Polemic Jackanapes#3: Complete [NOTE + BLOG LINK Pg69]3rd Jan - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago
When I say I don't enjoy authors note.. I don't mean their thank you note.. I mean when they put in some explanations on the story.. It just spoils it for me.. But your note was just amazing.. I read it twice already..
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Posted: 10 years ago
One of best story I have read, not good at writing long comments but loved every single character & justice you have given. So close to real life.

Loved Arnav, khushi and payal
Happy for Anjali & arshi future

Hope to read more from you in future
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Posted: 10 years ago
Twiggy I had to read your author's note before the epilogue!
👏👏👏 Your dedication zest continuation of PJ is commendable! Completely in awe of your work!

Thankyou for your note, it so informative and very well said!

What a beautiful epilogue just perfect! I loved the flow and you left it with a feeling of contentment for the future...I love how Arnav says I have nothing to prove here...amazing! He's such a darling...thanks for this and of course Khushi..she's our Rock star...adorable!

👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
iam really really happy that this beautiful story had a beautiful end too...
i loved every word u have written...iam really gng to miss this story...
wishing to read ur nxt work soon...
thk u for giving us this amazing story...
thks for the pm dr...
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Posted: 10 years ago
As always really good. The emotional Shashi and always concerned Garima, typical parents. Isn't it common for parents or in general common in people to miss their loved ones and think they could have spent some more quality time together? I loved how you have given the closure on all characters and yet left them with so much more to do and happen. I'm happy for Payal because she's doing what she loves the most - her work and she has full support of he family and friends. That's a very good thing.
Anjalis is finally going to live her dream and her life as per her own choice. And to top it Shyam too has realized the fault in his actions in the past and it looks like he is not going to repeat them.
Now coming to my favorite couple - Arnav is going to propose her finally!!! Now this is what I call getting better and better. This epilogue was short but yet perfect.
I really loved this journey of all the characters with you. Each character has been different from the show. Guptas were very liberal and modern in their thinking, Akash was confident and successful along with being a fan of a show😉, Payal the go-getter here, Arnav the calm and composed one but still had passion and intensity, Khushi as the confident, hard-working, emotional person. Nani was same yet different in the sense of keeping the traditional torch low here, Anjali and shyam were different too in their own way. Anjali here had a passion which has nothing to do with any sort of poojas thankfully and Shyam though a little coward but loved his wife nonetheless.
I loved all the colors you gave to our beloved characters.
Thank you for such a wonderful story Twiggy 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally Epilogue is here thus ending a beautiful journey of struggling arnav who works so hard to make himself match his siblings, his khushi and also payal who is his biggest critic.. Loved this Arnav a lot.. Khushi is always an inspiration loved her puzzle prem in this story.. Brilliant Epilogue.. Loved to see the happiness in both the families.. best wishes and hope to see something new from you.. tab tak ke liye sayonara.. hope you come back with another enthralling story with a very different title.. 😃


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arre wah Twiggy! You closed all the loops and answered all our unasked questions with this simple and to the point epilogue. Really, why werent you working for 4L damn it?!!!! 😆

All your characters were different from the show. Arnav wasnt all that you described ASR as... he was an aam aadmi, Khushi wasn't a self-sacrificing fool, Anjali has aspirations beyond her kitchen, Amma and Babuji were in a live in once 😲, Payal isn't the meek sheep and Aakash has the capability to manage a bunch of employees and not look upto his brother to decide if to barge into his fiancees house on new years or not 😆

Oh Twiggy dearest, come here you 🤗 yours is a serious piece of fiction, almost like a slice of reality; it may not be the most popular story on the block but it has a lot of heart in it and more importantly a lot of mind.

I just couldnt bring myself to read the end. I finally did today.

How do you say a proper good bye to a story you met at least once a month???

PS: Oh yes! Aakash used to watch a Hindi daily 😆

PPS: Tune meko author's note main do baar yaad kiya. Thank youuu 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's an awesome story! I loved all the characters. Very well written. It was worth the 1.5 years!!!thanks for the pm! Hope you will write more!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb epilogue. .

It was a completely different story but very realistic... Every character was different from other. . I loved Arnav and Khushi's character. . They were not perfect people but they invest their 100% in anything they do.. whether it is relationships or work and thats what I like the most about them..

I loved Shashi and Garima as parents. . They always gave their daughters the freedom and support they needed but in a controlled way.. And they are what they are today just because of their parents..

I m very happy for Anjali... She is going to live her dream and now that Shyam is with her, supporting her and happy for her, it made this more perfect. .

Absolutely loved it. . Well done.. 🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago
It's been a pleasure reading your thoughtful and thought provoking story. The manner in which you've dealt with real situations in a realistic manner. Each character has had their own strengths and foibles. And, for me, it is their journey of how they realise the former and accept the latter that has been so gripping. Oscillating between agreeing and disagreeing with their thoughts and actions.
Thank you for a story wonderfully told :)

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