SwaRon SS:The feeling of being yours [FINALE CHP UP] - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
I won't say that I want the next soon, even though I want it.. But mere review na karne ki wajah se.. I just loose the opportunity to ask for one...
Anyways.. I was really expecting to read more... Because it ended at a point where I wanted more of it..

But that's how readers are treated..

Coming to the story.. I like the way the entire emotion and feeling thing is being evolved.. It is good to read this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Awesome chap!
So sweet he cooked for.
Sharon acting like a child to go out on the rain and Swayam trying to stop her. Priceless!!
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Beautiful update.
I am absolutely loving the level of sweetness and understanding that you have portrayed till now. This part was really very sweet.
Awww is all I could say with the equation Swaron share here. Making dumplings for the 1st time that too for her...the ultimate lover boy.
Waiting for the rain romance now. Thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
chitra kya karti ho yaar
tera kuch naam rakna parega
cyclone ke speed sey tu updates dey rahi hai
n i m loving it
swayam n sharon's bond is growing
n swayam's care for sharon his warmth towards her
was beautifully penned
he cooked for her n tat too sum tasty stuff
ab yeh toh honah hi tha aakir shekhawat is perfect
n the way they were teasing each other was brilliant
tis pyaar wali cher char makes the relationship more spicy
n finally the rain i m expecting sumthing real hot from u tis tym
n wit tat note i m leaving a request here
tat i want another update tat too soon 😉

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
what an update chitra loved it :) awww... swayam made dumpling for Sharon he so cute n sharon's siren side finally revealed I'm amazed with him update soon dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Nice update
Loved the care and love of swayam towards our Sharon
Yummy chicken dumplings
Waiting for romance
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
wowieee nice update dear
sharon siren... juzz <3d it
lovd the super chef swayam and his first attempt to cuk
afterall dil ka raastha tho peth se hota hai na
sorry 4 d late reply
waiting 4 d rain romance
want a longer update
<3 d sharons concern
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
edited the comment on page 10
go n c run meri jaan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It ws really a cute update...nw waiting fr rainy romance...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...Chitra this was such a honey sweet update!!
Waiting for the next rainy update... 😆

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