A SANDHIR FF (Discontinued)

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RSS The RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT the king of automobiles in england. The living definition of perfection. A 27 year old rich handsome lively cheerful bachelor in short a guy which every girl dreams of. It will be impossible to anyone to believe that a guy like him who always makes everyone happy, is filled with joy, is always kind to others, has a gloomy sad craving side, a side which always craves for her. Her the love of his life he dont even know her properly, he doesnt even know her name, only thing he knew about her was people called her pari, she actually was an angel who always makes everyone happy. Her only one smile was enogh to melt anyones heart. It was daily routine to him to lock himself in a room and spend his whole night there and as the morning crept leave the room and get back to his fake world. That room was full of pictures of hers, which he has taken without even coming to her notice. His cheerful lively behaviour never lets anyone notice this craving side of him .
It was as usual night of his life he came back from his office and after having peaceful dinner with his mom he was leaving to that room then suddenly his mom called him.
RM: Beta u r again going to that room?
RD : Mom if u know the answer then why do u always ask the same questions every day?
RM : Cuz u do the same thing everyday . Everyday u come back from office hv dinner then leave to that room. Why do u do this beta . Dont u lie being with me beta . Do u still hate me ?
RD : Mom u know its not like that.
RM : Then what is it beta we barely talk to each other in daytime due to our busy schedules and at night u without talking much u leave to that room. What the hell is inside that room . what do u get by spending ur night inside it?
Rd was not at all shocked by this behaviour of his mother he knew someday the volcano will erupt n that day he will hv to reopen his past n today ws that day
HEYA GUYS HI M PRITHA AFTER SO MUCH EFFORTS I M FINALLY POSTING MY FIRST WORK I HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT PLZZZ GIVE UR FEED BACK I WILL UPDATE NEXT PART ASAP AS I GET POSITIVE FEED BACKS AND ONLY IF I F SUPPORTS ME AS AFTER SO PROBLEM CREATED BY I F I M FINALLY POSTING IT
AND IF THIS TIME IT SHOWED ERROR THEN I WILL NEVER THINK ABOUT WRITING AGAIN CUZ I M REALLY FRUSTRATED RIGHT NOW WRITIN G IS NOT AN EASY TASK YAAR 😊

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PART 1 -1 (POST 1+POST 2)
PART 2 -2
PART 3 -3
PART 4 -4
PART 5 -7
PART 6 -7
PART 7 -9
PART 8 - 11
PART 9 - 13
PART 10 - 17
PART 11-21

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES
UNRES
Hey! Dear
Welcome to the SH fourm
Hope you have good time here.
Love
Bushra
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Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritha072angel

RSS The RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT the king of automobiles in england. The living definition of perfection. A 27 year old rich handsome lively cheerful bachelor in short a guy which every girl dreams of. It will be impossible to anyone to believe that a guy like him who always makes everyone happy, is filled with joy, is always kind to others, has a gloomy sad craving side, a side which always craves for her. Her the love of his life he dont even know her properly, he doesnt even know her name, only thing he knew about her was people called her pari, she actually was an angel who always makes everyone happy. Her only one smile was enogh to melt anyones heart. It was daily routine to him to lock himself in a room and spend his whole night there and as the morning crept leave the room and get back to his fake world. That room was full of pictures of hers, which he has taken without even coming to her notice. His cheerful lively behaviour never lets anyone notice this craving side of him .
It was as usual night of his life he came back from his office and after having peaceful dinner with his mom he was leaving to that room then suddenly his mom called him.
RM: Beta u r again going to that room?
RD : Mom if u know the answer then why do u always ask the same questions every day?
RM : Cuz u do the same thing everyday . Everyday u come back from office hv dinner then leave to that room. Why do u do this beta . Dont u lie being with me beta . Do u still hate me ?
RD : Mom u know its not like that.
RM : Then what is it beta we barely talk to each other in daytime due to our busy schedules and at night u without talking much u leave to that room. What the hell is inside that room . what do u get by spending ur night inside it?
Rd was not at all shocked by this behaviour of his mother he knew someday the volcano will erupt n that day he will hv to reopen his past n today ws that day
HEYA GUYS HI M PRITHA AFTER SO MUCH EFFORTS I M FINALLY POSTING MY FIRST WORK I HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT PLZZZ GIVE UR FEED BACK I WILL UPDATE NEXT PART ASAP AS I GET POSITIVE FEED BACKS AND ONLY IF I F SUPPORTS ME AS AFTER SO PROBLEM CREATED BY I F I M FINALLY POSTING IT
AND IF THIS TIME IT SHOWED ERROR THEN I WILL NEVER THINK ABOUT WRITING AGAIN CUZ I M REALLY FRUSTRATED RIGHT NOW WRITIN G IS NOT AN EASY TASK YAAR 😊


