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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: velvetrose

read all parts

amazing story cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

loved it Dear
awesome update
I just loved mehreen
loved the dresses
& jwelery was awesome
It looked really cute & beautiful
mehreen rohail bonding is so good dear
kanjoos hehe to good
I must say his taste is really good
sheher ne present accept kiya good
shadi ke naam par ehreen k reaction was too good
fb was good
& finally party
loved the dances dear awesome
thechemistry was good
I am too amazed with love of this man & wife
their love is so deep seher still feel for rohail even when she pulls hin for adance tha was really cute
sheher & rohil dance was so soo good 😳
Thanks for teh PM
continue soon 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lighthearted

update 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98

Superb update👏

their chemistery is superb😳
d song was perfect according 2 d situation😃
lyrics were put in d perfect way👏
n their outfits😲
they were jst mindblowing😃
loved it❤️
update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Part
Loved it
Cont Sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pan02

hey yaar..

sabse pehle to sorry..
itne late se comment karne k liye..
was bz a bit..
coming 2 ur story..
its nothing bt just amazing..
matlab seriously yaar kahan se late ho aise concepts..
hatts off 2 u guys..
just loved d story..
though wanna hate A here..
M is so cute..
love it d way she's trying 2 get her bhai n bhabhi close again..
poor S..
she lost her memory..
n doesnt remember about her marriage n thinks that A is her fiance!!
feels very sorry 4 our hero..
he loves her so much
gr8 parts yaar.. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

Superb update

feel so sorry for poor Rohail his wife is in front of him n he can't get close to her as she doesn't remember him or their marriage ...Def bummer
nice to see fact though that when they were dancing she was thinking about why she feels right with him n how she missed him when he didn't come to hospital
as for Aahil I have a lot of unpleasant words to describe him but won't say on here as too rude
one thing I will say is that slime to try to make seher jealous n notice him(which i was ssooo chuffed it didn't work) used poor mahreen n was hurting her too i so wanted her to slap him HARD
anyways nice to see seher lost in Rohail n feeling comfy so close to him
can't wait to see what's gonna happen next at least aahil should feel guilty for hurting mahreen but doubt it poor lassie u can't help who ur attracted too even a guy like him
thanks for pm plz keep em coming N continue soon

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On the Dance Floor...

Aahil stand there left behind on the dance floor after Mahreen left pushing him away. That push made him come back to the world. Now that his head was cooling a little, he realizes what he has done. "F*ck!" he cussed in his head. Though its not his style to go around saying sorry, he was about to go behind her and apologize as he realize what he did was wrong. Just a simple sorry, nothing special. However Seher and Rohail walks up to him at that time smiling, "You are late!" Seher accuses him.

Before he can say anything to her, Rohail asks him a question that he was not too happy to answer, "What happened to Mahreen? Why did she leave like that?" Rohail asks him inquiringly. "Well, hello to you too Seher," he tells her sarcastically as she rolls her eyes at Aahil. He turns to Rohail and shrug, "I don't know. She just left," he lied to him knowing very well why she left like this. He was guilty, a little, but was not about to show that to anyone. "Really?!" Rohail asked frowning. "Okay, I'm gonna go check on her," he left after giving a smile to Seher and a nod to Aahil.

Aahil look at Seher and ask her hand for a dance. She look at his hand and gave him a sad smile. "I'm sorry but we can't dance," she said softly. "Why?" he asked confused. "Log kya kahage Aahil. Hamari abhi tak shaadi nahi hoi. Sorry," she tells him with apologetic smile. He nods understanding but he was still mad that she danced with Rohail but he calm himself, somehow, not wanting to get into argument regarding Rohail. "How about we see the rain outside?" he ask her hoping she would say yes. "Sure there is another big window in this house. I will take you there," she says excitedly. He smiles back at her as he follow her out of the drawing room.

In the Living Room...

