SwaRon SS: She Loves Me..She Loves me Not. Chap4 Pg:13 *Replies Added*

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome start...

and what a place to stop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

if you write this way, I dont think it will give you enough time to prepare for the next... you need to hurry up...

its brilliant...

waiting for thenext

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

it was a very nice update nishi

fantastic way to begin wit the story

it was so picturesque tat i cud imagine the whole story

narrated by u

poor swayam was dozing off during work

kitna hardworking hai

loved the introduction u gave to swayam

curious to know wat will happen inside

the vanity room

as a writer i hav seen u grow n ur

stories hav such maturity the writing style

hav improved so much its impressive raw n eye catching

i hav to say i m going to fall for tis ss just like i fell for ur

other works

do update soon nishu 🤗

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

aiyooo mummyyy this is so damn amazing!!!

gosh swayam <3 i first thought he is the actor but no :v

ahaha this is so amazing!!

really loved the concept...

want to read more...jaldi update kar!

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Reserved :D

^Unreserved^

Wow. . .What a piece. . .I so damn loved Swayam here.In his total Majnu Mode.He has fallen for Sharon. . .Eeeppp.
Update next soon Nishi. . .I am really eager to read this. 😊

Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

really great start dear... swayam is in love with sharon... love at first sight...awww.. sharon is an actress...awesome.. update soon plz pm me whenever you update...

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice start gal.
i jst found it cute wen u xplained swayam 's dreaminess.
Updatd soon.
Wud lov to read more

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Great Start dear 👍🏼

Concept seems different and Interesting

Would surely love to read what more you have in store for your readers

And also I guess the first hit at an SS is surely going Rock 😉

So brace yourself girl 😆

Continue soon

Would love to read an update written by an Amazing writer sometime soon 😃

P.S Thank for the PM and keep sending more of them, they us Happy you see 😉

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bhumika gaur

@minimini66

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

yeeeahhh i pressed the 30th like button 🥳🤪
vaise coming to the ss... i loved it 👏
want to read more 😳
and as your demand is almost completed we want the update sooon
do PM me 😉
MINI