SANDHIR FF-KOI ANJANA APNA SA,THREAD 2 IS UP - Page 50

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Cute update
Sanyu scared to sleep alone
But rd helps
N paani da sng
He askd dogs to do duty
Ha ha

thank u soo much dear
i m glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahhh i was so waiting for ur update...i almost frgot u were out of town but thn i realised that waiting will be worthy
n this was an amazing update...arent they the cutest sweetest sandhir ever...
love the way he cares and she finds happiness at this house...
:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww chooo chweeet😊...
romeo kitna dhyan rkhta hai apni juliet ka☺️...
n best part raiden n raider romeo ki har baat maante hai so cute...
post nxt asap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx a lot for the updt nd im soo soo sorry for that stupid comment actually jab meine yeh ff check kia toh tumne abhi tak updt nahi tha i hoping to read the nxt prt so that maybe after rding mera gussa kam but u didnt updted toh kisi ka gussa tum par nikal diya im sorry again nd nxt plzz jaldi dena
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updated I like your concept
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

ahhh i was so waiting for ur update...i almost frgot u were out of town but thn i realised that waiting will be worthy

n this was an amazing update...arent they the cutest sweetest sandhir ever...
love the way he cares and she finds happiness at this house...
:)

thanx a lot dear
i m glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MeherS

Awww chooo chweeet😊...
romeo kitna dhyan rkhta hai apni juliet ka☺️...
n best part raiden n raider romeo ki har baat maante hai so cute...
post nxt asap...

thank u soo much
will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MDKRM

Thnx a lot for the updt nd im soo soo sorry for that stupid comment actually jab meine yeh ff check kia toh tumne abhi tak updt nahi tha i hoping to read the nxt prt so that maybe after rding mera gussa kam but u didnt updted toh kisi ka gussa tum par nikal diya im sorry again nd nxt plzz jaldi dena

oh thats fine dear😊 its better to let it out
yeah i will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gracy27

nice updated I like your concept

thank u soo much
i m glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 18

Sunday morning

Sanyukta woke up as she felt something licking her right hand,she looks

To her right to find raiden licking her hand,thn she looks to her left to

Find raider sleeping peacefully,sanyu smiles and picks raiden up in her hands

Sanyu-good morning raiden

Raiden-woof

Sanyu[picking up raider]-its morning raider,good morning

Raider-woof,woof

Thats when sanyu remember last night how randhir helped her to sleep

But she was thinking how come she ended on her bed as she slep sitting

On the chair in the balcony,but thn she rememberd randhir asking her not to

Lock the door.Thinking abt it she smiles and goes to the washroom

Soon she come out of the bathroom wearing a white kurti with black

Thread work and a black patiala

Sanyu-mujhe randhir ko thanx bolna chahie,lekin woh to abhi soo

Raha hoga,raat ko meri wajah se late ho gaya na

Saying so she first goes to randhir's room but to her surprise he was not

dere thn she went down where harsh was reading newspaper

Sanyu-good morning dad

Harsh[smiling]-good morning juliet,achee se neend aae na

Sanyu-yes dad,dad[hesitating]

Harsh-haan beta kuch poochna hai

Sanyu-dad,woh randhir kaha hai

Harsh-romeo?woh to beta subah 6 baje uth kar jogging ke liye jata ha

Har roz to raiden raider uske saath jate hai,lekin aaj woh unhe

lekar nahi gaya

Sanyu-6 baje?[surprised] ajj bhi gaya kya

Harsh-haan,aaj to Sunday hai na aaj miss thodi karega

Sanyu-kyu dad,aaj ky hai?

Thats when rian enters wearing a green t-shirt and whit denim jeans

Rian-woh iss liye juliet kyu ki har Sunday woh morning spl jalebi

Leke aata hai

Sanyu[excited]-jalebi,wow bhai i love jalebi

Thats when randhir enters

Randhir-and ur love is here

Everyone turns to face him who was wearing a black sweat pant

And black vest with a black jacket over it which was left open,

Headphones around his neck and hairs wet which he might have done

By pouring water

Everyone is looking at him as if he said a language unknown to them

Thn he realized what he said

Randhir-i mean jalebi guys

Everyone-oh

Then he moves to the kitchen mentally kicking himself for saying that

In the kitchen

Randhir-mom,jalebis[hugging her from behind keeping his chin on her shoulder

And showing the packets]

Renuka-aa gaya mera romeo[caressing his cheek and taking the packet from his hand]

Chal jaa jake naha le phir hum sab jalebi khaege

Randhir-yes mom[he was going when sanyu enter the kitchen]

