Seven Days to Woo Randhir Singh Shekhawat Thread 2 (SEQUEL UP!) - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
RES
I feel like I won a battle :3
I'm like never first
😆
Now let me go read :P

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Hey Saffi!
We meet again 😆
I have never been this eager to read a part of an ff.. seriously! 😛
So about the part now:

Although I knew she wouldn't remember that Randhir said I love you to her, it still felt so disheartening to have that confirmed. But regardless, I loved how she felt that she wouldn't regret it had he voiced out his love. It was a very simple line, but I really loved it.
That's how Sanyu is, and I really liked that you included that. Says so much about her :)

And then the fact that Randhir was so honest <3

He told her what happened, and apologized! Absolutely in love with Randhir 😳
"Touched me... where?"
OH GOD...
See there you again
Making me go on my besharam line of thoughts ☺️☺️☺️
😆
"Put your mouth there?"
OMG.. *faints* can't believe this again ☺️☺️
AAAHHH ☺️
Hooot
I love how he said sorry, and she just asked him if she liked it 😆
Even better was how Randhir went from being sorry about what he did, to being naughty and suggesting a replay of it all ☺️ 😉
That was a brilliant transition, hehe

"I hate dishonesty"
Man that kinda threw me on a slight guilt trip on behalf of Sanyu.
I hope that she tells him soon. She has fallen for him, quite obviously, and now I just want her to let him in on the challenge as well.

"Genuinely infatuated"
🤣
Silly girl, in RD's voice 😆
Seriously... This girl :P

Randhir can be so naughty... Wanting to join her. God I could imagine Sanyu blushing. Just the thought of it made me blush☺️

I must say the next part was the best.. Where just the thought of his lips on her body excited her.

"Undergarments nicely folded"
🤣
Where do you get these ideas from Saffi?
That was hilarious!
I can just imagine how embarassing that must have been. Oh gosh. Poor girl 😆

"Jaan" Whoaa.. romantic Randhir is sexyyy. I liiike 😉😆

The biggest jhatka I got... "Might as well do it again" 😲😲😲
Kya baat hai 👏👏
I like this Sanyu
She's an independent woman 😆

In all honesty though, this part was perfect.
I think you've done a great job with all the emotions.
From showing the gentleman Randhir, to the sexy Randhir, to the simple Sanyu, to the daring Sanyu.
You've done such a fab job!
Loved it so much!
And sooo happy I'm first to comment :D


😆

Will be waiting impatiently for the next update now *so selfish* 😛😆

Take caaare
Love you <3
🤗
Edited by basket_101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pms
loved the update
nxt update asap
Gul
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Posted: 11 years ago
The entire part was so amazing <3
the way Sanyu is falling for him ^_^
btw, this is Asha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
loved it...
actually it was cute rather...
Randhir is really very caring...
now m waiting for tonight... I mean story ka tonight.. ;)
do update soonish..
Love
Ashka
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Posted: 11 years ago
Freaking goodness!
Replay! Yes yes! I want a replay tooo!
Saafi!
You are killing me with every update of yours!

Randhir is sooo caring and honest! XD
I would love a boyfriend like him! :*:*:*

Anybody would! XD
OK my brother is pestering me :/

Update sooon xD :*
Love you:*

Edited by DamselinDistres - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar


I wasn't first... but... it's okay! I MISS YOU THOUGH! AHHH! I MISS YOU LOADS! MUAH! *HUGHUGHUG*

Day Six: Part I

"Ouch!" was the first thing that came out of Sanyukta's mouth that morning when her eyes opened. Before she could register her surroundings, before she even knew where she was or what happened, she felt her head paining. She could barely lift it up without squirming.
Hahaha! *cues song... HANGOVER teri yaadon kaaa... hahahaha!*

"You're up?" came Randhir's voice from over her, and her mouth dropped immediately.

The last thing she remembered from last night was Randhir unzipping her kurta after she suggested having sex, and the colour drained from her face immediately. Did they... did they do it? She looked down at her body and noticed that she was wearing Randhir's shirt. She couldn't feel any undergarments on.

