Seven Days to Woo Randhir Singh Shekhawat Thread 2 (SEQUEL UP!) - Page 59

Originally posted by: basket_101

Res for Chapter 16

Oh yes I'm serious when I say I will be commenting on each chapter individually 😎

Oh goodness Hinal... I love you! <3

Unres

HEY Safffi 😃
Hi Hinal! <3

I love how she wants him to say I love you, despite being so confused herself.

My fav line - silly girl 😆
Hahahahaha silly girl, exactly!

But damn... I was not expecting her to actually seduce him just so he would confess

I love it when she's so daring... Fighter Sanyu :D
It sounded like a fun idea to write. xD But yeah her reasoning being that men will be men and if she tries and sexually frustrate him until he confesses, he will. 😆

Then the jealousy happened. It's honestly so cute to read :P

I love her insecurity. It's so real, esp the way you described it!
Thank you! <3

I loved how she was now starting to question how she would cope. Although this whole thing started with a challenge, she had forgotten about it and was genuinely concerned. Her vulnerability proves her feelings, not that they need to be proved, but regardless :P
Yeah... hahaha! But it needed to make sense to make way for her realization! <3

Then the honesty of Randhir. He is adorable I have definitely been in love with other characters, but Randhir is one of a kind. 😳 And you just make him more lovable with your words, seriously!
Thank you! <3 You're so so so sweet!

Amazing job with his characterization! 😃
Thanks! <3

This part was good, but I know next will be eeeveeennn bettteeerrr

Hehehee

once again "saari night besharmi ki heighttt" ☺️🤣
Ohhh gooodnesss HAHA!

I'm gonna read the parts again so i can comment on them individually. So next reply will be... soon :P

Love yaaa

:* <3
Awww I love you too! <3 :*

Originally posted by: basket_101

Chapter 17

Oh la laaa

Feisty Sanyu

Me likeyyy 😉
Hehehe me tooo!

I've always maintained this.. I absolutely love and admire this daring Sanyu. Seeing her dominate makes my feminist side happy 😆 More than that, I love how neither one of them are over-powering each other. It's balanced, which is exactly what Farzi and MCP's relationship needs to be 😛
Exactly! That's what I love about their relationship too - it's balanced haha!

Her seduction was sexy enough to leave me confessing as well 😆
LMAO Hinal! You crack me up. Like ACTUALLY. 😆

How do you do it Saffi? I have no words to describe how you can write such things without sounding cheap! Honestly it's a great attribute in your writing. I can see and feel the sensuality, yet I never feel repulsed by reading it :) You've done an absolutely amazing job with that :D
Aww thank you, that means a lot to me because I don't really like vulgar stuff... 😆

Getting back to the part. I love love love love LOOOVEEE her realization.

One of the best parts of this FF in my opinion. It was so well written! I can't even begin to put my feelings into words!
Thank you! That's my favourite part of this FF too! 😆

He said I Love You!! Omg raining tears here!!! :') Of happiness of course 😳
Awww! IKR... I was crying too... (not really, but almost) <3

And then he told her the truth of the confession already technically happened 😆 Bichaari. Had to go through so much turmoil 😆
Hahahaha IKR! <3

omg. okay im turning beetroot red... thank god i'm alone in my room ☺️
I was like that while writing, I assure you! 😆

Loved this whole part! :D
Love you! <3

On to the next one like a boss 😎
Hahahaha! 😆

Originally posted by: basket_101

Chapter 18

I love how they woke up 😳

#FutureDreams 😆
Hahahaha IKR! <3 Perfect hashtag.

Morning breath. You know what, this is why I love your FF. you make everything so damn realistic that it raises my expectations from my future hone-waala-bf/pati 🤣
HAHA! Thanks! <3 😳 Have high expectations, you don't deserve anything less. 😉😆

I blame you for it 😆😛
Sorry! :(

"With tongue" DAMN Randhir.. You go man 👍🏼 I love him.. love love love him, but I'm guessing you know that by now 😳
Hahahaha I love him too!

"Sliding her hand down"

☺️

Looking in my head to find my mind, but too late, it already went in the gutter

☺️☺️☺️

Jeez, I kinda hate how much of an impact you have on my blood cells right now. stupid things won't leave my cheeks alone ☺️

phirse - all your fault 😆

SORRY! But I was feeling the same way while writing it! </3 My blood cells probably burst! 😆

Then came the protective Randhir I love how she doesn't take it any other way, but just accepts that he has the right to protect her. I feel that sentence is applicable even out of this context. But anyway, I'm not gonna indulge in such a tangent convo :P

Hahaha yeah! <3

Damn those LITS boys -_- Kudos to RD for including that section. I can just imagine how Sanyu must be feeling

Yeah! :) Poor Sanyu!

