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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1091

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Yesss, finally I managed to unres here! Wohooo!
Now, I absolutely loved the chapter! Finally, here comes the diamond of Zeus. How do you manage to come up with such adventurous names?

I guess after a lot of search about Greek, Indian, Norse, Egyptian, Chinese and Japanese culture, you can do it too! 😆 Ancient people were much more creative after all!😉

I really liked the subtle use of humour where Nakul is concerned, it really suites his personality, the fashion conscious person that he is supposed to be😉

I just imagined him like that. Plus, I actually thought about Vin's personality first. 😆😳

Finally, the misunderstandings are sorted! Yippee, glad that they are done with and now the brotherly love and affection will come in!😃

I have more stuff planned. Dont you wanna know how that happened? 😉

Eeks, the description of the moment when the diamond comes out, defying Newton's Laws, was absolutely wonderful, the whole use of a little drama, then Sahadev's line and finally the arrival of the most awaited! Fantastic Angiee👏

Thank you. I am dramatic you see. 😆

Waiting for what comes next, the new beginnings*huge smile*

coming soon.

My replies in purple. Thanks for such a wonderful reply. 🤗

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1092

Originally posted by: sadiasaba68
superb update di 👏
if madhav said to wait there then I'm sure he knows that everyone will be fine...
nakul still worried about jacket
omg how'll Vasusen vrushali n sahdev will come out 😔
continue soon di...
interesting precap hint...
sorry 4 being late di.. had exams 😔

Oh! Thanks a lot dear. More is waiting in for all. 😃

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1093

Originally posted by: Cortana
I got my diamond!🥳 I got my diamond. Oh yeah 😃
Yup. You can enjoy for now. You never know when you need to "sacrifice" it.😉
what an entry, a non Newtonian fluid fountain with a diamond

Oh! that hit me while I was sleeping. 😆 But in my dream, it was a big star instead of a diamond. silly dreams. 😆

I am guessing it won't be as easy to get as it looks as that frozen lake could or might not be strong enough to hold everybody. vrushali is still there I think, unless I read it wrong.

Now how will they get the diamond I wonder?

Oops! I did not write that. I thought that writing it till here and then leaving it to the readers to imagine is good.😉

Thanks a lot Arya! My replies in purple. 😊

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1094

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Mindblowing chapter Angela😆
Thanks a lot.

Loved vasusen hugging paarth and apologizing to him❤️

I love kaJu after all.😆😉

Finally the diamond of Zeus comes out in a mysterious way⭐️

Yup. wanted to give it a special entry.

I like to know how vasusen realized his mistake in mistaking paarth to be the culprit?

I want to know how vasusen,vrushali and sahadev came out of the palace?😳

You'll get to know how all that happened. But all on right time.😃

Strange things are happening 😃

Yup. preparing the foundation of the upcoming part from here only.😉

Thanks again for such a wonderful reply. My replies in pyrple. 😃

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1095

Originally posted by: Sonatia
My kaju...great update di but such a small one. I want a big update.cnt wait 4 the more..update soon...

Dont worry dear. A long and happy chapter coming soon. Thanks for the wonderful reply.

😉

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1096

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Sorry being late Angie... but what superb updates 👏
Finally they got The diamond of zeus...& yes in the last about the lake freezing and fountain coming up...defying gravity...that too with Shubi's touch ...thats again mysterious
😛

As I said, all in right time. I wanna keep some things undercover as of now, to give a big opening soon. 😊

But how did Vasusen, Vrushali & Sahdev came out of the castle
Continue soon 😃

All on the right time.

Thanks a lot of your wonderful reply. Angela. 😃

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1097

Originally posted by: sadiasaba68
great update di 😃
finally they found it...
Yup. They found it.
waiting for the next update 😃
continue soon ⭐️

Coming today. A happy happy update.

Thanks a lot for the reply. 😃

And dear, long time. 🤗

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1098

Originally posted by: Maverick_me
beautiful update Angela ⭐️
sorry for being late

No problem. Thanks. 😃

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1099

Chapter 50 : Before a New Start

"Lord! I am so tired!" Nakul said as he threw himself on the couch. With all the adventure and freezing and breaking and diamonds, his body could not rest for a second. He was the happiest person (after Bheem) to come back home.

Bheem rushed towards the refrigerator and embraced it tightly. "I missed you so much my love!" He said as he place a kiss on its smooth surface. Then, he opened it and happily had an ice-cream while thinking what to eat next.

Sahdev was busy in transporting a big pile of books from the car to his room when Nakul said, "And yet again! You are here with the books."

"I love them! I completed Political Science while going and completed History while returning! All that I am left with, is Geography!" Was Sahdev's reply to Nakul. Nakul loved to tease Sahdev and Sahdev loved to reply intelligently.

While Vasusen and Vrushali rushed to their room, Shubhi was busy in setting her room right. Though, they had gone for a few hours but it felt like a storm came and displaced every single atom in the house. Once done, she sat on the bed and then started reading her favourite novel, Sherlock Holmes. Classic mysteries presented in great style was what she thought was correct for a book.

Govind went to store the very important gem safely. Everyone forgot that their aim was to collect and keep the game safely until they reach their goal. But Govind, he knew everything and never gave anyone a chance to create a problem. Though, some problems were still prevailing, they would end soon.

And while all of them were busy in eating, storing, resting and in managing, Paarth wanted to talk with Panchi. But unfortunate that he was, Panchi could not be seen around. Disappointed, he went to his room, where under book, 'How to Manage without Mismanaging' he found a not addressed to him.

"Paarth, will be waiting for you on the terrace. Hope that you will come.

From,

Someone you want to talk to."

TBC...😉

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1100

NOTE

And today, this FF completes a long journey of 50 chapters. 50 long chapters, of adventure, emotion, happiness and hopefully entertainment. But these 50 chapters were completed due to readers.

You all, all wonderful readers, everyone reading this note, whether they comment on it or read it silently, are important to me. All of you have encouraged me to write, and to evolve into a better writer.

So, while this work reaches this milestone, a lot more to come, I cannot miss to thank all of you, every single one, for being with me and helping me it bringing it so far (in spite of the slow and late updates).

At last, a lot has come, but a lot is left to arrive so - The FF must go on! 😆😉

Thank You.

Angela Grokes.

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago