VIBGYOR colors of my life thread1 - Page 20

Originally posted by: dhruvi_parsh

Wow yar
The update was amazing
It was jst fab
I really love ur ff
U r an amaIng writer
I m waiting eagrly for the nxt part
Now do update ASAP
Love
Dhruvi

thanks yar...will update soon...

Hai guyz, i'm very happy with all the comments that I got.
Thank u so much.
As my exams are coming, I can't spend much time for typing the story. So I decided to update orange in 6 small parts.
Sorry guyz... U know it's really a lot to study abt human body.
I will try my best to update every day.
And here is the 1st part of orange

ORANGE (love: found"lost--- ???)

I directly looked into those brown iris. They r so deep.
That reflected only me.
My hands were around his neck and his, around my waist. Don't know how much time we stood like that.
I searched the actual feeling in those eyes. But I saw only confusion. May be he didn't L...
Suddenly I removed my hands which encircled his neck. And he loosened his grip around my waist. Slowly I turned away from him. And began walking to nowhere.
Don't know when I reached my hostel room, I changed my dress and slept.
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Next day
We packed our things. The school will restart after 1&1/2 months.
On the way to waiting room, I saw Rd's gang. But Rd found missing.
That's good, isn't it?
When I entered the waiting room, I collided with Rd. he smiled at me. Seeing that smile, my heart forgot to beat once.
And he left the room leaving behind me as a statue.
My driver came after sometime.
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home
mom and dad r happy. But am I happy?? I don't know.
One part of me want to see Rd and other part don't. I was in utter confusion. I was thinking abt him all the time. A whole week passed like this.
At night, mom and dad came to my room. They sat beside me on bed. I know y they r here.

Me:" mom, dad. I wanna say something."

Mom:" ha beta, we r here with u."

Dad:" bolo my princess."

Me:" i...i..don't know what's happening with me. I think I'm going crazy. Can't concentrate on things. But trust me, I really try to do things normally. But all my efforts went vain."

Dad:" who's that boy, princess?"

Me:" DAD!!!!"

Dad:" it's ok beta. It's happens. U don't need to worry."

Mom:" ha beta!!! And one more thing, it won't change our love for u."

Me:" hmmm, plz don't ask his name!!!"

Dad:" k k"

Mom:" and u say beta."

Me:" hmmm...(scratched my head)well... When I saw him, I don't why my heart stops beating, my breathing rate increases, my mind become blank, my feet resumes to move. What's happening with me?"

Dad:" don't be panic my princess. Listen to me, u r 16 now. Passing through ur adolescence stage. It's all abt..."

Me:" it's not abt hormones dad."

Mom:" then u r in LOVE."

Me:" WHAT?? No way, love? That too with that..."

Dad:" no Sanyu, we don't want to hear that boy's name."

Mom:" ha, if we already know him, we will feel weird when we saw him again."

Me:" hmmm."

Dad:" beta, do u find any solution for ur problem?"

Me:" hmmm(thought for a while)may be ...ha!!! I will avoid him from now onwards."

Mom:" no no beta. That won't solve ur problem. U should face him."

Me:" what?? I can't do that!!!!"

Dad:" yes u can beta. Jaan is saying the actual solution. U should face him. So that..."

Me:" so that?"

Dad:" at least u may came to know abt ur actual feelings."

Me:" what actual feelings??"

Mom:" those feelings that u really have for that boy."

Me:" how do I know that?"

Dad:" time will tell u that."

Me:" what if I found my real feelings??"

Dad:" whatever be that, we will support u always."

Me:" dad!!!"

Dad:" ha beta?"

Me:" u know, u people r world's best mom and dad. I love u."

Mom and dad:" we love u too our princess."

Me:" mom, dad. (pause for a while) will u sleep with me tonight?"

Mom:" of crse beta."
And I slept with mom and dad, the two people who understand every action of mine.
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Days went as usual. And there came my 1st practical exam. My 1st encounter with RSS after the vacations started.
Venue- some boring business party.
Time- 7:45 pm.
Mom and dad asked me to come for that stupid party. 1st I denied that. Then dad pleaded. How can I deny my superman's pleading? At last I agreed.
The party is boring as I expected. The venue was filled with almost all business men of India (may be). I sat on a chair, watched my superman and his jaan who r trying to get rid of some fatty lady's speech!!!! She dragged mom to a group of ladies. And dad walked to the drinks counter. He ordered some drink. And looked me and mouthed "wanna some drink?" and I showed NO.

