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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update

loved theatre romance

such a beautiful song

continue soon😳🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWWW! SUNO NA SUNO NA SUNLO NAAA! I SANG THAT SONG WHEN I READ IT! AHHH! SSSOOO SWEET YAAR!
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Posted: 11 years ago
BUT I'M KATTI WITH YOU... YOU SAID YOU'LL DISCONTINUE
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsme update luved it to the core

Sandhir romance so cute

They both r so adorable

Luving dis

N u didn't pm me 😭

Pls next tym pm me I don't want to miss it

Update soon wtng

Alwz keep smiling dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Awesome update

loved theatre romance

such a beautiful song

continue soon😳🤗


ya i will upload soon i want to upload and complete this ff soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

AWWW! SUNO NA SUNO NA SUNLO NAAA! I SANG THAT SONG WHEN I READ IT! AHHH! SSSOOO SWEET YAAR!


thnks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

BUT I'M KATTI WITH YOU... YOU SAID YOU'LL DISCONTINUE


u req na thats y i started again
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Awsme update luved it to the core

Sandhir romance so cute

They both r so adorable

Luving dis

N u didn't pm me 😭

Pls next tym pm me I don't want to miss it

Update soon wtng

Alwz keep smiling dear


i m not giving pms to any one...
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Posted: 10 years ago

So spare my mistake n here it goes..


YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - 35 - the 7 days XII


Recap: sandhir in movie hall. Randhir kissed sanyu, so she got angry. they then went to bandra beach. Randhir sang a song for sanyu to convince her. She convinced. Next...


After opening their eyes, she rested her chin on his chest to look him straight and he raised his head to see her. They stared lovingly for few seconds and then finally he said slowly and musically..


R: humsafar mujhi ko chun lo naaa, suno na..suno na..sun looo naaa...
She kissed his chest and again rested her chin there. Now she spoke naughtily.
S: waise mcp, aj tumne mere liye do do songs gaa chuke ho aur wo bhi situation me bilkul perfect. Itna achha gaana gaate ho mujhe pataa hi nahi tha.
R: hmm.. Main kitna achha dinger hoon wo to tumhe ab tak ko pataa kahan chala hai???
S: matlab???
R: koi chance mile to dikhaun na.
S: mil gayaa.
R: kya???
S: chance.
R: kahan aur kaise???
S: aww darling. This is also a surprize.
R: oh no.
S: oh yes. Ab chalo.
R: ab kahan???
S: shopping.
R: tum thik to ho???(checking temperature on her forehead)
S: haan. Kyun???
R: tum aur shopping. Hahaha.
S: very funny. Ab chalo.


She stood up and dragged him with him to car and drove of her own. They reached the nearest mall.


Inside the mall, in cloth showroom..
S: ye kaisa hai???(yellow one piece gown)
R: achha hai, par pehnogi kahan???
S: kahin nahi, tum bas choice karo mere liye.
R: umm, why dont you try red??? It will suit you.
S: really??? Red???
R: haan red.
S: ok but in one condition.
R: haan bolo. Mere jaisi ho gayi ho tum.
S: tum wahi outfit pehnoge jo main select karungi.
R: ok.. Atleast change kar k dikhao.
S: pehle tumhare liye. Ye black bleaser aur red shirt.
R: red??? Are you sure???
S: yes. Ab chalo changing room.
R: saath me... Chalo.
S: shup up randhir gents changing room me jao m main ladies me.


They both went to their respective rooms.
S: achha mcp, tumne mere liye red hi kyun choice kiya???(opening her dress)
R: I like red on you. Aur maine tumhe har colour me dekha hai par red me nahi. Isliye. Tumne mere liye red kyun choose kiya???(opening his shirt)
S: its the colour of love and main tumre love ki baarish karna chahti thi. Isliye.(wearing her outfit)
R: matlab aj hum ek dusre ko complement karenge.(wearing his outfit)


After changing, the came out. Their eyes popped. They both dumstock staring each other. They had a small eye lock and in continuing the eyelock sanyu went to randhir and caressed his cheek. Then she went near his ear and said.
S: aag lagaane ka iraada hai kya???
R: aag to tum laga rahi ho. Kisi aur ne tumhe dekha na to uski aankho ko main hi jalaa dunga.


Now she blushed and moved back.
S: chalo payment karo.
R: haan change to kar lun.
S: no hum yahi pehne rahenge.
He was wearing a red silk shirt, black pant and bleaser. She was in white knee length single piece umbrella frock with string shoulder.
Randhir paid they bill and both went to car.


In car..
R: hum jaa kahan rahen hein.
S: patience darling, its a surprize.
R: fir se???
S: tumse to kam hi de rahi hoon.


After few minutes they reached a party. It was evening time now.
R: wow sanyu. Not bad. Itni achha surprize.
S: thank you. Ab ander chalo.


They went inside. In bar..
R: two shots please.
S: sirf two??? Freshers party bhul gaye kya???
R: yaad hai. Isilye sirf do hi mangaayi. O god tumhari haalat.
S: just shut up randhir. You know wo sab tumne jaan bujh k kiya tha.
R: sorry na. Tumhe us yoyo k chamche se bachane k liye kiya tha.
S: kya??? Tab bhi you helped me. Achha leave it. Tumhe chance chahiye tha na gaana gaane k liye.
R: itna badaa fan nahi hun tumhara ki sabke saamne tamasha karun.
S: mujhe pataa tha tum hawaa me udaa rahe ho baatein. Kuch nahi kar sakte tum.
R: tum mujhe challenge kar rahi ho??? Rss ko???
S: challenge nahi de rahi reality dikha rahi hun. Mcp.


