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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

oh god Chitra!
are you planning to kill me? coz your updates are doing that..☺️
the first part was adorable..😳
i loved the fact that Swayam could read his Sharon and she trusted him..Preeti gayi bhad mein 😛
the last part was well ☺️
reading Your updates make me happy Chitra..you have an amazing talent which makes your wrks beautiful..
keep writing :)

Love
Nishi

P.S i know i have 2 pending res' one here and one for the FF..will unres by this sunday surely..

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Dee-jay

@Dee-jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Naww sharon is super cute and swayams lines are just suberb :)
Great chap! Update soon yarr

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

hey chitra Thanx for pm m scrap to first :) awww..this was a nice update she was swayams gf really my gosh Sharon was so understanding hmmm BT lil jealous they r so cute n adorable n d end was hilarious now update soon :)

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Reserved :)

Heyy!

Firstly, thank you so much for the pm :D

I read all three chapters in one go, and couldn't help but fall in love with the adorable Swaron :)

Them as a married couple. How cute

I love the understanding between them. You're doing a great job showing their relation!

I especially loved their first night together. It was such a caring gesture on Swayam's part :)

Love how much he teases her 😆 I was imagining all the scenes in my head! Really enjoyed the parts!

Can't wait to read more :D

Tc,

Hinal 🤗

Btw, what is your name??

Edited by basket_101 - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

sooo amazing dear...
loving this teasing swayam yr...

last part was just fab...
omg..
uodate soon

thanks 4 d pm

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

ahh last me swaron.romance...swayam is too naughty...
waiting fr nxt part...

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

swayam meih tera bhoot toh nahi guss gaya 😲

usney jo gaya usko sunn kar sharon ke sangh sangh meih bhi gayi 🤢

i really really loved the way u hav handled swayam

it was so realistic they say the best thing

in a couple is the period whr they tease each other

tis chapter had all the shades of a perfect romance novel

from teasing each other to understanding n care n trusting each other

all the spices were added in the rite proportion

the short scene whr she asks him why

was so beautifully penned

n the scene whr sharon admits tat she is

jealous was very well penned

do i need to say wat happens to me wen i read

abt swayam n his naughty avatar 😳

all i hav to say is wit each update

i want another chitra 😳

n agar woh nahi milah toh u knoe nah kya hoga 😆

do update soon dost 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Hey! I unres'd my comment :)

Here

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srinidhi94

@srinidhi94

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

its very good... loved it...

sharons jealousy...swayam understanding it and explaining her what shemeansto him very good...

waiting for more...

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

DI!!!!
What the hell, what the freaking hell was this!!
Oh god, I loved it!!

The blushing parts, koi aapse sikhe kaise likhte hai...

omg omg omg!!

every convo, every line was jsut superb, out of the world.

aisa laga ki koi bahot famous writer ne yeh likha

famous? ha aap ho famous aur deserve bhi karti ho!

just love loved loved it!!!
aur likho!!

aur mai toh restless hu hi toh jaldi update bhi karo!!😳

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