"why? U did once. Then y don't u have another shot now?"
I turned back to see RSS.
He is smiling at me.

Me:" hai Mr.sadu."

Rd:" hai farzi. What's up? Missed me?"

Me:" what? Missed u?? my foot!!!"

Rd:"well, u look pretty today."

My eyes dilated due to excitement. What just he said?? I'm pretty...

Me:" thanks. And hmm... u too looks good."

Rd:" arrey (smiled widely) I just said a big lie and u began blushing!!!! Tch tch.."
My mouth fell open, he came and sat beside me. He closed my jaw with his hands. And he began laughing and I was boiling in anger!!!!

Rd:" chill farzi!!! Life meim aisa hota hai, kabhi kabhi."

Me:" kabhi kabhi Randhir??? When u r around me, it always happens!!!"

Rd:" what happens when I'm around u, farzi?"

Me:" i...i...arhh leave that. And what u said?? I'm not good looking?? (Narrowed my eyes)

Rd:" I didn't say that."

Me:" but u mean that."

Rd:" whatever!!!"

Me:" ok, let's have a competition."

Rd:" what competition farzi?"

Me:" that, count how many girls check u. and I will count how many boys check me. Whoever gets more number, they will become the winner. What's say?"

Rd:" ok."

Me:" no cheating, ha."

Rd:" soch lo farzi, u know, I'm going to win."

Me:" let's see."

Rd:" btw, what's the price?"

Me:" if I won, u have to agree that I'm beautiful."

Rd:" what if I won?"

Me:" I will say that u r handsome, even though u r not so!!!"

Rd:" hm...k then, and the time starts ...now."

I began counting, I scored 17 within 5min. then I turned to see Rd, he is also counting. Then a group of girls passed beside us. All of them looked at Rd. he counted all of them.
How dare they?? They checked my sadu, that too in front of me!!!!
What?? My sadu?? What am I thinking?
I looked at Rd. he is still counting. Better I should get back into the competition. I sighed and continued the task.

Me:" Rd, what's ur score now?"

Rd:" I will tell u at the end. And ...what's ur score?"

Me:" I WILL TELL U AT THE END."

Rd:" oh, mom!!!"

I looked at the entrance. Saw minister Malhotra and a woman, probably his wife. I looked back at rd. He got up from his chair and ran towards the entrance. And I followed him.

Rd(by hugging his mom):" hai mom!!!"

Rd's mom(breaking the hug):" not again Rd. I said u several times (looking here and there) don't dare to call me mom."

Rd:" but u r my mom."

Rd's mom:" not anymore. And will u please excuse us Mr.R S S?" and she left along with her so called husband.
I was shocked. How could a woman talk to her own son, like this? And she said all those without any change in expressions. What a woman is she? Is her blood pumping organ made of rock or something?

I looked back at Rd. I didn't see him, instead of him I saw a statue. Who forgot to breath, who lost everything. I placed my hand on his shoulder. He turned and looked at me blankly.
I can't see him like this. How could she do that, can say such words to my Randhir? I will show her what I can do!!!!
I dragged Rd with me and he followed without any protest.

Me:" hai Mrs. Malhotra. I'm Sanyukta Agarwal, daughter of Keshav Agarwal.(forwarded my hands)

Rd's mom(shook my hand) " oh!! Nice to meet u. (then she saw Rd, behind me) and what r u doing here Rd?"

Me:" I asked him to come with me."

Rd's mom:" y? for what?"

Me:" to say sorry to u ma'm, for what happened at the entrance."

Rd's mom:" u r Randhir's..."

Me:" friend."

Rd's mom:" oh, that's so sweet of u. and u should be. Mr and Mrs. Agarwal belong to a reputed family. They surely taught u how to behave in a public place!!!"

Me:" yes ma'm. (looking at Rd and continued)I will say sorry behalf of my friend. I'm sorry madam that my friend misbehaved with u today. He is sorry for being ur son, sorry for loving u even though u don't deserves it."

Rd's mom:" excuse me!!!"

Me(I continued):" he is sorry to be ashamed bcz of u. he is sorry for don't have answer to those who questions abt character of his mother. And he is sorry bcz his mother dumped her son and husband."

Rd's mom:" enough!!! How dare u talk to me like that???"

Me:" how dare u talked to my friend like that? Do u know who is he? He is RSS. One and only son of business tycoon Mr. shekawat. He is rank no.1 in studies, games and he can do anything in this world."

