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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it! arnav sure has realised by now that khushi is in fact innocent. and we saw the first stirring of desire and love in them. but then the divorce proceedings in the first chapter after 6 months? how and why did arnav n khushi got divorced ? how come arnav agree for it? and also in the first chapter u had written that arnav's mother was mourning. for whom? does something happen to anjali? pls update soon..
Edited by poojasidd123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story
just read all parts two time
its mindblowing
in first part its clear that both arnav and khushi start loving each other
than why they get divorceed
arnav marry her forcibly
but in latest chapter its clear that he is falling for her
everything is due to this anjali
she is psycho
she need mental treatment
she tell lie about her pregnancy to arnav so that arnav will force shaym to marry her
she know that if she did not tell thislie arnav will never takr her side
she lock khushi in room she is dangerous
and about shyam i donot know but i donot feel any sympathy for him
i donot want arshi sepration
arnav mother is sending khushi back
but they will get divorce after 6 months mthis means khushi will stay with arnav for 4 months
what happen in this time period that all thos reach to sepration
i hope u will give us happy ending donot like sad endings
thnx for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
It was an awesome update dear. Now, when Khushi is going to leave the house I hope Arnav realize his mistake as well as Khushi's importance. Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Cupid has struck finally ❤️

Both Arnav and Khushi are feeling the first jolts of attraction , they might not be able to understand or name the emotion but they do acknowledge that something is there . Loved Arnav taking care of Khushi and consoling her and the little romantic moment they shared , just wow

Avni is such a strong lady .. to stand for what is right and that too against her own children is a remarkable deed .. hope she is able to put some brains in Anjali ..

Can't believe Anjali locked Khushi in the dark room and what's with that foul language .. God , both brother sister duo are impossible ...

I thought in the beginning of the story that for once this Shyam was not at fault , he truly loved Khushi and was not aware of Anjali's feelings but OMG what a twist , Anjali was pregnant !!!

Or did she just lie about it , she can totally do it , she is one jealous , sick person 😔

Nice chapter , waiting for the next update :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Asom updt anjali has sick mentality n jelos for khushi i think she lie about pregnancy lov avni such strong woman waiting for nex part
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Posted: 11 years ago

You had nightmares throughout the night. So I had to do this. Ab tum thik ho?And that moment she realized there would never be anyone else for her. There will be Arnav; only Arnav in her life.👏👏👏the best part of this update.

Very beautifully written n an amazing update..
I think Anjali needs treatment.
now I have some doubts regarding Shyams love for Khushi,
the truth of Anjali was carring Shyam's child and she had to abort it.
while Avni told khushi that Shyam never cheated Anjali it was Anjali who was in love with Shyam.
the little bit change in Arnav's behavior towards Khushi after listening his mom and Khushi's conversations.
The way Anjali tried to kill her that was very pathetic ..
loved the way Arnav was there for her and took care of her.
The dance show and the attraction towards her...
Shyam if he loves her he wouldn't meet her at the temple.
Avni and her decision to send her away from her son..may be wise may be not...
in all these things no one asked Khushi what she wants ??
Arnav I can understand his actions ..
but I can't understand Shyam ..where he claims that he loves her..
Avni who is a supporter of Khushi why she took decision on behalf of her.. I know her intentions are good ..just want to provide her freedom and happiness what she deserve but still.

One question for you writerji..
is this TS has happy ending ???😳

eagerly waiting for the next part ...
thanks for the update.
take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3 A
awesome...
poor Khushi...
damn that Anjali...
Arnav is gonna regret so much later...
so his mom has come to about the truth...
OMG poor Khushi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful!!
Update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 2 was amazing...
really liked the flow of the events!!!
arnav is definitely consumed by his sisters thought..
poor khushi was made to suffer in all these chaos..
shyam seems nice don't know the real truth!!
Edited by arnaushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank god Avni is taking control...
Anjali is horrid...

Arnav is blind in his sister's love

Poor Khushi...

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