Sanyu-good morning randhir,good morning mom

randhir-good morning sanyukta

Renuka-good morning beta neend aae ache se

Sanyu[looking at randhir]-yes mom bohot achee se aae

Renuka-good

Sanyu mouths thank u to randhir to which randhir bows,thats when renuka turns

And finds randhir in a bowing position

Renuka-arrey tu yaha khade hoke kya dance kar raha hai,go have bath

Hearing that sanyu giggles

Randhir-ye...yes mom going

With that randhir goes to his room

Sanyu-mom mein apki help karu

Renuka-haan beta tum na woh jalebi ek plate mein rakh do

Sanyu-ok mom[she was smiling thinking how shekhawat family has accepted her

And r loving her soo much which she wished from her father]

Her trance was broken when renuka called her

Renuka-sanyu beta

Sanyu-yes mom

Renuka-beta kya tum yeh green tea randhir ko de dogi

Sanyu-ok mom

Sanyu takes the cup and goes to rd's room,she knocks

Randhir-yes mom,why r u knocking

Sanyu opens the door and peeps but her eyes closed

Sanyu-its not mom,its me

Randhir turns to find sanyu peeping through the door her eyes closed

He chuckles seeing her

Randhir-you can come in sanyukta,aur haan tum apni aankhein khol sakti ho

I m fully dressed

Sanyu-oh k,woh mom ne tumhare liye yeh green tea bheji hai

Randhir[taking the cup from her hand]-oh thank you sanyukta

Sanyu-woh randhir

Randhir-haan

Sanyukta-thank you,tum waise bohot achaa gaate ho

Randhir-ur welcome sanyukta,aur thanx for the complement

Thats when parth and sahil along with vidhu and kaustu enters

Vidhu and kaustu run and hugs sanyu

Vidhu-kaise hai

Sanyu-awsome guys,tum dono kaise ho

Kaustu-we'r fine

Parth-oey ajj to jalebi day hai aur tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho

Randhir-arrey mein to abhi naha ke aya,woh green tea

Sahil[taking the cup from rd's hand and had a sip]arrey haan green tea

Parth takes the cup from sahil's hand and sips it

Parth-hmm aunty ki green tea miss ki yaar

Randhir[taking back the cup]-to tum dono jake mom se mango

Sahil-arrey aaj to milk with jalebi hai na to green tea kaise

Renuka-guys come down

Randhir-coming mom[he sips his green tea but he realized that it was over}

Randhir-abbey yaar green tea meri aur piya tum dono ne

Sanyu-come guys lets go

Randhir-no i need my green tea back[showing stubbornness]

Sanyu-theekh hai i'll tell mom

Randhir-oh teri no,m coming

With that everyone goes down,girls ahead and boys following thm

Sahil and parth r walking on either side of randhir

Sahil[wispers to rd]-oey rd yeh teri wali sanyukta hai kya

Randhir-[looking at sanyu]haan yaar

Parth-u mean juliet

Randhir nods dreamyly

Sahil- TERI JULIET[louder]

When he shouts randhir covers his mouth,girls turn to find rd closing sahil's

Mouth with his hands and parth's hand on rd's

Sanyu-did anyone call me

Randhir-nahi,nahi to,kyu

Sanyu-nahi mujhe laga ki kisi ne kaha juliet

Parth-nahi sanyu,tumchalo hum ate hai

Vidhu-ok

With that the girls go down and randhir releases sahil

Randhir-oey pagal hai kya,itni mushkil se to friend bane hai

Sahil was breathing heavily

Parth-iska matlab tune usse batya nahi that u love her

Randhir-no ways aur tum log bhi batana mat,don't u guys dare

Sahil-ar...ey...yaarrr,agar batae...ga nahi to woh janegi kaise

Randhir-oey tum logo ko pata hai kya,she don't even believe in love

Parth and sahil-ohhh

Renuka-guys what r u doing there,come down,the jalebis r delicious

Randhir-yeah mom

With that they go down and have the jalebis,they were actually delicious

Renuka-arrey vidhushi beta ek aur lo na

Vidhu-nahi aunty pls mein moti ho jaogi

Parth-to kya hua u will look beautiful thn also

Hearing that vidhu blushes and parth smiles and look at each other

Vidhushi[looking at parth]-really

But before parth can reply

Everyone-haannn,reallyyy

Then they all burst out laughing


i hope u guys liked it,pls hit the like button and leave ur comments😊pls

Edited by pari1995 - 11 years ago

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