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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Brilliant update...

Khushi got her hand on his little secret and now taking full advantage of it... Arnav is so pissed with the story of KDHI... Loved their convo where khushi was swooning and all praised of the show while Arnav was super annoyed...

Loved their desh forum convo... Awww, the last line... "I hate doing dishes but I do it, bcuz she hates doing it".. That is sooo cuttteee... If its not love than what else it is...

Loved the update...

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#812

simply superb update!! well both sitting in front of each other are chatting through deshforum.. love this happyness and if69.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#813

Awesome update...
Absolutely loved the conversation between IFarak69 and Happyness...
When he finds out that she knows... uh oh 😕😲

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cineraria

@cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Roomaal picked from here

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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

Ifaraq69 is Arnav? hahhaa. I had a slight doubt that he might be, when he defended the absent writer, and when he asked Happyness about the kiss. But then, I dismissed it thinking he already has a pretty unconventional, potentially embarrassing profession- a male romance writer. But Khushi, man , she sure knows how to needle people. Poor NK, why did you make him look like Nagaraj ( Shyam)? this is irrelevant at this point, but who was Khushi's jilted fiance?

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

NAAAT PHAIR
why did you stop there?
I wanted to read more!
It was so interesting!
Khushi found out and decided to play the game!
Haaayeee loved that part where he was admiring here lovingly :')
Arnav is cho cute ;)
Loved their chat convo!
Khushi surely knows how to make him speak!
Oh poor gal was got upset!
But she needs to understand he won't just share info about him&her in a chat like that!
Can't wait to see him doing all those stuff for K!
Umm I don't mind the Superman boxer part ;)
And last text eeeks he loves her!
Can't wait to read the next part!

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shamy

@shamyj

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#817

Nice...loved the effortless style of conversation! and I love the fact that Arnav does not know that Khushi knows!😉

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#818

Chotiii I have been away from Desh forum lately but I love what you have done with this story. I totally faraq the concept of DD, the writing style and this latest chapter.

So something tells me that Arnav is already aware that Khushi knows about his desh forum ID, why else would he reveal everything he knows about Happyness to Khushi knowing that Happyness is actually Khushi. Not only that his super defensiveness and that last minute hestiation before posting the last line points to it as well. Whatever the case, that last line was just too cute for words. Even when he was supposedly insulting her, he was revealing his affection for her about her being too naive for her own good, about how NK bugs him and oh how could we forget about the Good Old Khuda ve that he tends to hear in her presence!

I might sound like a broken record here but I can't help it the references to IPK, the superman boxers dance, the towel dance just about everything always cracks me up like there is no tomorrow.👏

Oh and Choti, is it too early to ask for the next chapter already?! 🤗