Mahreen just couldn't take this any longer nor could she hold her tears any longer. It was all too much! The close dance with Aahil, where she could only think how close they were, but then he didn't know how she felt and definitely didn't feel anything for her. Then there was Bhai and Bhabhi who had their own issues. She couldn't help Aahil get to them but she couldn't help feel what she feels for Aahil, which she SHOULD NOT! She knows that which makes this all so much more complicated.

She runs down the hallway into the living room with these thoughts in her mind. It was dark as the lights were off. There was another big window which was the only source of light in the room. She walks to the window avoiding hitting the couch and the glass table. Mahreen puts both her hands on the window palm down holding it as she looks out but what she saw outside was not the garden but her dance with Aahil and her Bhai and Bhabhi dancing beside them.

Aahil was looking at bhabhi with hurt eyes while Bhai and Bhabhi were lost in each other. Which side am I? Bhai or Aahil? Arghhh. Bhai! Definitely, Bhai.. maybe..??? She looks away as she tightly shut her eyes. Freshly new tears run down her face as she make her hands into a fist and slams it to the window.

"Why? Why? Why?" she asked to no one in particular. "Why did it have to be you?... Why you, Aahil? Why do you have to be Bhabhi's fiance? WTH! You are not even her fiance as she is married to Bhai! Arggh! What am I saying" she cried in frustration and slams her head on the window crying her heart out quietly. Just then somebody grabs her arm and turns her around. She looks up hoping beyond hope that it would be Aahil but it turn out to be Rohail. She looks away to cover her disappointment of not finding HIM and wiping her tears.

Rohail holds her by both of her arms as he make her look at him. He was scared beyond belief. "What could have possibly happen that could have brought the happy-go-jolly Mahreen to tears," he wonder as he look at her with questioning eyes. "Kya howa Mahreen? And don't you dare hide it from me," he said in a little stern voice. "Kuch nahi bhai," she said looking away as she did not want to be another reason for a conflict between Aahil and Rohail.

"Come on, Mahreen. Whats wrong? Tell me!" Rohail ask again cupping her face making her look at him. But her lips were sealed, she is not about to give Aahil away. "Nothing Bhai, bas apko aur bhabhi ko dheka ankha bhar aye," she said smiling as tears still glisten her eyes. Rohail look at her one second checking if she lied then he shakes his head as he let her go and take a step. She looks at him surprise. "Jhoot! You will never cry seeing us together. You will be happy. Mahreen khushi hot hai toh woh roti nahi but she jumps around and goes all crazy," he said shaking his head not believing his Mahreen was lying to him.

She looks away not meeting his eyes. She couldn't tell him the real reason. She just couldn't. "Is this about Aahil? Did he do something?" he asked after thinking for a while. At his mention of his name, Mahreen look up at him instantly. "Its about him. Isn't it?" Rohail ask reading Mahreen's expressions. "No no, Bhai. It's nothing like that," Mahreen said quickly as she takes a step towards him. Rohail takes back immediately not letting her come near him.

"You tell me, what he did to you? He was dancing with you," Rohail tell her nodding making her know that he saw them, "did he do something or did he say something?" Rohail ask her demanding an answer. "No no. Bhai asa kuch nahi hai. You are getting this all wrong," Mahreen tries to convince him but he wasn't satisfy with her answer. He shakes his head and walks away to find Aahil and give him a piece of his mind.

In the Hallway...

As Rohail come out of the room, he turns to find Aahil and Seher walking to him. Seher was cheerfully telling him something. He marches up to Aahil and grabs him by his collar and pins him to the wall. "What the F..." Aahil stops himself in the last minute as Rohail comes up to him from nowhere and pins him to the wall holding his collar. "How could you be so insensitive?" Rohail spit the words at him as he pin him with his disgusted look. "Rohail! what are you doing? Yeh aap kya kar raha hai?" Seher asked shocked standing there not sure what to do.

