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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Fab update!

This is what you called 2 in one...waah first half was hilarious and second half deep...

Too good! Twiggs

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Lovely update specially text between arshi

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

When a person acts out of the ordinary ... people around him/her are bound to get alert

that all may not be well ... Nani too had the same reaction ...

She has single handedly brought up these children so when one of them wants to go off

alone be it just for a couple of weeks she is bound to get alarmed and feel that something

somewhere is not right ... specially so in the case with Arnav ...

The texting was absolutely hilarious and so so real ... I think each one of us may have gone

through the " desperately dying to pee " problem sometime or the other ... and you can only

share this with a close friend or someone you are very close to ...

Arnav was very patiently trying to solve the problem by giving his bit of advise ... 😆

"Khushi! One. Drop the block letters. Two. Peeing in that ammonia park or peeing in your pants.

Your choice." 😕 Indian Railways have the worst loos ... just the thought of using them sends

a shiver down my spine ...

Thank God Payal and Aakash made some headway in their relationship ...

I heaved a sign of relief when Payal said "I love you" to Aakash and vice versa ...

practically wiping out all the hurt and pain they had inflicted on each other ...

I'm just very worried what mode of toilets Khushi will gave to her disposal where she is

heading for right now ... hope she does not have to use the fields !

Thanks Twiggy ... 🤗

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Not particularly fond of the pee conversation but it is painfully true and spot on...every bit of it. I hate that.

So skipping right over to the Payal - Akash part...I loved it - you know why...well you should..because it was real. Like most conversations around sticky topics are. They start out well. The intentions are established and yet, there is pain, heartache and ego that have no medication except self resolve and empathy. I am not sure what I want for Akash and Payal but I love that they are doing their best. Sometimes, that much is enough, other times not so much...As long as life is tilted towards the former...

But what I loved even more is the hidden conversation of I over Us or vice versa that Payal and Akash's situation brings out. Isn't that the basis for any relationship? I also love the contrast between the two couples. In both places the women are fighting to do what they want to do...and their methods while not similar, will achieve the same results...the difference is made by the men in their lives and their reactions...

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

I hear you Khushi, I hear you... I dont want any luxury in life, just give me a good toilet 😊

Well that is the comfort in ArHi's relationship. They can talk about peeing and all its processes 😆

Why does everyone treat Arnav like a porcelain doll? Bichara spends half his life convincing everyone that he not a weakling. Uff!

Payal and Aakash have been having this conversation in its many different shades since long. I hope this one was actually the resolution to the issue and not another prelude to a new conflict.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Grandmothers can behave sometimes like that especially when the concerned person has never ever traveled alone for sake of fun and relaxation. I think Devyani would've been less surprised had it been Akash in stead of Arnav. Arnav is always around the family. But good that it's cleared now. Arnav deserves a holiday without any company. Such holidays are important for introspection & reflection of life.
Arnav & Khushi discussing state of Indian toilets was fun. I agree with Khushi; men don't have any problem with any kind of toilets even open fields/roadsides work for them. 🤔
Finally Akash saw some sense and decided to right the wrong. I'm glad about it. He was ignoring Payal since long. Looking at the two couples in the story proves how no two couples can be same, how everyone has different problems and different solutions. Basically there is no fixed mantra for happiness and togetherness other than love combined with efforts from both the people involved.
I'm really happy for Akash & Payal to have taken steps towards each other. It was important for them to communicate and discuss what they want from themselves and each other.

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Awesome updare...Arshi conversation was hilarious...yep, arnav decision to spend some time alone is right and he totally deserved it...finally, payal and akash cleared out things between them... they open up and share their thoughts...great chapter...thanks for pm :-)

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Devyani's trepidation is understandable but I could feel Arnav's frustration quite well. He was being treated like a baby, and I was glad to see him put his foot down.

I loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi. You depicted the woes of long distance train travelers so well that I grinned through the entire dialogue.

The way you charted the conversation between Payal and Aakash, I was afraid they were heading towards a breakup. I know I was the one who had passed a verdict in the same vein, but then who doesn't want a change towards the positive? That they talked things out, makes me feel much better.

P.S. Akash's forgetfulness was a boon. I'm sure there would have been reason for things to go down the wrong path, had they talked about Arnav.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Thanks for the wonderful update and pm.

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joviha

@Joarshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

amazingly written...and the real fun is they are discussing abt pee in late night...it was so funny...and abt payal and akash their convo stayed a calm one...were as i thought they will fight once again...
and nani is so protective of arnav...
on the whole i lvd the whole updte...
thks for the pm dr...
waiting for nxt updte...

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