"Oh my goodness!" Sanyukta shrieked, covering her face with her hands. "Randhir, what did we do last night?"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That's all she remembered! GAH! Hahahahahaah!

He sat on the bed beside her and held her shoulder gently. She shook off his hand and started to sob. "Oh God, oh no!" she cried.

Randhir hadn't even told her he loved her, she didn't know whether his feelings for her were genuine, and all of this happened between them? How could she do that to her body? If she was confident that he would stay with her, then maybe her reaction would be different, but right now she wouldn't be able to forgive herself.
DANG! SHE DIDN'T GET TO HEAR HIM SAY I LOVE YOU. AHHH! and her reaction is sooo like her. Like I swear... you're just perfection.

"Sanyukta listen to me," Randhir said, raising his voice.

"No!" she wailed, "Randhir, you don't know, for you it might be easy, but for me... oh no!"

"Sanyukta we didn't have sex!" he yelled, leaving her shocked.

HAHAHAH! I CAN SEE THIS ALL PLAY IN MY MIND!

A sigh of relief hit her hard.

"We didn't?" she asked, smiling widely. Then she frowned again. "What am I doing in your shirt then, with nothing on?"

A look of guilt took over his features before subsiding.

"Okay, listen to me Sanyukta. We didn't have sex, but... we went far last night," he admitted. "Don't - don't blame yourself."

Her eyes widened and tears fell from her eyes.

"Far?" she asked, her voice cracking.

"We..." he looked into her eyes and gulped. "We both reached a point where we didn't have clothes on."

She squeezed her eyes shut and felt more tears escape when he said that.

"You saw me naked?" she cried. "Oh my God!"

"Will you stop crying and listen Sanyukta?" he asked impatiently. "Yes, I did see you naked. And... I touched you too. I'm sorry!"

Awh! That is sooo sad yet... that sorry...

He closed his eyes as if he was anticipating a slap, but Sanyukta felt her heart drop. He was so honest with her. He didn't even have to tell her that, because she wouldn't have known anyways, yet he did.

aw. that's soo sweet.

"T - touched me?" she asked, gulping, her eyes wide. "Where?"

"Where I shouldn't have," he said.

"D - did you... did you put your mouth there?" she asked quietly.

He nodded, looking very guilty.

"Sanyukta, I went down on you... for a few seconds," he admitted. "I'm really sorry. I won't make an excuse for myself."

"You were drunk?" she asked him softly.

He nodded.

"I was very drunk, and when I realized the severity of what was going on, I stopped it before it went any further," he said sadly. "I'm sorry."

"I wish I remembered," she mumbled. "Did I like it?"

A small smile took over his face. "You loved it," he said with a smirk, "I can replay the night for you."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I am blushing like a beetroot!☺️

She picked up a pillow and hit him hard. "You're so shameless," she said, before blushing and leaning towards him as his arm wrapped around her shoulder.

She did feel upset for going so far with him, but when Randhir told her the truth, her worries left her mind - this was the man she wanted to spend her entire life with. Randhir was the man who she was lucky to have. He would not let her regret a thing. Her lips curled up into a wide smile as she leaned against his chest.

RED ALERT RED ALERT RED ALERT! "He would not ler her regret a thing..." that... is... foreshadowing..

"Did I throw up?" she asked.

"You passed out and then you were about to puke. I took you to the bathroom at the right time," he explained. "Then once you let it out, I dressed you in my shirt. I was going to put your clothes back on you, but I thought it would be best if I made as little contact with your body as possible since I was already a lot sober by then."

He is literally the best.😳 Sooo honest!

Sanyukta smiled and looked up at him. He was the best she could have gotten.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I DIDN'T EVEN READ THAT! HAHAHAHAHAH! GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE!

"Thank you for being honest," she muttered, truly grateful that she had him in her life.

He kissed the top of her head and rubbed her arm gently.

"I hate dishonesty Sanyukta, you know that," he replied with a smile. "I'll always be honest with you."

Uhm Uhm. That can be taken as a red alert... but I want to make it not seem as one... so... yeah. he's adorable.

