SwaRon FF: Remember You

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

this was beautiful

simply beautiful

loved each and every bit of it

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Loved the chapter 14 so much that I couldnt stop myself sharing on FB..Thank you so much. Its getting more interesting. The whole Chai Date, Sharon's confession memories was perfectly put. brilliant writing gal. Keep it up

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

This story always make me cry...
U really wrote it very beautifully...
Luvd it...
Can't explain my words in writing...I m not that Good to express my feeling...
Update next update soon...
Thanx fr pm...

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

beautiful... simply beautiful... u penned it so well... der pain, der love... its beautiful...

plz update soon... ❤️

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

That was definitely one gorgeous piece of work.
What emotions and the dance. Beautiful.
as you said this chapter really came out to be beautiful.
Thanks for the PM.

I hope that Sharon gets that one memory. And she comes back to swayam.
Update soon.

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

This was a super amazing update. Loved it to the core😊. Every emotion was beautifully penned. I don't think the update was unnecessarily stretched. Longer your update, happier are your readers⭐️

You really are an amazing writer & you have a fabulous way of writing👏. Am loving it. Impatiently waiting for the next update. Plz pm me next time.

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

It was a very cuet part

Update soon

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

nice one you portrayed of sharon is amazing

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

sorry 4 d late cmnt

the updtes were really nice

drunk sharon was indeed a treat to read

she took a whole bottleof champaigne to open up

the moment theey shared..wow

she kissed him

and didnot regret it

and he being the perfect gentleman

tried to handle the situation

sharon wanted to love swayam

but is in a fix

she doesnt remember anytjing

the way swayam told her wat happened by actually not teling the thing

showz how a gentleman he is

themorning...

sharon remembered everything and her smile wen swayam hid the fact that they shared a kiss

swayam left sharon back home

sharon trying to jog

her solo dance

swayam coming there

their rehearsal hall moment

swaron duet

i cud really visualize it

the surprise package was sharons forehead kiss after their convo

i particularly lovd this

""Swayam," she shook her head, "Our love is just like a fairytale to me. It's something that I have heard of; something that is too perfect to exist, and that I have never experienced in person."