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superb.. Lovely.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. Lovely.. Thanks for pm..

Angel!!!!!😉its beautifully written darling😳😃loved the way subhi teased paarth...!*😳❤️and the song part was amazing...😃 i feel its panchi and subhi in it...😛..anyways the vru and vasusen part was soo cute and KaJu😳😳😳liked it a lott😉cant wait for next part do continue soon😳😛

Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

Angel!!!!!😉its beautifully written darling😳😃loved the way subhi teased paarth...!*😳❤️and the song part was amazing...😃 i feel its panchi and subhi in it...😛..anyways the vru and vasusen part was soo cute and KaJu😳😳😳liked it a lott😉cant wait for next part do continue soon😳😛

Thanks you deary!! Subhi teasing Paarth I liked it too. Song part haan when I was writing I also felt like Subhi and Panchi can do it together. Thanks dear for your lovely comments.

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

Thanks dear!! Now song ki kahani is between sheets. Baad me batati hoon. PP scene, dekhti hoon , maybe next or else. Yeah... Madhuri and Aishwarya kill it on the song. Just excellent

Omg!!!!This is not fair😆.You left me sooopercurious.What is Panchi up to???Is Subhi the second woman and is Parth their man???You took my sleep away till you gice the next part.And my Vasusen is gonna get married soon And Yudhishtir too.But I wonder how will Devika handle our 🤓Yudi.And update faaast😳

I was dying to post my comment but IF was not allowing me to do so for last 4 days. Neways I am back.

It was an amazing update 😊

All the emotions were beautifully captured in this update.

Subhi teasing Paarth with his encounter with Panchi 😆

My fav jodi Ka-Vru finally decided to take the big step of tying knot from their live-in relationship 😳 ❤️. The convo between them was very matured and emotional. Vru was very good. 😊

Panchi roaming around in an unknown place that too wearing saree & exclusive jewellery she doesn't even know the names of 😆. Was she dreaming / having premonition / having flashes of her past ( Pyramid of Sorrows Effect)

And yes the musical part... the song reminded me of the amazing & graceful performances of my Fav Madhuri & Aish. 😊 With the flow of the songs & Panchi's reaction to it, looks like Kabhi Sauten Kabhi Saheli part will start soon (Dont mind but I m quoting from one of the Ekta Kapoor's serial Title 😆. It s nothing to do with ur story). Panchi-Subhi fighting for Paarth 😆

Ah..u have ended it with so much suspense. I am super super curious to read the next part.

Update it soon dear 😊

Originally posted by: vaikartana

Omg!!!!This is not fair😆.You left me sooopercurious.What is Panchi up to???Is Subhi the second woman and is Parth their man???You took my sleep away till you gice the next part.And my Vasusen is gonna get married soon And Yudhishtir too.But I wonder how will Devika handle our 🤓Yudi.And update faaast😳

I see! You got excited! Well that is contenting for me! Guys Vasusen-Vrushali marriage is gonna happen soon so decide your clothes.😉

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

I was dying to post my comment but IF was not allowing me to do so for last 4 days. Neways I am back.

It was an amazing update 😊

All the emotions were beautifully captured in this update.

Subhi teasing Paarth with his encounter with Panchi 😆

My fav jodi Ka-Vru finally decided to take the big step of tying knot from their live-in relationship 😳 ❤️. The convo between them was very matured and emotional. Vru was very good. 😊

Panchi roaming around in an unknown place that too wearing saree & exclusive jewellery she doesn't even know the names of 😆. Was she dreaming / having premonition / having flashes of her part ( Pyramid of Sorrows Effect)

And yes the musical part... the song reminded me of the amazing & graceful performances of my Fav Madhuri & Aish. 😊 With the flow of the songs & Panchi's reaction to it, looks like Kabhi Sauten Kabhi Saheli part will start soon (Dont mind but I m quoting from one of the Ekta Kapoor's serial Title 😆. It s nothing to do with ur story). Panchi-Subhi fighting for Paarth 😆

Ah..u have ended it with so much suspense. I am super super curious to read the next part.

Update it soon dear 😊

@bold - Omg! Kabhi Sauthan Kabhi Saheli!!!😲😲😲😆😆😆

By the way guys our FF got a beautiful banner check the first page! I am sure you'll like it. Thanks to starry.pheonix