Suddenly she felt very guilty about keeping him in the dark about the challenge. She wanted to tell him but her words were stuck in her throat. Then suddenly a thought struck her - maybe she told him while she was drunk.

"Randhir," she said nervously, "Did I mention anything about... a challenge?"

Randhir seemed to think about it for a moment before nodding.

"Yeah you did," he told her, looking into her eyes.

She lowered her eyes, his gaze being too intense for her. She didn't know how much she told him, but she figured that he couldn't have known a lot if he was still behaving this way towards her.

"What did I say?" she asked, her heart beating more quickly.

He touched her cheek with his palm and she felt his heat radiate off him.

"You don't remember that part?" he asked her.

She faintly remembered mentioning the challenge and saying that she wouldn't tell him about it, but she wanted to know whether she brought it up later on.

"I remember a bit," she admitted. "Did I mention it after that part?"

He shook his head no.

"I didn't even understand what you were saying after you passed out. You mumbled a few things, but you were so out of it that I didn't understand," he explained.

She felt her face turn red again. So he still didn't know about the challenge. A part of her was relieved and a part of her was not. She wanted to tell him. But then again, if she didn't tell him, Kaustuki wouldn't tell anyone either, so nobody would need to find out about it. She could keep it in. Plus, she genuinely liked him. Well... it was infatuation. She was genuinely infatuated with him. But somehow, today her heart made her want to say something else, her heart was telling her that this was not infatuation... that this was something more.

Oh my gosh... ACCEPT IT SANYU. YOU ARE IN LOVE WITH HIM. COME ON!

"Thank you for taking care of me," she said happily.

He bent down and kissed her mouth softly.

"Get ready," he told her. "We'll go and have breakfast downstairs."

She nodded.

"Can I shower here?" she asked sweetly.

Randhir smirked.

"Want me to join you?" he asked naughtily.

HAHAHAAH! 😳

Sanyukta blushed and shook her head, wincing slightly, feeling her head ache.

"Nooo," she said, before getting up and running to the bathroom. "By the way, can you uh bring me my clothes from my room?"

"On it," came his voice from outside and she leaned against the door smiling.

She didn't know why she felt so happy. A part of her was truly upset that she didn't remember anything from last night. She closed her eyes and imagined what it must have felt like when his hands were on her body, with his lips on every inch of her skin. The thought made her shiver with excitement.

Once she finished showering, she walked out into the room, wrapped in a towel, her head still aching from last night. Randhir was siting on his bed, his eyes transfixed on his phone.

what's on that phone?!😲 hehehe.

He looked up and smiled, before picking up a glass full of water and walking over to her.

"Here, drink this," he told her.

She nodded and gulped the entire drink down at once. She put the glass down on the table beside the bed, her towel lifting up slightly, exposing her thighs in the process.

"Did you bring my clothes?" she asked nervously.

His eyes were on her, a smile on his face. He tucked her wet hair behind her ear before leaning in closer and kissing her on the cheek. His hands circled around her waist as she smiled up at him. She enjoyed it when he touched her.

awww! that's really sweettt.😳

"Mhm, they're on the bed," he whispered before leaning down and kissing her jawline softly.

She wrapped her arms around his back and leaned into his embrace, suddenly feeling her headache go away. If this was the cure for aches, she would love to be cured everyday. He held her close to him, his lips on her wet hair.

"You smell good," he murmured.

"I just showered, I'm supposed to," she replied, rolling her eyes.

He leaned back and brought his hands to her face, caressing her cheeks with the tips of his fingers before leaning forward and kissing her lips softly.

"Get changed, you should eat something," he told her lovingly. "I'm waiting outside."

She nodded and smiled as he walked out of the room. The look that he just gave her still lingered in her mind. He looked at her with so much care, so much love. Did he... did he love her? A smile reached her lips as she reached out for her clothes.

Awww! AWWW! AWWW!👏 you just write sooo beautifully.

Her thoughts were interrupted when she saw her undergarments nicely folded under the salwar kameez that Randhir had picked out, and she felt colour rush to her face. He went through her undergarments! How could she have forgotten that bringing her clothes meant bringing her undergarments too? She felt so embarrassed.

