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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3.

W T F! :O

That was a DARE! and I never even thought about it😲

Kria punched a guy becoz of her best friend..

While it was just a dare for her best friend :O

OMG.

Kria's super crazy friends😆

Rey's tweet 😆

This is interesting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnks for ur views snigs.. dats really meant a lot :D
n i m glad u like it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4.

Kria is a doll with evil parents lol..or protected :P

The girl with Rey is surely a bitch😆

Kria should have hitted her instead of Rey😆

I thought she would escape since she escaped from Rey on the next hit😆

But all thanks to that girl😆

Kria running from Rey was written so well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5.

I knew Rey would trace Kriya out but in her school :O

Soniya is a bitch lol..I am sure she is.

Rey's that friend..

I was gonna hate that Rohan but it felt good when he said they wont hurt her.

I am liking Rohan😆

Rey calling Kria towards him and pulling her by the wrist did make me shiver..

"Go on a date with me".

Did he seriously ask her that? :O

I love KRIA in this Fiction and REY too.

They are stubborn, egoistic and yet so loving!

Rey calling her as Ramaira..

The bad looking Gangster that another guy...

I am glad he came..seeing him Kria would realise Rey n his friends r better😆

I love how the story is shaping up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 6.

Soniya is a nutcase 😆

Rey's command for Kriya to go on a date with him...

Soniya and girls saying more about Rey and his gang..

The way everything is unfolding is fab!👏

And the call in the end where Rey is muttering curses to someone on other call..

and Kria misunderstanding it to be on her.

Interesting ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Chapter 7.

This chapter is so beautiful and it has its own essence!

The arrogant and yet calm Rey who was trying to sound good and yet cusses at times..

Kria who is slightly stubborn yet stubborn to actually start liking him..

Rey wanted Kria and expected her to be with him feels so good reading..

Soniya dating...hmm..I feel he will be that guy whom Rey has punched..

but Rey?!

Bruises on Soniya ;)

Rey saving Soniya becoz he thought it was Kria..

DAMN GOOD! ^_^

He cares for her though Soniya was saved 😆

Rey and Soniya?

NO PLEASE.

Thank god he was for Kria there😆

Soniya so deserved this! ;)

I was like Rey..you are jerk when he scolded her when she tugged his arm😆

But the way he scolded that Idiot was ^_^

I like how you described Kria dressing up in the dress Rey gave for her..

and how she was commenting on him..

Rey's parents ? :P

Rey's parents liking and getting impressed by Kria..

and then their date..

I thought it was a beginning of LOVE..

But Its over? :(

UPDATE PLEASE.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i'm highly impressed with ur comments snigs :D :P
tomrw next update pakka.. n few more surprises..;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti_arsha

i'm highly impressed with ur comments snigs :D :P
tomrw next update pakka.. n few more surprises..;)


YAYYY🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Baby... I LOOOVVVED THIS FF. OMGGG! Like EVERYTHING. From Rey to Kria... And REY! OMG. Such a HOT bad ass. ☺️ EEPS.


Pls. Upadate Asappp 🤗 And name soch koi achcha sa iska :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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End mai he says. "Its Over" 🥺

But I know he can't let his retard go! 😉 ❤️ HAYEEE

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