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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Divya1503

Hey Parul!🤗

Very interesting plot and I'm loving the updates! Please update soon! 😳



thanks divu
u r very encouraging
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

wow ...😉😉its so amazing read all the parts at one go...

loved your writing😉😉

hey thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
> R;who Is riya?
S: what?
R: answer me dammit
S: she...she is my...my daughter. any problems?
R:(laughing) your daughter... I mean who is the Father? what's her age?(he bellowed)
S: Mr RSS mind you tongue you are no one to question my dignity
R:DIGNITY... common sanyu...KTA you are saying abt dignity. ek cheap aurat jisko apne bache k baap ka naam bi ni pta, wo mujhe question kar ri ha (but in heart he also felt the pain while saying so)

the bell door rings sanyu runs towards the door & RD sits on the sofa repending on what he said.

P: sanyu I missed you a lot(hugs her) I have a good news for you
S:wo parrth
P: common Yar I got a official transfer here and ab toh hum sath rahegay and ( stops after seeing RD and even RD was also shocked at the duo)

P: yeah humare ghar ma kya kar RHA ha?
S:wo investigation wo uskey liya yha aya
R: hi parth long time ap toh tu acp ban gya ha but dude u c admi ki class aukat kbi ni badlti.
p: sanyu look I don't want to create a scene so tell him to be quite
S: stop stop it you both, RSS stop your non sense this is my house so behave
(RD was shocked by her outburst)
S: tum dono batho ma abi ati hu
R: ab m also leaving so bye
P: wait wo bahar heavy rainfall ki whja se highway jammed ha so you can wait till hme koe problem ni ha.
R: no I...
P: don't be adamant
dinner kar k Jana
S: but...Parth(he signals her &she says )OK

(RD was shocked as sanyu was listening & moreover obeying him)
S: shanti chalo khana lagate ha

R:(breaking the silence) so how's life going on, it seems as if you both are very happyin your family life
P: (normally as possible) yeah absolutely we are living happily after what you did years ago &m thankful to you even RD for what I have today

Ri: pa...pa...I missed you
RD;(don't know why stands as if wants to hug her but)
Ri:(hugs parth) pa you are late
p: sorry princesses (touch his ears and takes her in his laps) how's your fever? it seems you are fine now
RD: is she your daughter?
p: (after some time) YES she is mine. any problems?

(silence spread around , Ri was continuously looking RD and vice versa... partH excuses himself for some phone calls & Ri came near RD and touch his hands)

Ri: hi m riya...pa[ guys let me remind you she is just 2, so takes some time to join sentence but RD froZes)
hey my pa calls me Ri so you can also call me Ri.

parth enter & Ri says,
pa I want ice cream
P: but princess you have fever right?
Ri:(offo) you only said na my fine now some minutes ago So tell tell??(RD was shocked my seeing her smrtness)
p: OK but not tell your mom
S: Maine sab sun liya parth(shouts) don't spoil her.
chalo khana khate ha
and Ri ki bachi chalo have food
Ri: no I won't I want ice cream
S: you will not listen you spoil brat just like your...
P:mom(completed)
parth sanyu on one side and RD opposite... Riya on sanyu's lap but was constantly looking RD)

s: Mr RD kha kho gye(clicked)
R: khi ni

Ri: ma ma I want ice crem
S: no have ur medicine m briging
Ri(to RD) uncle u know howw I eat medicine (RD nods negatively) toh dekho she eats honey first before taking medicine and RD was shocked
S:parth isko le kar jao
RI: bye uncle meet u soon( RD noded and sanyu shocked)
S: itz very late now you can also go as I don't want any stranger poking his nose in my family affairs
& meet you tomorrow
R:(angrily pinned her to wall) oh your family affair ha?
S: leave me otherwise I will file a case of harassment and defamation against you.
R: (laughing) oh really miss oops Mrs sanyukta randhir Singh shekhwat...

comments plz
this was the longest and fastest too..
luv u guys
and yeah no pm as I have some family function but plz do comment
Edited by coolishparul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
i read the all parts today .its fabulous amazine ff.but i am still confused ka Riya ki dad kon hai?😕she is so cute😳.just awesome.updet asap. and please pm me.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
hey awesome update dr..
is she still mrs.randhir singh shekhawat???
i thought they r divrced..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Ri is sooo sweet...nice update dear ...plz update next part soon . ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
It was just ...will comment soon till den res
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Awsme update sanyu n rd are still married I thought they got divorced BT no they r married dats gud

Riya is so cute bt calling parth paa 😡 I m so eager to know back story plz update soon we will be waiting for a longer update

Keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

ITS AMAZING YAAR

RI IS SO CUTE

AND RD AS ALWAYS RUDE

NEXT PART SOON

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb ...
well done dear :)

update soon ...

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