Meanwhile their drinks were served. Both took their glasses. Randhir drunk his shot in one shot. When sanyu was unmindful for her mobile, she heard a voice and turned back. That voice was very familiar to her.


Halki halki khushboo si tum ho
Jaise subaho ka jaadu ho
Dheemi dheemi iss pal mein tum ho
Jaise jharne mein baadal ho
Tumhe chhu lun toh tum ud jaao
Tumko pakdo toh sharma jaao
Palat meri jaan

She on a sudden turned back and randhir on stage. He was with a guitar and mike. His enegetic and rromantic voice cought everybody's attention but he was concentrated on his love. He was pointing her and went on and on.


Kuch meri sun, kuch apni sunaa
Mujhko seene se le tu laga
Meri dhadkan hui hai jawaan
Palat meri jaan
Tu mera din tu meri subah
Meri khaamoshiyon ki sadaa
Mere ishq ki tu intehaa


She was amazed to see randhir in such a state. He was looking like a true rockstar who was singing for her. She was enjoying a special feeling like flying butterflies inside her stomach. She was blushing like red rose and smiling like flower. He was busy admiring his angel and next he continued...


Oas mein chhalki boondon jaisi ho
Subahon mein chhanti kirno jaisi
Jis rut mein ho, khil jaaye woh
Geeton mein lafzon ki tarah
Meethe suron ka ho bayaan.. hmmm..


He now enjoyed every bit of that moment and went deep inside the song. He closed his eyes and started remembering every single moment spent with her.


Main palak jhapku toh tum aa jaao
Thandi saanson ko garma jaao
Palat meri jaan..
Ishq tera hi mera jahaan
Rooh mein meri tera gumaan

Teri chaahat mein, main hoon fanaa
Palat meri jaan..
Dekha hai maine tujhme Khuda
Hai ibaadat teri har adaa
Mere ishq ki tu intehaa.. ho...


Now he came out of his thoughts and opened his eyes. When he saw straight, there was no sanyu. On a sudden effect, he head a voice from his back.


Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb


Sanyu was with a mike now. She was looking straight to him. She was looking like afog drop in leaf. She was extremely delightful with the song. She was like a bird who was flying around randhir. Now it was his turn to amaze. He was continuously staring her opening his mouth and playing the guitar.


Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai


He now complemented her started singing with her.


Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb


People around them started dancing with their partners. Gradually they started singing in duet. Each and every people were enjoying a romantic and cute night over there. But sandhir were inside each other. They went on singing.


Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai


Gradually with the song they both also started at the centre of the dice. They were in the focus light as they became star couple of the evening.


Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa
Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya
Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb


Their eye contact noe became a lock. With every passing, their eyelock deepened and sanyu started reminding the beautiful moments with him. She also recalled past 8 years when they were separate.

Hua ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb


With the end of the song, her eye lids were wet due to tears. He understood the situation and wiped those tears but it again started flowing. She was about to leave the stage but again she heard the same voice singing for her.


Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain
In aankho se har aansu
Mujhko churana hai
Tere dil ka mere dil se
Rishta purana hain


He was singing on and on but her eyes were still in flood of tears. He went to her and tapped her shoulders. He turned her towards himself, cupped hef face and started singing again.

Teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka ehsaas hain mujhko sun
Main jo saath tere hu phir tujhe hain kaisa gam
Dard baat lenge ham sunu


She now hugged him tightly, he went on..
In palko mein khushiyo ka sapna sajana hain
Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain


Now he released her and oscillated his head in NO and sang wiping her tears cupping her face again with his thumb.


Kaise main batau yeh tera is tarah rona
Dekha nahi jaata hain sun
Shaam jab dhalti hain subah muskurati hain
Khushbuye lutati hain sun


He smiled and made her smile by tickling her abdomen. Now she too smiled and he sang again.


Udaasi ke lamho mein hamein muskurana hain
Tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain
In aankho se har aansu
Mujhko churana hain...


He now dropped the guitar and took her in his arms, steeping towards car. They waved their hands saying BYE to the croud and went to car.


In car.
R: chalo meri jhansi ki rani. Ghar chalte hein. Raat ho gayi hai.
S: I love you randhir(crabbed her arm in his elbow and rested her her head on his shoulder)
R: I love you too.
S: mujhe dobara to alag nahi hoge na.
R: kabhi nahi. Its a promise(kissed her forehead). Achha ab ye emotional baatein band karo aur bolo gaadi drive karni hai???
S: nahiujhe aise hi ghar jaana hai. Tumhare shoulder pe(in a naughty voice).
R: aur accident ho gaya to???
S: to kya hoga saath mat jaayenge.
R: rehne do mujhe marna nahi hai. Aur tumhe to kuch hone bhi mahi de sakta main. Meri pari ka kya hoga???(driving car)
S: avhha sirf pari ki tention. Aur pari ki mumma. Uski koi fikr nahi.
R: khud hi to tumne kaha tha ki main pari ko tumse zyada pyaar karun.
S: chhoro maaf kiya.


Meanwhile they reached home. Randhir was tired and was going to his room but sanyu denied to go reminding his 24 hours again. She took him to drawing room, where she had planned a surprized for him.


To be continued...

So frndzz... I hope u like it.. I hv added situation after evry para of song.. So plz dont ignore it.. Otherwise u cant enjoy it completely.. Lv u all.. Dont 4get 2 cmnt..

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow superb lovely update
loved it
superb song selection
continue asap :)))

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