Kriyansh drabble||Shadows dancing( updated page 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Sweetu Jaanu n hansdsome...
That was so cute :)!!!!!!
Intesrting concept... Continue soon
Wold love to read more n Sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER-2

"Darling shall I feed you" ayesha said sitting on rey's lap
"No, I can manage" Rey said slightly shifting his position feeling uncomfortable
"Rey why do u behave like this.. I'm your wife.. not an alien" Ayesha yelled
"So.. what...?? " he questioned back
"Baby.. relax... " saying this ayesha put her hands around his shoulders and pulled him closer😡
He just hated it. Her touches were like thorns poking him. He hated her voice. His blood boils hearing her voice. He always try to calm himself. But why..?? He doesn't know. He just can't accept her. He went to the room and banged the door hardly. It's been 6 months he met with an accident. He doesn't remember his past. He missed his parents actually not even aware if they exist. He even wonders whether Ayesha is really his wife. More than his present life he loved the shadows in his dreams. He just wanted to think of those shadows and spend his entire life there. He relaxed on the cushion and closed his eyes.
(lines in italics are the shadows running in his mind)
"Hey handsome.. how come You are early from office today..?" Jaanu asked happily😳
"Yaa... because I was missing my sweet baatcutter" he sweetly replied
"Reallyy...??" she blushed
"Yuss... my jaan ur smile makes me forget the world" he gave a quick peck on her cheeks.
"You know I can read your face" jaanu enquired.
"Actually.. woo..."😳
Before he could complete his words jaanu slowly started massaging his head with her tiny little fingers. Her touches are enough for him to forget the world. His pain disappeared. He was lost in her. He slowly took her hand and pulled her front of him.
"baatcutter.." He said looking at her
"Hmm.." she said blushing😳
He started getting closer to her. She was taking each step back and finally hit the wall and he pinned her against the wall. He put his one hand around her waist and pulled her even more closer with his other hand cupping her face. He gently placed his lips on hers. She didn't stop him. She too started responding to his lips. He bit her lower lip and sucked it. She moaned in pain. Within no time their tongues were dancing to their heart beats fighting for dominance.
"Mommyyy.." there was a knock on the door😆
He came back to his senses. He was fed up of everything. He didn't communicate much with people. He was bugged up of the farm house. He wanted to move to Mumbai. For this he knew Ayesha won't agree. He decided to mislead her.

VERY SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE. i PROMISE TO BE REGULAR FROM NOW ON. PLEASE DO REVIEW😊😊
Edited by krazyarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Ahhh these Shadows ^_^... Hell what's this Ayesha chapter :/ Well I am loving it Update soon & Thnx for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
nice update
ayesha is misleading him 😡

waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Nice update...
Rey ko uski baatcutter yaad hai.
Ayesha...She's such a bitch😡
I hate her.
Sorry for the short comment...
Par kya karu. Gotta go,
Busy in preparations of ganesh aarti,
Till res
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Nice update rey was so irritate with tat ayesha but the flash back was really sweet i love that
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Fantastic
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Awesome.. Awesome.. Awesome..

this story is just amazing..

loving it...

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Rey lost his memory n forgot his kriya n daughter...hmm interesting concept.
Read the 2 chappys ..lovely..sweetu n jasnu are too cute.
Excited abt the precap..update soonish
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
What was that Ayesha is Rey's wife.
And he forget kriya his daughter & family.
But glad that he didn't forget them
And had flasses. Anyway really nice update.
Waiting for Rey's Mumbai returns. And kriyaansh
Meeting & plz don't bring that Ayesha between them.
Thanks for the PM and plz update soon.

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