't know, not seen after the exam."

Me:"but he said that he is going out with you."

P:" nope."

We continued our shopping. But my mind was full of questions.
Where the hell Rd went? Why he lied me?
We reached hostel and packed my things. I will go home after party.
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Our farewell party
I stood at the entrance. It's a huge mask which is decorated with so many LED lights. We have to enter in pairs. As Rd is missing, I pair up with Sahil.
Juniors welcomed us and gave mask for everyone. The mask is our entry pass. No students are allowed to enter the party without a mask on their face.
We tied our masks and entered the party. I got a butterfly shaped mask. I searched every inch of party to spot Randhir. But couldn't bcz of masks.
How could I find him?
I got angry and ordered for a soft drink. Then I heard Rd's voice. I looked back and spotted Rd who is standing in front of the dance floor. He is talking with some juniors. I grabbed my drink and walked towards him.

Me: hey Mr. sadu, so where were you??"

Rd:" I was here."

Me:" I was talking abt your evening outing."

Rd:" actually we went for shopping."

Me:" how was it?"

Rd:" it went as usul."

Me:" When did you go?

Rd:"Around 3 pm.

Me:Oho, you and parth did a good shopping around 3pm?"

Rd:" hmm"

Me:"for your kind information, Parth was with us during that time. Your time is not matching sir."

Rd:" that... I ..."

Me:" or may be Parth know some magic and he can be at 2 places at the same time."

Rd:" farzi, ok ok. I was not with Parth. I will tell you all, but not now."With that he left, leaving behind a hell confused me.
Then Kausthu called me. I joined my friends. We danced some more time. Then I excused from there and went to the washroom. I washed my face. That cold water gave some calmness. Just then, all the music got stopped.
I walked towards Kasuthu and Arpu. But the scene there is something different.
Everybody is standing still and watching something. I looked there.
There stood a girl in red dress and a boy in his knees with some small jewel box in his hands. Kausthu, Arpu, Jiggy and Parth are also watching the whole scene. I looked at the boy who is on his knees.

The boy:" I Randhir Singh Shekawat, is deeply madly in love with you for the past 2 yrs. Actually I don't have the guts to confess it yet. But if I didn't confess my feelings today, my precious person may loss. So please accept this ring and be my love."

What?? Rd is proposing a girl? Who is that? My heart ached. I couldn't move. What should I do now? He loves another girl.
The girl accepted the ring and said :" I will Randhir." she removed her mask. That was Vidhushi. She hugged Rd and he hugged him back. All other students clapped for them.
My mind went blank. I leaned on the wall for support. I slowly walked out of the party with no feelings. I messaged Kausthu that I'm going home.
I started walking to hostel room. Suddenly rain began falling. I stood there for cooling my inner turmoil.

Don't throw chapels...


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update dear..but Randhir proposing vidushi..is he out of his mind...????...poor sanyu..how dare he..plz continue soon.

P.S. Yippee I'm first

Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Resss
Wth rd proposed someone else 😕
Plz plz plz tell me it was by mistake plzzz he actually wanted to propose sanyu I just hv feeling like that
I dunno y 😭
Edited by pritha072angel - 11 years ago

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