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-Monika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Awesome...

loved each and every part of this update...

this chatter box kriya was amazing...

update soon..

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SALONI KAPADIA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Ok I loved this chapter ...Well after reading whole one thing is clear that Rey is a good Human being with good Heart but just blessed by Devil & at last his past I am waiting to know more...loved it update soon

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KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

intrsting concept

rey kiddnapped 99 people

but wht is the mystry

seem rey is in so much pain

cont soon

thxn fr pm

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

this is sooo freaking interesting!!!

I am soo loving it!!!

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kria is trying hard to find out what the secrets are and how is it going to be for her!!!

heheeheheee kria is shown some what totally different and i love this side of hers!!

itna questioning and itna thinking!!!

her thinking will never stop!!

and then the way they started off!!

awesome!!!

but whom was rey speaking to... hmm mystery..

but then his past omg he has gone through sooo much!!!

i loved the way u have portrayed it!!!

Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago

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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Glad Rey isn't cold hearted. Waiting for the next part. Keep it up (:

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Annwesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

This story s rely awesom...
Luvd d update to d core...
Awesome...

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zona_malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Hahahahaha knew it rey won't kill

but take people wid him hwo r not happy id dere life

Interesting work :)

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

read read finish this from wow i think the old men help rey in get control from his
ego9 and temper... and kriya was shocked to see the kids still alive and
rey had just give here a hint and hope she understand that... fabulous...
do continue soon

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Ishana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

First of all , I am very disappointed with the way this update has turned out to be. :( I am really sorry if it's pathetic!

