'HOW CAN SOMEONE BE SO STRONG' #2 FF on Kriyaansh Chapter 24 - Page 31

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Great story!
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srry guys for such delays.
not wasting any more time.
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Chapter 23




Kriya got a shock of her life. She knew everything that happened in the lives of everyone including the knowledge of Shivam helping everyone to remove the ban on dance and she had forgiven Shivam long back but the possibility of Shivam revealing what he did a day before the footloose might just create suspicions was the only thing she feared. And Kriya was in no mood of answering why she asked and for the first time things helped her. It was time for the classes.

Kriya: well it is time for the classes to start. You must get two things in your head right away. Firstly no matter what happens you have to follow my rules at any cost. And second if you ignore my rules you have to be ready for the worst day of your life. Now go and join everyone. Your warm up is going to start right away. Cause you are knew I am reducing your session a bit. Today all you need to do is complete the work out session. You are pardoned from doing any routines today. But you can't go until you are done with the entire session. I don't care if it takes the entire day for you to complete it.

Kritika was taken by surprise with the sudden change in the tone of Kriya. Suddenly she sounded so intimidating and all she could do was nod and go towards the rest of the gang like an obedient child. Meanwhile the entire gang was just standing hearing the conversation of the two. They got to know that Kriya helped Kritika which was not surprising. They had got to know that Kriya always helped people except a few and the few means mostly them. But what was surprising to a few was her asking about the name of the brother. She normally doesn't care of knowing about the family and friends of a person. But before they could think anything else there thought process was interrupted by the strict voice of their teacher.

Kriya: You all tell her the entire workout routine and then start with yours. You know what you have to do for every minute you waste. So be quick.

All the thoughts that were going through their heads ran away and all they cared was not wasting any time. Kritika had it really tough. She was watching Kriya do her workout from the corner of her eyes and was actually surprised to witness what all she could actually do. The first thing that came to her mind was how can a girl do all that stuff. Is she human and she was still to know about her entire routine. The entire session she managed to scrap by and was able to complete her beginner's workout session by the end of the so called class but towards the end she was in no condition to even move. So she decided to just remain seated for some time and the entire gang joined her after they were let go by Kriya once her other students came by. Well Kritika got another dose of shock when she got to know Kriya is going to teach them now and she teaches in the mornings as well. And she could not help but think her to be an alien. She was about to ask everyone but was shooed by them cause disturbing her class would probably mean more punishment. That was the fear they all had, it had never happened that they were punished during this time but all feared that if they disturb her they just might be in for trouble.

Once they recovered enough all left for the hall and decided to go to Rey's as everyone had a lot to ask from each other. At Rey's house.

Kritika: Guys I am tired. Who the hell is she? Is she even a human!

Neha: Believe me Kritika, we have been trying to figure her out from the very beginning but she is impossible to be read. She is a master in making everyone a fool. She made a fool out of us when she faked to be our friend. She left us demoralized, she ditched us. She was the one who made us realize our potential some two years ago but she was also the one who wanted to destroy us. She is a freak. She is someone you can't trust. She is a traitor.

Neha let out her frustration and her anger and hurt she felt when her best friend left everyone.

Taani: But she is also one heck of a person. She has always been a helping person to those who are in need, she donates huge sum to the orphanage and the old age home from her earnings. She is the hardest working person you would meet and an extremely talented dancer. I am pretty sure she has many shades to her which we have yet seen or realized.

One by one they told everything about Kriya they know and experienced (of course the three left the secrets they got to know) Kritika tried to grasp every bit of information she received from everyone. Anyone could tell they hated her but hearing about Rey and Kriya's past took her by surprise. But one thing that was irking her was the memory of Shivam telling her that he needs to apologize to one more person he might have heart who though doesn't deserve any apology. Though Shivam never let any information regarding the person. She even wasn't aware whether the person was a he or a she. But listening to every one she thought what if that person was Kriya.

Kritika: Guys did Shivam ever hurt Kriya in any manner.

This question took everyone by surprise. Why would she ask that out of nowhere, this was all they could think.

Swayam: No I don't think so. If it is to be believed that she wanted to hurt us then Shivam at that time helped her a great deal. Why would you ask this out of nowhere?

Kritika: No particular reason. I just recalled Shivam wanting to apologize to someone who didn't deserve and I thought Kriya might be the one. But I am sure she wasn't the one. Shivam told me it was not someone close to you guys.

Kritika added the last line so that they might think that Shivam definitely didn't meant Kriya. He wanted to confirm herself first. It convinced everyone except Swayam. He was so desperate to get some answers that he wanted to believe this might lead to something. And like destiny wanted to help him Kritika got a call from Shivam. Kritika excused herself to talk something to her brother in private. Everyone though wanted to talk to Shivam right away as well afterall he had become one of their best friend but on knowing that she wanted to talk something private they let her go. But one thing that was strange was Swayam sneaking behind her and eavesdropping on Kritika's conversation. He felt wrong doing so but he was desperate to get his answers that he didn't mind it.

One sided conversation:-

Kritika: Hey brother what's up?

Kritika: I am absolutely cool, just had a vigorous workshop. The student who is taking it is extremely tough but an amazing dancer. I think you know her.

Kritika: Yes but I need to ask you something. But first you promise to tell me everything truthfully.

Kritika: Okay so tell me do you remember telling me that there was a person you once said you wanted to apologize to and the one who didn't deserve it. Was it a girl named Kriya Ghai?

Kritika: You tell me first was that girl Kriya?

Kritika: So it was her.

Kritika: She is the exchange student who has been teaching us.

Kritika: What did you do to her?

Kritika: What are you serious? I'll tell everyone.

Kritika: Okay I won't tell them but tell me please what you did to her.

Kritika: Ok but how was it something that might have hurt her.

