Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#651

OMG... This is magical... Way too beautiful... Loved it to core... It's the dream ending of this amazing journey... Take a bow Smita Di... Love you for this story... This is one of the best, bas... I know u said The End... but plz plz PLZ can you consider an epilogue, pretty pleeease... *making puppy face*
Thanks for the mail Rashmi... Aur tum bhi Di ko bolo naa, sirf ek epilogue... Is it possible...😳

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#652

omg.. this too ended... loved it..

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#653

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Awesomeee end to this wonderful story

Loved it to bitsss!!!

Amazinggg update!!!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#654

wonderful ending was real beautiful

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Awesome ending!1

I never knew it will end this soon!!

Cool cool! in short of words!!

Loved the last part of the story!! hmm how innocent she is!

i so badly want their family to see them like this!!

Hmmm can we have epilogue for OS also?? i know i know!!

By the way i forgot this is an OS in first place!!!

I loved your writing and i love to read it again and again!!

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#656

that was absolutely beautiful Smita !! 👏 like wow ... a simply beautiful piece of creation ... that last prt ws so endearing and hillarious !! 😆

I have one small request though ... can u add a sequel to this OS ?? like I really want to see Arhi's life as they return to RM, everyone living in their own space yet maintaining the bond. can u give it a thought pls ??? 😳

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suri2610

@suri2610

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#657

Truly a good and heart warming end. a wife who thought she was unwanted has now become the very life of her husband. a husband who wants to now 'live' his life and just not exist for work and family. and couple who has truly found a companion in each other...

great work...

no words to descibe the joy you are bringing into the hearts of all us readers...

just love your work

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