Part 3

Kria walked in the deserted halls of the huge mansion. There were many rooms and all of them had a name plate , belonging to the person that had stayed or had been trapped here.
She didn't want to sleep at all. She stood at a room. It was her ex crush's name (Luke).
She stared at it. What must have happened to that guy! She was lost in her thoughts , when a whisper sent a shiver down her spine.
"What are you doing here?"
She turned , and seeing Rey she gulped.
"I wa-was ju-just.."
"I had told you to sleep Kria!"
"I a-am n-not sle-sleepy!"
She let out the sobs , which had come because of the fright rey gave her.
She regretted crying , as soon as she looked up at Rey's face and saw the dejection and pain in his eyes.
She looked into them , they were a pool of sorrow and miseries.
"Sadness!"
She muttered.
"Huh?"
Rey came out of his thoughts. It did pain him to see people getting scared of him. He had always masked it up , but sometimes it was just too hard to handle , too mask the pain that would behave like a slow poison in his mind.
He had been a bloody 7 year old kid! Some one who didn't even know the proper difference between good and bad, people were scared of him! God! It had pained to see hus friends run away from him , his parents shoving him away from themselves. Even though it had been 17 years it still pained.
"Your eyes!"
Rey looked at her.
"They hold sadness. An unheard tragic story. It's filled with pain."
"I have lived my life seeing people scared of me. It's their reflection. It's emoting your reflection kria"
"No! Fright and pain are two different emotions Rey. Your eyes don't depict my fright , they depict your pain."
Rey couldn't reply. He looked at the name plate.
Oh! He got a topic.
"He wanted a life without fame and attention."
Kria turned. She got a bit confused. Rey took her to another door. The name was of a lawyer.
"He was blackmailed by goons , on the verge of committing suicide. He wanted to establish his job in a safer place."
Before kria could comprehend his words , rey took her to another door , it was of the couple that he had taken away together.
"The girl's parents had set out goons to kill the guy on the day when I took them away."
He then took her to a room , which belonged to the person whom efirst took away.
"Her father wanted her to marry against her will , he had threatened her to beat her up till death if she disagrees to marry."
"Re--.."
Rey took her to jack room.
"Physically abused by his dad every bloody day Kria! You know that right?"
Kria was too messed up to speak. She had a lot of things going on in her mind. She then spoke.
"Where are they?"
"I'll tell you tomorrow Kria. You need sleep for heaven's sake."
"Why are you so hell bent on making me sleep?"
"Because I don't like anybody sneaking around the whole mansion at midnight. "
"Uh , I am not sleepy."
"So go to your room!"
"Why?"
"Because I said so."
Kria looked at him. She crossed her arms and looked at him.
"I won't!"
"Okay , if you are so stubborn , let me tell you one thing Kria. I don't kill people that does not mean I don't hurt them. Don't you dare test my patience , the result will be bad , really very bad."
Kria gulped , and in fright she yelled.
"You scare the shit out of people and expect them to treat you like a bloody normal human being!"
She regretted it again. Not able to look at him , she ran back to her room.
Jack looked at her running , and then at Rey. He felt bad for him knowing it had hit him hard on his heart.
Rey entered his room , he was in pain extremely angry. Why him! He threw everything that came in his way , he yelled in frustration , he just simply broke down.
It was too much for him , bloody too much to hold within him. He cried in agony.
He never had wished for this. Never! Staying alone , isolated for 17 years. What was his fault!
---
Jack stood outside Rey's room , he could hear him scream , hear him cry and it pained him to hear Rey this broken.
Rey had been the person who had given Jack a new lease of life , a brighter future but Rey himself lived in darkness.
Mustering up some courage , he was about to open the door when he heard Rey scream.
"WHY DON'T YOU JUST BLOODY KILL ME!"
Jack closed his eyes. He couldn't see him in this state and ran away. Ran to kria's room. He opened the door and yelled.
"You called Rey bro a monster right? Your wrong! You are a bloody monster! A blind assuming girl who does not even think before speaking. Why should Rey bro bring a change to a girl's life who does not even value somebody's emotions?"
Kria stared at Jack blankly. She felt her heart twist. Jack had his eyes closed as he yelled , but then he opened them. Kria saw fury in them.
"My brother is not a monster Kria! He is my everything! He is the most sweetest human being you'll ever meet. But sadly , you won't see the real him!"
Saying this Jack went away.
Kria held her mouth. Why had she done this! Her heart screamed. She slapped herself. Why!
Rey had heard Jack screaming at the top of his voice. Shit! Rey wiped his tears and dashed out. He saw jack running away from Kria's room.
He confused went there and saw kria slapping herself.
"Kria?"
Kria looked up. She hugged him tightly.
"I am sorry Rey! I really am. I swear I didn't mean any of the words I said. I am just a pathetic outspoken bitch. You know that right? I have been too harsh to my dad forever and it has just gotten into me."
She was fumbling with words and sobbing.
"I am really sorry Rey!"
Rey hesitatingly wrapped his arms around her and pulled her a bit closer to him.