"Seher, stay back. Yeh meri aur Aahil kay beech ki baat hai so let us handle that," Rohail said glaring at Aahil not even bothering to look at Seher as he was furious right now. Seher takes a step back not believing that Rohail just said that to her. She runs down the hallway. "Mahreen is not part of this bet. So YOU! Stay the h*ll away from her!" Rohail growl at Aahil. Aahil looks at him bored though he very well knew why Rohail was acting like this. He pulls his collar out of his grip and pushes him away a little.

"You don't tell me what to do! Okay," he said as he fix his jacket arrogantly. Rohail was about to answer him back when Aahil continues, "First of all, I didn't do anything! Second, she came to me BY HERSELF!" "Really!" Rohail says as he takes a step towards him. "Woh aye thi nah. Tumne dance kyun kiya?" he asked glaring him down. "Kyun? Nahi karna chahiye tha," Aahil sneers, "Waisa bhi wohi kara jo tumne kara. Jab tum gair larkiyo ka saath dance kar sakta ho. Woh bhi itna pas pas toh phir mein kyun nahi," Aahil said as he tucks his hand in his pocket eyeing Rohail down.

"Woh gair nahi hai mera lia," Rohail growl at him controlling himself from hitting him. "Woh hai! As apki shareeka hayeet ko aap logo ka nikah nahi yaad. Woh aapka lia gair mahram hai," Aahil says in pure urdu smirking,"She doesn't consider you her husband... on the other hand, she consider me her fiance," Aahil tell him with a smirk. That was enough for Rohail. He growls loudly as he is about to punch Aahil hard on the face when he feels a pressure of his shoulder as Seher cries, "Rohail!! Aap shaant hogaye!"

It was her words and the pressures of his shoulder that made him stop. He takes a step back just for Seher. Aahil saw this interaction between them and it was all it took to lose his mind as his self control was already on edge after witnessing their close dance. He takes a step up to Rohail and punch him by his lips. Rohail staggers back as he was not expecting the attack but he steady himself almost immediately.

Wiping his bloody lip, he punches Aahil hard right below left eye. It will definitely leave a mark. As Seher look at the guys fighting too shock to say anything, Mahreen, who came running behind Seher, comes between them and stands facing Aahil. "Enough!" she cried as he push him hard on his chest. Aahil looks at her as he stagger back at the suddenly attack momentarily surprise to find her and her guts to push him. "Seher, please take Bhai away from here. I will see Aahil off for you. The party is over for these guys," Mahreen said as her eyes never left Aahil. Her voice strong and demanding with authority leaving no room for argument.

"Okay. Thanks," Seher tells Mahreen. She looks at Aahil and then looks away as she focus on Rohail. "Chala, Rohail," she tells him. Rohail was about argue when Mahreen again spoke, "Bhai, please go! Go with Seher. I got this," she tells him as she eye Aahil. Rohail doesn't argue and walk away with Seher but not before giving a warning look to Aahil. Seher looks at Aahil and nods but doesn't smile. Next, she turns and walk away with Rohail. Aahil doesn't like it at all that she didn't smile at him. He groan mentally thinking that he would have to apologize to her later.

Aahil turns his gaze back on Mahreen. "What?" he ask her rudely as she continues to stare at him. Aahil tried to read her eyes as they seem to talk to him but he didn't get what they show as they hold so many emotions. However one thing was clear, in all of those emotions a emotion of hurt was evident. "Sh*t!" he cussed in his mind as he remembered his previous behavior with her. With that thought he looks away but then he realize that her eyes were red. He looks up at her to see her eyes and confirm his earlier observation: they were indeed red. "F*ck! She cried," Aahil thought to himself looking away again.

"Please follow me," Mahreen said abruptly and turns around. Not waiting for him, she walks back to the living room. Aahil stands there for a second taking deep breaths in and out. After a minute or so, shaking his head he also walks to the living room.

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PRECAP

Aahil-Mahreen frostiness after the dance

Rohail-Seher comes close a little after the fight

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