Kriyansh drabble||Shadows dancing( updated page 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
superb concept..

interesting..

mysterious story I guess...

Continue soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
luvely & amazing concept
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Awww Finaly aa gayi
Sorry for late Snehu

& The concept was Intresting
Bt Kriyansh Jinda toh h na

Unki Beti bhi h 😲
Boh ladki kon h
any way its really diffrent story line i would to read it
pls update soon 😳 waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
nce..plz continue..
n dnt 4gt to PM me..:P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Eeepppsss thus is interesting ...Kriya and Rey are married :o as they have THEIR child Kishi ...Well I am waiting for next part update soon waiting ...& Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
CHAPTER-1

It's not my fault, I dream a dream.. and it happens to involve you..

It's not my fault if I say I Love You.. I only speak word's that are true..

Please note that words in italics are rey's dreams and thought's...

"Hey handsome... Good morning.. Wake up..." said his jaan kissing him softly of his cheeks.😳

"Jaanu please... 5 more minutes.." He said covering his face with the pillow.😊

"Sweetu.. won't you wake up.." she asked her daughter sweetly😛

"No mommy.. I won't" replied the cute little girl kishi😊

"Why sweetu?" jaanu asked her daughter softly😊

"You kissed only dad.. Not me.. So.." sweetu replied innocently😆😆😳

Hmm.. Now handsome and jaanu got up and gave a sweet peck to their daughter's pretty pink cheeks.."😳

Rey was lost in his dreams. He came back to his senses only when he heard ayesha yelling "wake up Rey.. What the hell is wrong with you always.. why do you keep smiling when you're sleeping..?"

"Sorry ayesha.." he got up lazily from the bed. He picked up the news paper and sat on the sofa. He again remembered the last night shadows. He only knew that one person was jaanu and other one was sweetu. Rest..??He didn't know.. he was trying to figure out.. He didn't know who they were.. But all he knew was he wanted them no matter what.. He loved them. He felt he belonged to those shadows.😊


REVIEWS PLZZ😊😊

Edited by krazyarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Awww.. dats a cute dream.. 😳
n rey is dreaming... who is dese sweetu n jaanu.. i guess we ll get to know in future..
😛

But Great start..n In rey's dreams dere are two shadows.. to whom he dont know.. i guess he is suffering from amensia :p

although a short update.. but next time i want a long one..
Loved it :D
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Res!
Unres

The dream was really cute...
Okay the dreams...are they just dreams or his past playing in his mind???
Is it something like he's had a memory loss or lost them???
The cute dream was confusing...
Now wat's Ayesha and Rey's relation???
update soon
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Intresting
aaj tak kabhi aise conceptke baare me nai suna
update was quite confusing
but alas it was good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Amazing start..

loved it...

interesting...

waiting for the next part..

continue soon...

wanna clear my all confusions.. :P

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