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-Everglow-

@-Everglow-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#481

Oh!!!!! So, everyone is finally in London!

Poor Panchi, Climatic changes affect her, I reckon...(Same is with me!)

Yudi and Bheem seem quite disturbed! (Poor Boys!)

KaJu are naughty! (or should I say PaSen?)

Last part was quite hilarious!

Thanks for the pm and Continue soon!

P.S.- The Amber Room is often dubbed as the eight wonder of the world!

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8520NK

@8520NK

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Aww!😳 Thank you dear!

@pink- I am going through the same state now.

Hope that you'll like the upcoming update too!😃

Get well soon!😃

The update was really nicee Angela! The quest is becoming even more interesting day by day and am waiting for the mystery to unfold further.

Just send others shopping. They'll enjoy too and we will enjoy too!" Paarth explained. "Paarth.. We?" Vasusen asked. The slipped words from Paarth's tongue, slipped him end into trouble, when Panchi came to rescue "He meant, we will enjoy working for the quest!".

This was really very cutee!😳

Will be waiting!

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Wow gr8 update dear 😊

So Radha is the cute neighbour next door much to Govind's delight. Hope we will now get to see more charming & mischieveous side of Govind. 😳

The history & mystery of Amber room is quite interesting

Poor Yudi & Bheem, missing their GFs 😆

Vasusen sending all of them outside for the quest except Vrushali to work on 'his secret plans'. Something naughty is cooking in Vasusen's mind. 😆

The last part with Vasusen & Paarth pulling each other's leg with err...'secret plans' was hilarious 🤣

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Great one Angela...you gave us a mini history lesson too ...loved it!
Now you have me hooked onto the quest...dont know if i am more curious about how the quest will progress or how our PPs budding romance progresses. I guess both😛
Hoping to see more of London through your eyes...waiting😊

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mothiaai

@mothiaai

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#485

oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lovely update...

maybe u could hv added a bit more description abt parth n panchi...

well d ff is abt d quest bt something more cud hv helped..no offense..

bt d last part were panchi comes to parth's rescue was just fab..

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viji2111

@viji2111

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#486

That was awesome.

Everyone is meeting his/her soulmate.

I am curious about Shubhi, Nakul and Sahdev's better halves.

I am loving this FF.

You write so well.

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#487

🥳🥳Yaaay Radha is here.I was sooo eager to see her.And the quest is great going.Loved the oncept of Amber room.And Yudi and Bheem misding someone was really cute.Waiting for the next

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
Oh!!!!! So, everyone is finally in London!
Poor Panchi, Climatic changes affect her, I reckon...(Same is with me!)
Yudi and Bheem seem quite disturbed! (Poor Boys!)
KaJu are naughty! (or should I say PaSen?)
Last part was quite hilarious!
Thanks for the pm and Continue soon!
P.S.- The Amber Room is often dubbed as the eight wonder of the world!

Thanks dear!😳

The last part..😆 I thought a lot on that!!!

P.S - looks like you have searched a bit about the Amber Room!

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Aww!😳 Thank you dear!

@pink- I am going through the same state now.

Hope that you'll like the upcoming update too!😃

Get well soon!😃

The update was really nicee Angela! The quest is becoming even more interesting day by day and am waiting for the mystery to unfold further.

This was really very cutee!😳

Will be waiting!

Thank you very much dear!!!😳

The quest for me is really the most important part of the story. So, I won't disappoint you with it! You'll surely witness romance, thrill, suspense and betrayal but the highlight with be adventure!!!

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: hpatgiri
Wow gr8 update dear 😊

So Radha is the cute neighbour next door much to Govind's delight. Hope we will now get to see more charming & mischieveous side of Govind. 😳

The history & mystery of Amber room is quite interesting

Poor Yudi & Bheem, missing their GFs 😆

Vasusen sending all of them outside for the quest except Vrushali to work on 'his secret plans'. Something naughty is cooking in Vasusen's mind. 😆

The last part with Vasusen & Paarth pulling each other's leg with err...'secret plans' was hilarious 🤣

Happy that you liked it!

Now I think the 'secret plans' could have been elaborated but still! 😉