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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Wow! what a story
Beautiful ending but I wish u had written more about their honeymoon, about her antics and him living her more and more
Thank u for this lovely story
Waiting to read ur new story soon :)

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Beautifully developed story. Liked it very much. Thanks.

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DDC1

@DDC1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Lovely story. Please write an epilogue of their life back in Delhi. TQ

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#674

That was hottt!! Perfect ending!! Coorg will be eternally linked to romance after this. 😊

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anjubua

@anjubua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Brilliant, perfect ending and a happy one at that
Thanks Rulama and Smitar

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Aww.. beautiful ending
loved the honeymoon journey
just perfect

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neha

@neag

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#677

You can't end iy... pls dear continue if possible

Loved the story alot

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Tht was so so so amazing!!! I love love love the updates and can't believe it end already???? They didn't confess their loved to each other :( I so wish they cud confess to each other :) but I love the story but I feel something was missing !!!! Everything doesn't seems settle :(

Cuz khushi still had tht slight concern abt her relationship with Arnav and they both didn't talk so much abt their feeling for each other. I'm not so sure of Arnav feels for khushi.

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: segad
rumba nalarka mole😃
hope i got that right!

My knowledge of Tamil is abysmal, but I think you got it right..ha..ha..I am taking up your WRITE BUCKET CHALLENGE. The next work will be based on your idea of Shyam being a good man & inadvertently bringing ASR & Khushi closer to each other.

Smita

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: smitar

My knowledge of Tamil is abysmal, but I think you got it right..ha..ha..I am taking up your WRITE BUCKET CHALLENGE. The next work will be based on your idea of Shyam being a good man & inadvertently bringing ASR & Khushi closer to each other.

Smita

wow iam excited to read the new story happy Ganesh Chathurthi