Originally posted by: basket_101
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I feel like I won a battle :3
I'm like never first
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Now let me go read :P
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Hey Saffi!
We meet again 😆
I have never been this eager to read a part of an ff.. seriously! 😛
So sweet of you really <3
So about the part now:
Although I knew she wouldn't remember that Randhir said I love you to her, it still felt so disheartening to have that confirmed. But regardless, I loved how she felt that she wouldn't regret it had he voiced out his love. It was a very simple line, but I really loved it.
That's how Sanyu is, and I really liked that you included that. Says so much about her :)
Aww I'm so sorry! Had she remembered it, the next two days would be pointless. 😆 Yeah, I always imagined her to be like this, so I wrote her this way. And then the fact that Randhir was so honest <3
He told her what happened, and apologized! Absolutely in love with Randhir 😳
"Touched me... where?"
OH GOD...
See there you again
Making me go on my besharam line of thoughts ☺️☺️☺️
😆
"Put your mouth there?"
OMG.. *faints* can't believe this again ☺️☺️
AAAHHH ☺️
Hooot
I love how he said sorry, and she just asked him if she liked it 😆
Even better was how Randhir went from being sorry about what he did, to being naughty and suggesting a replay of it all ☺️ 😉
That was a brilliant transition, hehe
I wanted to contrast them... Randhir so easily honest with her and Sanyukta hiding this challenge with him. =( But where he lacks, she rules, and where she lacks, he rules, so they're perfect for each other!
Hehehe trust me, I am so besharam and the besharmity heights has probably not even been close to reached yet! 😆
Yeah hahaha when she asked him if she liked it, he realized that she was fine and went back to his teasing nature hahaha!
"I hate dishonesty"
Man that kinda threw me on a slight guilt trip on behalf of Sanyu.
I hope that she tells him soon. She has fallen for him, quite obviously, and now I just want her to let him in on the challenge as well.
Two more days... he will find out soon. =(
"Genuinely infatuated"
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Silly girl, in RD's voice 😆
Seriously... This girl :P
IKR!
Randhir can be so naughty... Wanting to join her. God I could imagine Sanyu blushing. Just the thought of it made me blush☺️
Lmao hahaha! It made me blush too you aren't alone!
I must say the next part was the best.. Where just the thought of his lips on her body excited her.
Hehehehe <3
"Undergarments nicely folded"
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Where do you get these ideas from Saffi?
That was hilarious!
I can just imagine how embarassing that must have been. Oh gosh. Poor girl 😆
NO IDEA HAHA. My besharam mind pulls these ideas out of thin air. xD
"Jaan" Whoaa.. romantic Randhir is sexyyy. I liiike 😉😆
The biggest jhatka I got... "Might as well do it again" 😲😲😲
Kya baat hai 👏👏
I like this Sanyu
She's an independent woman 😆
It's fun for me to write too xD
In all honesty though, this part was perfect.
I think you've done a great job with all the emotions
From showing the gentleman Randhir, to the sexy Randhir, to the simple Sanyu, to the daring Sanyu.
You've done such a fab job!
Loved it so much!
And sooo happy I'm first to comment :D
😆
Thank you Hinal <3Will be waiting impatiently for the next update now *so selfish* 😛😆
Going to update soon!
Take caaare
Love you <3
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Love you too! :*
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