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velvetrose

@velvetrose

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

read all parts

amazing story cont soon

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

loved it Dear

awesome update

I just loved mehreen

loved the dresses

& jwelery was awesome

It looked really cute & beautiful

mehreen rohail bonding is so good dear

kanjoos hehe to good

I must say his taste is really good

sheher ne present accept kiya good

shadi ke naam par ehreen k reaction was too good

fb was good

& finally party

loved the dances dear awesome

thechemistry was good

I am too amazed with love of this man & wife

their love is so deep seher still feel for rohail even when she pulls hin for adance tha was really cute

sheher & rohil dance was so soo good 😳

Thanks for teh PM

continue soon 😊

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Superb update👏

their chemistery is superb😳

d song was perfect according 2 d situation😃

lyrics were put in d perfect way👏

n their outfits😲

they were jst mindblowing😃

loved it❤️

update soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

love

Mansi😊

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Awwwsssmmm Part
Loved it
Cont Sooon
Thanks for PM

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Pankhuri

@pan02

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

hey yaar..

sabse pehle to sorry..

itne late se comment karne k liye..

was bz a bit..

coming 2 ur story..

its nothing bt just amazing..

matlab seriously yaar kahan se late ho aise concepts..

hatts off 2 u guys..

just loved d story..

though wanna hate A here..

M is so cute..

love it d way she's trying 2 get her bhai n bhabhi close again..

poor S..

she lost her memory..

n doesnt remember about her marriage n thinks that A is her fiance!!

feels very sorry 4 our hero..

he loves her so much

gr8 parts yaar.. 😊

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Superb update

feel so sorry for poor Rohail his wife is in front of him n he can't get close to her as she doesn't remember him or their marriage ...Def bummer

nice to see fact though that when they were dancing she was thinking about why she feels right with him n how she missed him when he didn't come to hospital

as for Aahil I have a lot of unpleasant words to describe him but won't say on here as too rude

one thing I will say is that slime to try to make seher jealous n notice him(which i was ssooo chuffed it didn't work) used poor mahreen n was hurting her too i so wanted her to slap him HARD

anyways nice to see seher lost in Rohail n feeling comfy so close to him

can't wait to see what's gonna happen next at least aahil should feel guilty for hurting mahreen but doubt it poor lassie u can't help who ur attracted too even a guy like him

thanks for pm plz keep em coming N continue soon

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Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: glmorous_diva
hey,am new reader of ur ff...

superb ff

nyc concept nd introduction amazing

i like both the grls

prologue ws awsm

You beautifully wrote down the pain and agony and worry too of a loving husband..

He is so broken up knowing ki Seher doesnt remember him now😭😭

last ka scene where he tucks her hair behind her ears was Aww..❤️❤️ And when he kissed her ring remembering their vow was cute

chapter 1

mujhe Rohail ki condition pe itni hasee aa rhi hai na..🤣🤣🤣 Bechare ke saath sab kuch ulta seedha ho rha hai..😆

Pehle Car kharaab hui..🤣 Uske baad tow karne ke liye ek ghanta..🤣 Thankfully Bus ka option available tha...nhi toh mar jata bichara🤣🤣

finally they meet..😳 Their meet was written beautifully..❤️ But the grl is lost in her own thoughts..😕

He is mesmerised by her..😳😳 And suddenly she luks at him...finally😆😆

loved their cute convo...

chapter 2

sehar kitne swal puchti h yr aur bichare ko bhi confuse krdiya apne swalo se😆😆

.. Btw She is soo innocent ki Rohail ne patti padhayi aur woh maan bhi gyi..🤣 Aur then enters Aahil! Possesive about his love haan?? 😉Aur Yeh shuru hua Aahil-Rohail ka Tashan!! Kya looks diye hain ek doosre ko aur kya dialouges
superb

and Seher ki tabiyat kharaab ho gyi As she got the flashes of Her Own Car Crash.. Dr Tariq is too irritated seeing Aahil there...kitni care krta h yr...soo swt

chapter 3

really 2-2 update sath mein...yeh toh treat hui😆😆

sehar aahil ki smile ka reason h...soo swt

usne proposed kiya aur who maan bhi gyii,,...yippee

bt his parents😡hate them ...itna pyaar krte h dono ek dusre ko lekin nhi apne bte ki khushi se zyda unhe upper class and lower class ki pdi h😡😡

Seher is sweet! She is even ready to sacrifice her love for Aahil's sake..!! This is true love..❤️She even gave their engagement ring back to him.. The whole fb was very emotiona😭l! Spcly the part where he chases her after the bus..bt am sure aahil uska pta lga hi lega...Im soo feeling bad for both men!! 😔😔 And What to say about the song sequence!?? superb yaar! 👏👏

chapter 4

superb update

sehar ki swtly complain kr rhi thi...shooo shwweet

its gud to see he trust his wife a lot bt kisi aur ke chod dena is bad

abhi bhi rohail pr haq jtati h ...awww

their scenes ws like😳😳😳

.. To Mehreen is cuming to meet Seher! Loved Seher's excitement!! So Here we have Mehreen!! Tadaa!!! She is very very pretty!

chapter 5

Awesome updat
30 days challenge on winning or losing on his own wife
wat will happen if seher come to know about d bet.

I liked cafeteria convo.
Nd specially rohail trust nd confidence on his wife nd she will b his

The way she talk to herself. The way shs adore aahil nd then scold herself is really cute.
Loved d way she said bhabhi is just for bhai.

now finally chapter 6😆

waise kehne ki zrurt h ...upr itni baar bol chuki bt still again bol deti hu

amazing update😆

beautiful described

nd dresses ws mindblowing

loved ur ff

update soon nd don't forget to pm me