"I have always had a problem with words. When I said that. What I meant was that you shouldn't show this anger when you have a control on it , cause that's what makes people scared of you. Your letting others hurt you. We were wrong 17 years back , we are wrong even now , don't prove us right Rey."
Sensing that Rey won't reply she spoke again.
"Rey?"
She looked up , looking at him. Rey looked down.
"Rey , I am sorry! At least say something."
"I am trying to sink in your words! They are too deep!"
Kria chuckled. Gosh! Rey smiled and spoke.
"Thanks for your advice and it's fine. Now sleep!"
"Urgh! Rey!"
She pouts , making rey laugh. Kria sat down and looked at him , she then spoke.
"Love!"
Rey looked at her.
"Uh?"
"You had asked me about something that was missing my life right?"
"Yeah."
"Love! Dad was an ass , mom is a scared cat. How can one get love from such a boring family!"
"Oh! How relatable."
"Na! You have suffered more. Rey , why do you help others? A person can truly help others if they first learn to help themselves."
"How do you know I help others?"
"Jack! He was such a timid kid with no hope in his life , but look at him now. Plus the common thing about everyone was that they were upset about something , and they truly craved for something! You didn't kill them , you helped them."
Rey gave her a surprised look and spoke in her tone.
"Are you a mind reader?"
Kria threw a cushion on him.
"Now answer me! Why don't you help yourself?"
"Kria , I help myself by helping others."
"Eh , what?"
---
Rey came out after his meditating session and looked at the old man.
"Uncle , when did you make this mansion?"
Rey asked as he sat down on the dining table.
"It's made just for you Rey!"
"Wow! Really?"
"Yes?"
"But why so many rooms? And there is another house beside with another set of rooms as well."
"Yeah! That's a secret , you'll get to know when you turn 14."
"But that's a really long time!"
He whined.
"Rey!"
The old man spoke sternly. He sighed and ate.
---
Rey was 14 finally! Rey's happiness knew no bounds , finally today he would get freed from the chains of the devil , finally today , he wouldn't be socially unacceptable.
He had a vivid memory of his friends and his parents , he just remembered few descriptions about his peers. One was really talkative , never stopped blabbering (Kria) , the other was one who was treated like a prince (Luke) , and there were others , he didn't remember how they looked , neither was it important to , cause they all must have changed.
He remembered his parents , they had pampered him , he was the apple of their eyes. He felt his heart twist knowing he must have disappointed his parents.
Shrugging his thoughts , he walked to the old man's room. He was nowhere.
"Uncle?"
Rey called out. After being abandoned , his uncle had given him a new lease of life and hope. He was his only family , the only one who understood his pains.
A sudden uneasiness swept rey's heart. This was not good! He saw a letter and took hold of it.
"Happy Birthday Rey!
You have finally turned 14 , and are now properly trained to control your anger. It's time you come back to live like a free human being in your society Rey.
But , I am disheartened to tell you , that it would take some more time maybe years to happen.
Everyone has the right to make a choice , and even you have a choice.
Your first choice is to take the less trodden path , this path has pain , sorrow and difficulties , but this path will have the Lord walking beside you , like he has been doing from the past 7 years. And in the end , you'll be from these chains.
Your second choice is to not take the former path and go directly back to your town. It would depend upon the people out there , whether they would still accept you with your powers , or leave you alone in a corner. But I assure you , that you won't be thrown out. Unfortunately , in this path , you would have the devil's chains holding you , and there are chances that he would empower you.
Sit for a while and think about your choice Rey!"
Rey slumped to the couch , oh no! He had always wanted to be freed , but take the difficult path?
He closed his eyes. His freedom was something , that he desperately needed. So he chose to take the path to his freedom.
"I chose the first path!"
He opened his eyes and saw the words changing in the letter. He now read the letter.
"You have made your choice , a wise one Rey.
This path is difficult , you'll have to have a lot of strength within you.
In this world , all have their own sorrows and own miseries.
Many don't have the strength to overcome them and many don't realize when the darkness is engulfing them.
They always need a hand to pull them out of those miseries. And YOU Rey , are going to lend your hand to those 100 people.
This might have been very difficult. To find those people , dig their problems out and help them.
Well , for that , you won't need to find them. They'll be out waiting for you.
Now comes the painful part Rey. You can't let others know about your deeds , do anything but don't let the world except that person you help and the one's you have helped to know your real face.
Coming to the 100 rooms .Each room has a number , where you will keep that person. And no one else after that. Write a letter about what you did for them and keep it there.
Heal that person Rey!
The first person who you need to help is the girl who will be the best dressed when your in town. A girl , everyone would have their eyes on."
Rey sighed and kept the letter. He held his face. So here starts his journey!
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"That is so amazing! So I am the 100th , this means that you'll get rid of those powers!"
