SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16*

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

hai iam replaying for the first time in this ff.

really loved it. when i read the prolong i thought swaron will be happyily married, then you changed it i loved the change, swaron fights is always a treat to watch. i send you a buddy requst plz plz plz pm me next tme.

loved swayam and dadi relation, first two updates was nice.

looking forward to the next updates.

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

nice update mansi😃

dadi is so sweet I loved her

Taani and dadi's teasing part was amazing

why swayam's dad behave like that with swayam?

next part exam ke baad update karegi to bhi chalega mansi

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Waaahh jaan!
Now this is how u roll it!
*standing ovation *

Jaan tune kya likha he yaar
Starting se end tak me couldn't stop reading
Haye, dadis too sweet
the convo! An Mai kya kahu .. they were just perfect
Every place every time there wasn't a thing missing!
Extremely loved it!

Aur kya baat he.
3 chapters mai hi 100 comments!
maine kaha tha na jaan ur Fab writer
ab mujhe zara thode tuition's milenge aapse

Just loved loved loved it
love u more

Ab update kar jaldiii

P.s. ab don't deny ki ur not a better writer than me!
Sab tere writing ke diwaane he

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

the update was good

swayam's mother seems a lil strict i guess

poor sharon she had a very rough start thr

thankfully dadi saved her on tat front

the sweet si teasing in b/w by dadi n tanni was very cute

n the intro whr sharon meets swayam's dadi was very well penned

looking forward to the next update 🤗

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Hm Taani n dadi are too naughty...SwaRon fighting...
Amazing update...continue soon...

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

wow dear aswom update..

loved it...

accha bond ha swaron ka uski dadi ke sath..
nd tanni i love dis girl...

nd swaym apna papa ko hitler bolta ha shyad...

update soon...

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Wow.. nice .. update
Luvd Taani nd dadi part!! 😊

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Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

reswa

unres!!

So I just read that intro/prologue. It was really good.👏 I really like that Taani kept come back again and again. Jeez, girl let them be alone😆 Can't wait to see how this story unfolds.😃 Lets continue reading.

P.S Kind of scared to know what happens next.😳

Edited by CrazyRedMary - 11 years ago

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

hello dear🤗

i totally liked the update

sharon is orphan😲

but i loved the bond between sharon and dadi

dadi is soo sweet i felt

y swayams mom sounds like a angry saasi maa pf tv serial😆

and wanna know y swayams dad dont like swayam

soo many mysteries i feel

swayam iz irritated with sharon dat was funny

and the eye lock was too cute

and the way dadi and taani teased swaron was too gud

and how can forget the hug eve though swayam did it cos he thought it was taani but it was tto cute

all in all a nice update

do update soon

p.s. hope the comment is long enough

love

shini

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Finally read the update :)
Swayam's mom kinda looks like vamp
I loved Swayam'sand his dadi 's bond:)She z so cute!
Swayam's dad z bit of a strict and rude to Swayam :(
Loved tge eyelocks between swaron and that hug too ❤️
Lovely update!