SHIT That is a terrrible cliffhanger -___-

MAAR DAAALA

But regardless, it's a terrific cliffhanger 😆

As an (occasional) writer, I admire it.

As a reader, I absolutely loathe it.

🤣
Glad you understand! Hahaha this cliffhanger was just... too... necessary! LOL! It was like the biggest nail biting thing that could have happened to this FF!

Anyway, once again, awesome job Saffi!

Really loved it <3 <3
Thank you! <3

(Already read the part, but gonna be nice and say) Can't wait to read the next part! 😉

😆 Yea I know I'm losing it 🤪

:P

Not just you, I'm losing it too! 😆

And now I'm off to the next paaart :D

See you there! 😆

Originally posted by: basket_101

Res for Chapter 19

Didn't want anyone to break my chain of comments 😃😆
HAHA! <3 Cute! :D

And before the comment, I want to add a line of a song which may resemble my presence on this thread right now

Zaara dekho kaun aa gaya hai

Yeh thread pe jo chaa gaya haiii 🤣

I'm a genius.. I know xD
LOL HAHAHAHA! <3 You're SO cute man! <3

Okay, I had a small bowl of kheer. Maybe it's the sugar which is making me so hyper 😆

Maybe! 😆 Don't give me some, I'm already hyper!

Anyway, now back to the original purpose of this comment

The part:

She found out :O

Okay scrap that shock. Yeh toh hona hi tha.. Itna drama karne ki zaroorat nahi hai mujhe 😆

But I wish she had told him herself :(

Knowing his past, she should have known that lying to him isn't the best thing to do. He already has trust issues. But anyway, it had to happen sooner or later.

Hahahaha if she told him herself, all of this might have been avoided and then this bet might never have happened - though it still could have, but it's more fun for him to find out this way! 😆

I enjoyed the fighter Sanyu, as usual. How she was adamant on not losing him. How she was confessing her feelings to him. He deserved to know!

Yes I enjoyed writing the fighter Sanyu too! <3

But when he said "You won" 🥺 My heart broke
Mine too! 😭

I could just imagine how betrayed and heartbroken he must have felt. He loves her and trusted her so much, but she broke the trust... yet he loves her.

IKR... heartbroken, betrayed, but still... loved her a lot! <3

But then he went on "knew this was a game"

MAN I was right :O
Hahaha congratulations! <3

And although Sanyu got angry, I do feel that she was at more fault than him.

But either way, none of them were right.
Yeah they were both wrong xD

Nothing was genuine, except for their feelings. Okay no that's a stretch, but it just sounded so poetic to say 😆 The way they acted with each other might have been encouraged by the challenge (or the idea that something is up, in Randhir's case), but that was almost negligible after.

Haha that WAS poetic! Exactly, as time passed, they truly fell in love with each other and whatever they did was all because of their feelings! <3

Sanyu was right though "would I have given my body to you like this?"
Yuppp!

But then there's the aspect of her lying. He's hurt. And that makes it hard for her to justify herself.

Yes :(

And then came the Sherni with her attack!!!!!

"if she was wrong, then so was he"

#GirlPower 😆

Bahahhahaa!

And then comes the intro of the sequel 😃

What started with a scary intro, became an exciting part

Hehee
Thank you! <3 😆

I know you already posted the prologue.

So now, the next comment shall be on there :D

I will see you there soon! 😆

Firstly, congratulations on finishing SDTWRSS (long name :O lol)
Thank you! <3

You've done such a fantastic job! I think you can tell by the length of my comments that I enjoyed the FF so much 😃
THANKS! You are very sweet! <3

I won't miss it because I know it's being continued :D

So can't wait :D

Hahaha it will be continued soon! <3

Till then,

Muaaah :* <3

Muaaah to you too! :* <3

Originally posted by: raksbasu

Oh My God !!!

It ended...That also so nicely😳...I was thinking too far that might be they broke up😕 but thank god and you that nothing such happened😊...The end was beautiful😳...eagerly waiting for sequel...

Originally posted by: FaRzI_McP

I so badly want to read next.. lol... no commnts coz m just thinking whether randhir knows everything or not... xP

Originally posted by: FaRzI_McP

I expected dis... m completely blank r8 now... I so knew dis is gonna happn n m happy coz after dis story got extended. . lol. xD both r at fault... both r just same... now m so badly waiting for next chapter. ... bt I still believe sanyukta should have told him everything. . koi ni atleast us bahane we got the story extended. .. I feel so happy that I read it.. oh god m reading it sinve morning I guess. . lol yeahhh finally I read... cant wait for the sequel. ... I have no idea if u have completed that sequel also... silly me.. xP loads of love *hugs u tight* for giving dis.. n wat the hell.. just now u made a silent reader turn into an active user whoz commnting. . lol 😳