SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16* - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3
After taking bath swayam came out and looked at the wall clock"OMG,its to late i need to hurry varna khadus ki daat sunni padegi"said swayam to himself adjusting his tie and leaving the room.
Here sharon came down and immediately went to kitchen and saw that everything was done,breakfast was already ready and taani was adjusting plates on the breakfast table while swayam's mom was doing some last touch up's on the dish her back was facing sharon
"mom i am so sorry i know mai late ho gayi hu but next time se esa kabhi nai hoga"said sharon looking at her.she turn around and looked at sharon with a stern face"arey koi baat nai beta tum to aajkal ke zamane ki ladki ho tum thodi na jaldi uthkar meri tarah ye sab kaam kar paogi,tum to deer raat tak jagogi aur subha late uthaogi,haina?"said swayam's mom
"nai mom esa kuch nai hai mai jaldi hi uthne vali thi par.."she stopped sharon by showing her,her hand"bekar ke bahane bananeki koi zarurat nahi hai"said swayam's mom
"mom mai bahane nai bana rahi..."again she was stopped by swayam's mom who called taani n said"taani idhar aao meri poha banane madad karo"
Immediately taani came in started helping her"mom mai karti hu"said sharon holding spatula.
"Khabardar jo usse chua bhi chodo..chodo usse"swayam's mom immediately took the spatula in her hand and gave it to taani
"Abhi tumhare pehle khane ki rasam bhi nai huvi hai agar abhi khana banagi to paap lagega"said swayam's mom.
"arey paap vaap kuch bhi nai hota hai ye tum jese budho ka vahem hai ye sab bakvas bate meri sharon ke dimaag mai mat dal samjhi?"said the old uff young lady swayam's dadi,she loved swayam and sharon equally she was the reason of swayam's and sharon's marriage.
Sharon had just joined a oldage home 1 month ago and swayam's dadi was one of the trustie of that oldage home,sharon has passed her days in orphanage when sharon was of 5 years her parents left her in that orphanage she herself didnt remembered her parents when she grew up she started earning and also started helping the orphange by giving her earning to them 1 month ago she came to know about that oldage home and thought to work there and help those who were left by there own childrens,on the day when sharon joined swayam's dadi came to the oldage home to take the test of the new worker that is sharon and seeing her caring and sweet nature she daily came and talked to sharon for hours in these days swayam's dadi has came very close to sharon and decided to marry swayam to sharon.
"dadi aap yaha kya kar rahe ho,is vakt aapko aram karna chahiye,apko pata haina apko doctor ne rest karneke liye kaha hai,phir aap ese kyu ghum rahi aur vo bhi yaha kitchen,aap chalo yaha se"said sharon glaring at dadi and pulling her hand
"arey sharon mai thik hu m fine mujhe yaha par rehne dena mujhe dekhna hai teri saas kahin mere khane mai zehar to nai mila rahi haina"said dadi stopping sharon and eyeing at swayam's mom jokingly but in a very serious manner as swayam's dadi and his mom had a very loving relationship they always use to fake fight.
"par dadi..."again sharon was stopped by her mother in law"sharon behas mat karo aur bahar jakar plates lagao"said mom.
"ji mom"saying so sharon went n started adjusting the plates there entered swayam coming down from the stairs he saw sharon adjusting plates on the table her back was facing him suddenly he came from behind and hugged her putting his hands on her waist and kissed on her hairs n said"good morning taani"
sharon was going to say to swayam but some sound came from behind"uhuhu"coughed dadi.
hearing that sharon turn around and it was then swayam noticed it was not taani but sharon"tum"said swayam twisting his mouth in a way i -not-like-it and turn around and both looked the faces in front of them taani and dadi smiling at them in a mischevious way n his mom glaring at them
"mai janti hu swayam tumse sharon ke bina raha nai jata hai but pura din to vo tumhare saath nai reh saktina"said dadi teasing swayam and sharon
"dadi vo to mai..."said swayam in embarresement but stopped as he saw his dad coming down from the stairs
"subha subha kya bate chal rahi hai?"asked swayam's dad
"kuch nai,aap nashta karne baithiye"said swayam's mom.
Immediately swayam's dad sit on the chair and and were shocked to see swayam on time
"kya baat hai aaj laat sahab itna jaldi kese taiyaar ho gaye??"asked swayam's dad in a tone.
Nobody answered but sharon felt it it strange swayam's dad is always sweet with everyone but not with swayam he think swayam is not capable of doing anything but swayam and all the others were used to his tones for swayam
All settled down and had their breakfast after breakfast swayam went to his room to get ready for office and swayam's dad left for office
immediately he entered and closed the door and punched on it"relax swayam ye to roz ka hai mai jaldi se ready ho jata hu varna office jakar bhi ye sunna padega"said swayam to himself and started getting ready as he picked up his watch from the table beside bed and started wearing it he noticed that there was wet towel on the bed and got angry as he just hates putting wet towel on bed"ye kya hai kabhi koi wet towel bed par rakhta hai kya,ye us sharon ne hi kiya hai"said swayam with a irritated face and throw her towel on the floor and got ready and left the room
As swayam was coming down from the stairs swayam's dadi called him"ji dadi apne bulaya"said swayam coming to dadi who was sitting on the sofa in between sharon and taani and sit on his knees holding dadi's hand"ha meri baat sun aaj jaldi ghar ana aaj tere aur sharon ki reception party hai yaad to haina??"asked swayam's dadi"ji dadi mujhe yaad hai app bus aram karna aur apna dhyan rahna"said swayam with care clearly visible in his voice.
sharon smiled seeing him and was just lost in him the care he has for his dadi sharon always adore his this thing"dadi aur swayam ka kitna cuet relationship hai dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hai"thought sharon soon swayam's eyes travelled from dadi from sharon and saw sharon looking at him and smiling he also lost in her eyes and smiled at her dadi ws talking but stopped as she saw swayam and sharon were lost in each other's eyes she saw towards taani and both laughed seeing this firstly taani coughed but stiill both didnt listen atlast dadi called them and both started looking here and there due to embarrasement
"mana tum dono ki nai nai shaddi huvi hai but ye mat bholu hum bhi yahi rehte hai agar tum kaho to tumhare liye ek seperate house le lete hai"said swayam's dadi in a teasing way
"dadi kya bol rahe ho aap mai aap ko chodkar kahi nai ja sakti mai aapse bohat pyaar karti hu"said sharon hugging dadi
"aww mai bhi tumse bohat pyaar karti hu"said dadi hugging her"aur mujhse??"asked swayam and taani together with a pout"tum dono se bhi"and both also hugged dadi
"ab chalo tumhe office nai jana hai kya??"said swayam's dadi
"hmm jana to hai varna khadus ki daat sunni padegi"said swayam laughing
"to chalo ab mai chalta hu bye"said swayam hugging taani and dadi and bidding them bye
swayam was going was he was stopped by taani who said"arey bhai aap bhabhi ko bye nai bologe"getting up from d sofa hearing this swayam stopped and turn around
"bye sharon"said swayam with a fake smile to sharon sharon also replied "bye"with a fake smile
Swayam went to office and sharon sharon went to his room no no their room and saw that her towel was not at the bed the place where she left it nut it was on the floor seeing that she got angry"ye sab us swayam ne hi kiya hoga argh how could he"said sharon to herself stomping her foot on the floor"mujhse panga lega,sharon se,ane do swayam ko phir usse batati hu sharon se panga lena ka anjam(result)"
Tada so guys how was it
sorry for the late update but my exams are still going and i have not slept from 3 days still i decided to update for u guys please give ur reviews properly
Comment long
and as mentioned above from next time i will be sending PMs from this account
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Mansi