Rd's mom:" I said enough."

Me:" no ma'm. better u say sorry to him, otherwise u will regret in future."

Rd's mom:" future? Hm!! What future does he has?"

Me:" better than ur so called husband and son."

And I dragged Rd along with me. We walked for some distance, but he shrugged of my hands and ran towards washroom. I ran behind him by calling out his name. I entered washroom. the scene there was...
RSS is crying. Rd and tear r two opposite poles which can't meet ever. But now, he is crying, crying and crying. My heart ached seeing this. I can't stand it.
I placed my shaky hands on his shoulder. Suddenly he shrugged of my hand. And shouted at me.

Rd:" leave me alone Sanyukta!!!!"

Me:" no. I won't."

Rd:" leave me, plz leave me."(and cried)

Me:" y should I leave u?"

Rd:" I don't want anybody's sympathy."

Me:" symapathy?? I'm not showing any sympathy!!!"

Rd:" then y r u here Sanyukta Agarwal?"

Me:" I like to be with u!!!"
He looked at me with surprise and hugged me as tight as he can. I hugged him back.
He cried and soaked my shoulder with his tears.

Me:" don't shed these precious ters of urs, for that woman, Rd!!!"

Rd:" but she is my mom, farzi!!!!"

Me:" WAS!! Not anymore. U have one, my mom!!!"
And I cupped his face. He looked at me, like a child who is admiring his fav toy. He hugged me again. This time, not that tight. I don't know how much time we stood like that.
Then I broke the hug and walked towards the chair. Rd followed me. We sat on the chair. I looked at him

Me:" now, I will definitely win."

Rd:" ????"

Me:" forgot abt the competition? No girl will look at u in this condition except me. U r a mess now."

Rd:" still, handsome!!!"

Me:" whatever!!!"
With that he laughed and I joined him. And continued our stupid competition.
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10:30 pm
I was on my bed, remembering all the incidents that happened at party. I faced Rd, and I passed my practical exam with good marks. That mean, I'm not in love.
I saw Rd's mom. No Mrs. Malhotra, I corrected myself. The mere thought abt that women boiled my blood. How dare she talked to my Rd like that!! What she think of herself??
Wait, MY RANDHIR?? Ha my Randhir. He is my friend.
Just friend Sanyu? More than that??
I don't know what he is for me!!!!!!

res

unres

swa plz 1st tell ur name

because its one of my fav ff which i read ever i my life

its so cute yet simple too

the way u r describing every scenes and feelings is just fabulous

i have no words for this ff yaar

i m fallen in love with this ff

and the chapter was amazinggg

sanyu ne rd ki mom ko sahi ans diya😃

how rude she was😡 disgusting😡😡

and sanyu's parents are so sweeet

they r so understanding dear😃😃😃

keep writing

thanks for pm me

lots of love

sakshi

awww. that was so sweet!!! i loved the whole part...

Resss
Unresss
Supperrrb update dear
Rds mom arghhh such a pathetic lady
Awww sayus family I m in love with them
Whoa sanyu realised her feelings rd kab realise karega
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

Awesome update
Love that Sanyu told her parents
Sanyu and rd had a competition
Rd faced his mother
Sanyu stood up for rd
Update soon

Oh god yaar,I m soo loving it
Pls update soon
Thanx for pm
Love
Pari

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">unres</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">swa plz 1st tell ur name </font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">because its one of my fav ff which i read ever i my life</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">its so cute yet simple too</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">the way u r describing every scenes and feelings is just fabulous</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">i have no words for this ff yaar</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">i m fallen in love with this ff</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">and the chapter was amazinggg</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">sanyu ne rd ki mom ko sahi ans diya</font></font></font>😃

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">how rude she was</font></font></font>😡<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff"> disgusting</font></font></font>😡😡<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff"></font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">and sanyu's parents are so sweeet</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">they r so understanding dear</font></font></font>😃😃😃

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">keep writing</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">thanks for pm me</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">lots of love</font></font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3"><font color="#9900ff">sakshi</font></font></font>

thank u soo much sakshi...
and ha i'm swati...
i got soo emotional by reading ur comment...
thanks once again..
will update soon...

Originally posted by: don girls

Awesome update
Love that Sanyu told her parents
Sanyu and rd had a competition
Rd faced his mother
Sanyu stood up for rd
Update soon

thanks yar...will update soon

RES😳