Kritika: Oh! But Shiv you should know one thing she was the one who saved me from the goons the other day, and I also have heard things that show that she just might be a good person who has some grudge over everyone form the dance team. I am not saying she is right, but I fell she is lost, like she has been going over a wrong path. Well will talk to you later in person hopefully soon.

Kritika: Ok wait everyone wants to talk to you.

Swayam sneaked back where everyone was there and soon Kritika came and handed everyone the phone. They talked for some time with him catching up, but Swayam was still thinking on what Shivam could have done to Kriya, could it be the reason behind every question of his. He suspected Kritika confronting Kriya and by the looks of what he heard he had a faint hope Shivam might just come meet them. After their talks all went to their respective homes.

Next day Kritika wanted to ask a few things to Kriya. She reached college early and waited till her class was over and then she went to confront her. Swayam who had suspected this to happen was there to listen to what she was about to say. After the class

Kritika: Kriya may I talk to you for a second.

Kriya: Sure but be quick I have work to do with principal sir.

Kritika: I know I might be wrong but I don't know why there is a possibility going in my mind that what Shivam did to you might have something more to it than anyone can figure out. I know everything about you, I know for a fact that Shivam was really guilty for his actions because he thought that his actions might have caused you a lot of trouble. It was true that your mother despised you dancing and so when she got to know about you dancing must have hurt her and you must have got some punishment. But then again you danced the very next day. And left everyone very next time. I have been thinking all night that how your mother who despised dance did allow you to dance the very next day. And then the so called grudge you have against everyone is a bit suspicious. And I am sure you won't mind me asking this that this so called sudden change in you and you leaving them was something that got to do with what Shiv did.

Kriya was quite shocked. I mean she knew someone can ask these questions if they know about Shivam's act but she was like prepared for everything so she in ever so calm manner and with sarcasm dripping voice spoke.

Kriya: Well you are right. Shivam did hurt my mother a lot and I am not going to leave him for that. Plus I had thought him to be a classy person but when he befriended these idiots it became clear that he is an idiot himself. Due to him I had to sneak out and come to dance at footloose. Due to him my mother didn't speak to me properly for days. And you are right his action did have something to do with me leaving them. Had he not told my mother I would have got the chance to witness the so called Dazzlers walking heads down in the college which I missed. Any more questions miss or should I go. Tell your worthless brother that he is never going to be pardoned and if he comes he would need to speak to me and I will make sure I make him walk through hell.

Kritika: You know what you are a pathetic bitch. If it was up to me I would make you rot in hell. You dare think of harming my brother I will make sure you will pay. And he is way better than you, even when he did bad things he didn't destroy people. And you know what he accepted his mistake but you are pathetic. How do you even live with yourself? You know what go to hell.

Kriya: don't worry, I will go to hell. And will rule over there just like I rule here. And living with myself is pretty easy, I feel so proud after what I did to these idiots that it makes living all the more better. And don't think you can do anything against me. From where your thoughts end mine begin. I have seen the world far more than you can ever see, so getting one over me is impossible.

Kritika: You know what I can't stand you. If you were not the exchange student and someone who saved me, I would have literally hit you.

Kriya: ya ya whatever. Now go I have work.

And before Kritika could say anything Kriya left leaving her fuming more and more. Kriya made sure she made the new member hate her as much as possible and also ensured that if Shivam ever comes he would also hate her. She thought everything was according to her plan but who can change what the destiny has planned. She never expected Swayam to be hiding and listening to everything. And he wasn't alone. Sharon who called Swayam but when got no reply followed him and saw him hiding and listening to the conversation between Kriya and Kritika also heard everything in the process. This was like destiny helping them in every way possible.

Swayam who knew how much Kriya's mother hated dance and then thinking about the incidents of that fateful day made him sure that something happened but how was it linked to everything that followed was still far from his understanding. His suspicion regarding Kriya faking grew stronger. Meanwhile Sharon who was not that much familiar with Kriya's mother was surely taken aback a little on earing Shivam tried handicapping their then rival team, but did not give much thought into it until she saw Swayam thinking too hard. Then it struck her why was Swayam hiding and listening. He is not someone who spies. And don't know what but something made her think what if he knew something. Now there was no option but to ask him regarding why he was spying and if he knows something.

She messaged Taani to go to Swayam's house today after class. The days routine went as usual for every when except Kritika who had it tough because of trying to show anger which was not very well received by Kriya. She got to know the hard way that even if you are angry or mad at her, never dare interrupt her during the classes or you are dead. In the evening Sharon and Taani gave Swayam a surprise visit with the intension of knowing what he knows. Somewhere they wanted to know the truth and thus hoped he knows something they don't.

At his house after having some light conversations


...hope it is long enough.
one of the longest parts of the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeah
You finally update
Will fully comment once finish reading the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Hope shivam comes true
And then the secrets are out
Can't believe kritika confronted kria when she does not know the whole truth
Love kria explanation back
Update soon this time
When are going to update your other ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsum part...hope Rey too gets to c kria good side
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
at last you updated
amazing update
love the way you portray the characters
cant wait for the truth to be revealed
plz update the next part soon
waiting for that
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
D main thing I love abt dis ff is kriya's attitude
its vry different n unique frm other stories
Kritika's 1 question left everybody in thought
Kriya is always ready for any type of que
Bilkul sahi kehata hai rey ' har cheez ka solution hota hai iske paas'
nw swayum is vry sure dat kriya is hiding sumthing big
well now swaron n tani r gng to make a team its gng to be a treat to watch dis 3 on mission kriya ka sach jano

May b d concept of the stry is vry common bt d way u hve changed it n description of each n evry character' thoughts n d twists r sumthing which always make me curious to read mre n mre

Ab jaldi jaldi update karo
Wait nai hota

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