Edited by Mansi_PMs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update naughtiinocent awww dadi is so sweet I loved her n swarons bonding swayam's mom is looking rude towards Sharon n why swayam's dad behave like that with swayam??? so many questions na hope Sharon will bring them close vise versa swayam will do superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update the start was a bit rough for both Sharon and Swayam for Sharon with Swayam's mom but Dadi came to the rescue!
And for Swayam his dad well not much but still everyone is used to it so not much for a problem and the teasing part of Dadi and Taani perfect update and no problem if you have exams good luck on it and score high 😉
I hope the next part is a bit more what say revengeful 😆 as it'll be great to see :D
Great and superb update and no need to update soon enough I can wait a while well don't know for others 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing update

Taani and dadi's teasing part was amazing

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Posted: 11 years ago
hii
this is the first tym m commenting on ur ff...so first of all a luvely update...luved swaron moments n dadi n taani teasing swaron..n thanks fr d pm :)
wud b w8ing fr d nxt part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unressing tom 😊 bt i know u rock in d update ...
K ...okay!! Unressing god first typed long comment bt i got clearby mistake ...then ur threathning to comment poor me !! And if i didn't u would have killed me 😭 ...
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K enough of my melodrama . 😆 i wonder i m 6th one to comment bt why always 6th hmm its nt dat bad...okay nw comming to update ...

I was showing my 32 teeth wide smile while reading it jst lyk dis 😃 ...i throughly enjoyed ur update ..
First swayam came n hug sharan mu dat she is taani n den cute dadin taani's teasing part 😳
Dadi toh badi naughty n cool man 😎 warna aajkal. Aisi dadi kaha dikhti hei vry cute relationship between swyam mom n dadi there scene was also cute
Wats wrng wid swyam's dad he thinks dat he is nt capable of anything 🥺
D way u describe dere teasing part n love beween family member grt job my bff 👏
Taani ,swayam n sharan sittimng wid dadi n talks n pout whole scene i can imagine its fab bebs damn good ⭐️
A perfect happy family u protayed yay excluding his dad ...
Swaym again on angry mode he throw d wet towel on floor god he is jst lyk u hehe

Its enough for today n its vry long comment k happy my bff ..
Love u my bff
🤗 n yeah only my bff 😳
Edited by nishu98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update mansi dear...
swayam's Mom nd dadi are sooo swt nd caring...
loved them...

bt why is his dad like that...

swaron llhh...awww..

update soon..
thanks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update.
Taani and Dadi teasing was 😆.
I loved the update.
Update very soon. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update! 👏...Loved it...
TaaYam's daadi is so cool 😎...love her relationship with everyone 😊
Swayam kissed Sharon instead of Taani 😆...and Taani and daadi teasing them 🤣
Really nicely written ⭐️
Thanks a lot for the pm and do continue soon!! 😃

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