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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi could talk whatever with Arnav and there Payal was restraining herself and gauging Akash moves. Two sibling couples...yet so different..
Finally Payal has tried to break the ice and she succeeded.
However different these two contrasting relationships are.the only factor which holds them is Love and hope it remains ...

Akashs insecurity stems from the fact that she could decide for herself and glad he voiced his concerns.




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Posted: 11 years ago
everybody is trying to set their life to the right course. kudos to u for posting such a grounded real story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Toilets!! - Through Khushi's text comversations you have bought out a valid point - Not only toilets in trains but everywhere -the public ladies toilet is in a bad shape - why? in this premier institute where I work now, the ladies toilets are :-(...No use in complaining because no action is taken even if complained.
Devayani-Akash reaction to Arnav's decision to travel - I would say it would be the natural reaction from family - I face a lot of this kind of resistances and objections. Hence felt smiling while I read that part.

Payal- Akash relationship - it did take a positive lift in this update after lot of rough times...and Payal being honest was the best way and Akash being fair and frank helped. It helped both of them to realise the other person's fears, wishes and insecurities and ultimately they know what leads them - their love. They will need more to pull this relationship forward...but they set the foundation strong...and Payal - her independent fiery spirit - she said it openly - this is me - I cant be someone else for you - I like it. "To trust someone was an uphill task for her, and she'd always considered that an internal battle." but she was ready to right her wrongs. " This...thing between us, sharing my life with someone...it doesn't come easily to me. I realise I've probably made a blunder here. Tell me what I can do to make it right, please. Tell me what you want." These lines meant something to me - may be it is a lesson for me for future..Payal did give me a take home advice through this update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally read the last 4 chapters! N i loved how all the characters have evolved and have grown in these past few chapters. Whether it was anjali rediscovering herself and realising that she owes not only to herself but all her loved ones too to lead a happy life, where she dsnt have to remember when she laughed the last. N dsnt shyam realise how he is gradually draining the life out of her wife? Everyone seemed to have noticed the changes in her hut him. If he is so indifferent to anjali's feelings then its well only that anjali is goin fr the concert, against his wishes.

As for akash n payal well i always believed that their real problem was lack of effective communication and their big fat egos. One always put the onus on the other to initiate a conversation, expecting other to understand his/ her point of view. There actually came a point when i started to feel that akash has actually given up on them. But i guess payal's persistence and akash's love finally helped in solving the matters between the two.
As for arnav and khushi , well their relationship has always been close to perfect. Their love fr each other, the understanding between them,their constant need to be with each other leaves u with a warm feeling. But what baffled me was everyone's reaction to arnav's trip. I mean why is everyone so worried for him? Its just a vacation! And he definitely needed one for more reasons than one! His family members reacted as if a 7 yr old is goin on a vaction. How he will live alone etc etc. quite surprising.
But now all 's well. I want to see what all arnav loves about himself, how khushi will submit her dissertation and manuscript on time. And for how long akash n payal's relationship remains peaceful!
Sorry for the late comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update!! The whole 'pee' talk was so much fun to read. And I completely agree with Khushi. Toilets in our trains give me nightmares!!!!
Finally.. Akash and Payal are trying to sort out their differences. Loved their earnest convo.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update!!!
I completely agree with Khushi. Train toilets give me nightmares!!!
And finally... Akash and Payal are trying to sort out their differences. Loved their earnest attempts .. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Twiggy !!!
Sorry I am late as was travelling but now that I am here would like to tell you that I just loved the "Susu" talks between Arshi... And Kudos to you that you made the topic so lovable and interesting !!!😆


Finally Payal and Akash are talking and trying to save whatever little bit of relationship is left between them. Akash does realise that he was being a jerk with Payal... That was required here... And Payal for once opened her mouth and it was pleasant and right on time.. 😉 She said she loved Akash and that was it.. It was so simple yet important !!!

Lovely update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Everyone is worried about Arnav's holiday... let him get some peace... when is he leaving?
What a conversation between the lovers... about peeing in the train toilet... should I say I'm glad that Arnav talked her into it and she did it.. 😆 Love these two 😳
Payal and Akash finally spoke to each other without shouting or ignoring each other... its sad that they have come to this stage of not knowing where to start a conversation... Akash's behaviour may not have been right but one point I agree with him is that when there are 2 people involved, any major decision made should involve both of them... they may not agree with eachother but they need to decide together... now since they are on the same page hope they build from there
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm interesting chapter. Arnav's family finding it difficult to understand his need to be away for a while. As for Akash and Payal - glad they talked thing through - it is not only love that makes a relationship work but love helps a lot!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..

Loved Arnav and Khushi about pee... Poor khushi was so frustrated... And she should be... After all she was in the state of life and death...😉

Finally Akash has shown some maturity and talk... Things are still not to bright but alteast they started to mend their relation..

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