Rey smiled and nods.
"Toh ab Mr.Rey , how are you going to help me?"
"I don't know. Let's see."
Silence descended between the two , but it was broken by Rey.
"Your not the last. I still need to help Jack."
"Oh no you don't! You have already helped him Rey. You healed him. That's the hand he needed."
"Uh , I don't know."
"Just keep the letter in his room. And anyways I don't think your uncle told you not to let them stay."
"Yeah , he didn't'!"
They smiled.
---
Days passed , Rey was trying to find how to bring love in Kria's life. While Kria had already found that love.
She had found the love , the care she yearned in Rey.
She knew that Rey was doing it because of the promise and it pained her.
She was sitting on the swing when Jack came there. He sat beside her.
"What are you thinking?"
He spoke.
"Nothing!"
"About Rey bro na?"
"No! Why would I?"
"Because apparently , you are in Love with Rey bro!"
"No! I am not. Your teenage mind thinks a lot Jack!"
"It thinks a lot , but thinks correctly. And of course any girl would fall in love with Rey bro if he treated them the way he treats you."
"What do you mean?"
"I have seen at least 13 people who have come here , and few were girls as well. Bro was always formal to them. But with you! Gosh! He laughs and behaves like a normal human being. Don't you see it , he cares about you!"
"Jack!"
Kria spoke sternly. He looked at her sheepishly and spoke.
"Yeah yeah , too grown up for my age! But come on I am Jack!"
"Idiot!"
She laughed.
"Why don't you confess about your love to Rey bro?"
"How can I?"
"Oh ya! He hasn't realized it."
"Who hasn't realized what?"
They heard rey's voice and stiffened. They look up. Rey sat beside jack.
"Bro , you don't realize it!"
"And what's it?"
He asked kria.
"I do-don't..."
Jack cut her and spoke.
"That she found the love , she needed."
"How?"
Rey asked her. Kria nods in a no. Rey's heart felt heavy , if she had really found it , she would be leaving. Man! Why did he feel so bad?
In these days , he had started to care a lot about Kria. She was different , and he liked her nature. She had become a part of his empty life , just like Jack , maybe more than Jack.
"Say na Kria!"
"You won't understand."
She ran away to her room.
"What happened to her!"
"Love!"
Jack spoke.
"Eh? Jack?"
"Bro! You are so dumb. Kria di loves you!"
It came as a shock.
"You gave her the attention she needed. Jeez! I feel like a grown up here right now."
"But I don't love her!"
"Bro! Whom are you kidding to? I have seen your behavior with others and with di."
"No! I can't love anyone."
Jack hits his head.
"Oh you just fell in love bro!"
"NO!"
"Okay! Let her go."
"I can't!"
Rey spoke sadly.
"Exactly!"
Rey smiled. Realizing that he actually loved.
"Go bro!"
Rey smiled and ran. Jack smirked. All thanks to those stupid movies.
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Kria was sitting in her room mumbling to herself. Rey came there.
"Kria?"
Kria looked up. Rey came to her. He sat beside her and held her hand.
"Jack told me!"
Kria stiffened. She looked everywhere except him.
"He was correct!"
Kria looked at him.
"Kria , I can't say lengthy dialogues , I can't express properly. All I will say is that yes! I do love you. Your the only one who could actually see my pain without me expressing it. I love you kria. I can't promise to never hurt you. But I can promise to keep you happy forever. I know I am a mon.."
Kria puts her hand on his mouth.
"Your the most selfless human I have met Rey! And that is why I couldn't stop myself from falling in love with you. I love you Rey! I love you a lot!"
She smiled and hugged him tightly. Rey was going to hug her back when he was pushed by a harsh force and he hit the wall.
"REY!"
She screamed , Jack came running. Rey was withering with pain as something invisible happened in front of their eyes. Kria tried to go near him , but couldn't. He was crying and then they heard a voice.
"Your freed from these powers Reyaansh! The chains have been broken. Go live your life!"
His cries stopped as he closed his eyes. Exhausted! Kria ran to him and took his head in her hand.
"Rey?"
She wiped the sweat beds from his face.
"I am free!"
He smiled in joy. Kria nods and smiled. Both had tears. Kria kissed his forehead.
"I love you Kria! Thank you."
"I love you too Rey! And thanks for giving me the love i needed."
---
The secret of what happened on all nights when Rey had come to the town still remained one for the town.
Kriyaansh and Jack went into another city.
---
In reality , it wasn't the 100 people Rey helped , who could save him. It was true love.
His uncle had made him help those 99 people , so that he could get his true love that was Kria!
And well that secret , remained a secret forever.

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Hope You Liked it. :)

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago

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akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

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rey ko devil bola kisne...mtlb itna genuine banda nd author be use devil bola???
ishu tune to janbuj ke rey ko hurt kiya...very bad...
okay so back to update...
kriya is kriya..ziddi hi rahegi...
gosh...100 rooms...1 for each..mehal se bi bada hai...
i actually liked the concept of that curse or blessing watever it is...
love missing from her life filled by him..jack was a sweet nd mature boy...
u brought out evrything perfectly...
keep up the good work...

Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago

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