Hahaha, actually when I read it before when she asked... I thought of it. and I swear, I was like it might be overlooked! But I swear, you're just sooo real. I mean, it always had puzzled me. But you never fail to make it real... perfectly real.

Quickly putting on her clothes, she hesitated before walking outside. How could she face him? Mustering up her courage, she left his room.

"You... you saw my undergarments!" she said immediately, feigning anger, feeling her face turn red again.

"I saw them already last night jaan," he pointed out, his eyes twinkling.

She blushed even harder. The way he said it, it was like he was teasing her, but there was still truth to his words.

hahahahaha! THAT IS SO TRUE. I didn't think of that! and he said Jaan! hehehehe!!

"L - last night didn't happen!" she stammered nervously. "I mean, I don't remember it so it didn't happen."

"If that makes you happy," he replied, smirking.

"MCPeee," she whined, pouting.

"Farziii, we'll talk downstairs," he replied, taking her hand and lacing his fingers through hers.

hahahaha! I think it's adorbs that he remembers... it. is. so. sweet.

She looked down at their joined hands and felt a smile reach her face again. Once they reached the restaurant on the main floor and took their seats, a thought reached her mind.

"Randhir, I want to know what happened last night," she told him seriously.

He glanced at her with a raised eyebrow.

"You want me to show you what we did?" he asked, smirking.

She blushed and nodded.

HOLY CRAP! I thought he was kidding... and she actually nodded.

"Really?" he asked her, surprised.

"If we've already done it, we might as well do it again right?" she asked him, her heart hammering. "I mean... I just want to know what it feels like."

oh. my. god. I am dead.😳

"Tonight then?" he asked her with a smirk.

"Yes, tonight."

OOOH. MYYY. GOSH. I died.

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If you want PMs make sure you like the prologue! Sorry for repeating this, but just needed to mention it again. I would love to read your thoughts on the chapter and any predictions you may have! =)



AHHH! THIS PART. SO REAL👏! love it girly! I miss you... and you need to update extremely soon! and... woah. I am super surprised.. .can't wait to be blushing the whole time again on the next updateee! LOVE YOU.
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r simply awesum ha..and the chap was like NO WORDS...Really ran out of words ya...
U r very talented (of course goes without sayin)...
Conti son..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just read finished reading the whole thing!

And I am must say the concept is very very interesting and different. I have read stuff like that but its always the guy who decides to woo a girl because usually the writer make the guys character more strong and plausible to do something like that.
But this is the first time i am reading a girl do that... And to say I am enjoying it very much would be an understatement...

I am so sorry I took so long to comment but I have been busy and I was reading a few chapters a day...

Please do continue soon and PM me please, you never do... 😭

Oh and keep raising the hotness meter from time to time😉 All I can say about the previous chapter is that I mean how much hotter could you make it? One of the best erotic scene I have read so far! Great work man!! Though I still blush when I think about it..😆

Coming to this chapter:

Sanyukta, I went down on you... for a few seconds," he admitted. "I'm really sorry. I won't make an excuse for myself."

"You were drunk?" she asked him softly.

He nodded.

oh shit...☺️ I looked like that the whole time... thank god my mum wasn't around! 😆

"I hate dishonesty Sanyukta, you know that," he replied with a smile. "I'll always be honest with you."

Crap,,, that scares me man!😕


Her thoughts were interrupted when she saw her undergarments nicely folded under the salwar kameez that Randhir had picked out, and she felt colour rush to her face. He went through her undergarments! How could she have forgotten that bringing her clothes meant bringing her undergarments too? She felt so embarrassed.

That is as real as it can get. Usually, me included, writers overlook smaal details like that. They let the reader guess, but you are different... I am gonna take this trait from you and utilize it in my writing too.


Amazing work yaar... please do update soon and DON'T FORGET TO PM ME...

We don't know each other well so I don't know your name and I am so sorry about that. Hope we can change that.. :D

Love,
Sush
Edited by Sush94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb.. Lovely.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hats offf to u yaaar... How u can write such a hawwwt stufff... loved it...

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