Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1 - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am late.. 🤔 Sorry hai ji..

PART 20-24 Dabanng Update... 😎


Arnav & Khushi's convo ne rula diya.. but the ASR finishing the nonsence downstairs was awesome isstyle




Arnav Singh Raizada rocks... Raizada Pariwar in shocks..


I was scared if Khushi & Arnav will get saperated😲 ..but i was wrong...here comes the nxt updates..👏

PART 25-26

"I had no idea, Khushi, that marriage could be so good, such fun," he whispered against her forehead. "That it could change ordinary days in to extraordinary. That I would find a friend in you."




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Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally gt a chance to comment :)
loved the conversation they hd.. arnav n khushi ie...

n though i can see whr arnav is coming frm... arnav... u still shudnt hv talked tht way to the 3 ladies... coz u can blame them fr manipulating u, or possibly forcing khushi to b with a person like him... yet.. he cant say they r treating her bad...

there was another thg tht i feel n it mkd me feel gd... tht nani, mami n anjali... inspite of whtever way arnav behaves... wud never hold khushi responsible fr it...
they knw khushi n arnav both well enuf... to undersatnd tht khushi is nt to b blamed.. n they love khushi enuf... they r concerned fr her happiness ... a lot :)

n tht mks me feel very very gd :) love them fr tht

arnav's reasons... honestly cant say he is totally wrong... he is reasonable too... frm his POV...

n khushi as always is a sweetheart :) :)

luking fwd to more abt them... :) :)

n i still wish tht arnav gets a chance to set the gupta's rt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i was waiting for the conversation it came out simply fab .
came clean about his past
confessed his love for present
and promised commitment for the future in simpler form
and took a promise from her
no big declaration
simly supreb update dear
thank u

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is amazing!!! Loved it but still there is Arnav with his intention of not wanting to get married, is gonna hurt khushi ??? They r sharing a good rapport but still there is something tht is missing in their relationship. It's all khushi effort :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update pleased they had this conversation
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know I have already commented once
but I couldn't stop myself from reading 25 and 26 once more and admire this arnav more and more - what a guy - what a story smita - pls write the next update sooon
rashmi dear - one more hug to you - 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this story so much!!! Even tho some part I dnT agree upon, but happy tht they talk their heart out and tht will give them a way out to sort thing out.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
glad that everything got cleared out
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
BTW... I was wondering, will we get the next (last 4) chapters in the next update?!?😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Smita! It's been so long since I've been on IF, but the first thing I did was track you down and read everything you have written in the past, literally, few months!
I spent a few days just reading and reading and reading. I can honestly not get enough of our words. You etch such beautiful stories with that magic hand of yours!

I love how there are never lose ends, how each character has their role and their importance, how every single thing you write plays into the story somehow so perfectly!

As I read I am left awestruck with the variety of tales you have given us. Not a single one mingling with another, each story is it's own! How you can bring to justice to each story is brilliant!

I really really hope that I will be more of a regular commentor from now on! I just can't keep myself away! Ugh, I am running out of words, but I have a few quotes running through my mind for you!

"What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though." - The Catcher in the Rye.

"All good books are alike in that they are truer than if they had really happened and after you are finished reading one you will feel that all that happened to you and afterwards it all belongs to you: the good and the bad, the ecstasy, the remorse and sorrow, the people and the places and how the weather was. If you can get so that you can give that to people, then you are a writer." - Ernest Hemingway.

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