HEYAGUYS SORRY FOR SUCH ANSMALL UPDATE ACTUALLY I WAS HAVING PROBLEMS IN POSTING MY TS SO WAS JUST CHECKING WHETHER THI TIME I CAN POST MY TS OR NOT AND YUP NOW I M SUCCESSFUL SO HERES ANOTHR PART
RD: I get peace there mom peace of and u wanna know na that whats in there ? So listen It has her memories the each and everything which is related to her is in there. I can feel her there I can feel her presence.
RM was shocked by her sons confession never in her wildest dream she hs Imagined of this reason behi rd's behaviour.
RM : About whom u r talking about beta. Tumhaari baatein sunkar lagta h that u luvd someone .
RD : Yes mom I luvd her I still luv her.
RM : Then why didnt u shared this with me .?
RD : What would I hv told u mom that I luv a girl whom I dont know , that I dont even know her name?
RM : what?????? U luv a girl whom u dont even know properly? Still u luv her this much ?
RD : yes mom I luv her so much that I can spend my whole life waiting for her , she is my life mom and the only aim of my life .
RM : Beta if u luv her this much then why dont u find her I m sure that this is not a big task for u even u hv her pics so findin her is not a big deal for u . and I m sure that once u will propse her she wont deny u . afterall u r RSS no girl can deny u .
RD : I wish I could do that mom but the fact is that I cant I think by now she must hv been married.
RM : then why dont u foget her I cant see u like this beta. Atleast for my sake once try to forget her and move on in ur life plz ur loneliness is killing me inside.
RD : No ways mom I cant forget her I will never forget her . Her memories r like breathe to me I cant forget them. How can I forget her who made me what I m today mom u always used to ask me na that how a stubborn arrogant MCP stone heartd person like me became kind hearted selfless cheerful person. Well she is the reason behind it. She changed me for good made me realise that by now I was spending my lfe not living my life . She taught me , without doing anything , how to love how to care people . She made me a better person . U tell me mom hw can one forget such a person.
RM ws dumbstruck she didnt had words to talk to her son . A stranger can leave such an impact on her son was really togh to believe for hr
RM : so ever since u know that u both cant end up together still u wanna wait for her?
RD : Yes mom ever since I know we both cant end up together still I luv her. If I will stop loving her just cuz I cant get her then I never luvd her. But u know what mom her memories and the only fact that she too luvd me is enough to make me live my life the way I m living.
RM : What ? she too luvd u then why didnt she told u and wait that means she knew u and also there still are some chances for u
RD : No mom there isnt .
RM : how can u say that. ?
RD : u will come to know everything mom but for that u will hv to listen to my story mom, dunno why but today I want to share it with u.
RM : Thanks beta thankyou very much that u decided to tell me ur story
RD : its completely my pleasure mom but before that wont u like to see her.
RM : really beta u want me to see hr u r finally taking me that room.
RD : yes mom come
Then they both entered the room . And what she saw next left hr dumbstruck , every wall of the room had her pics some were painted some were clicked but what amazed her the most was the beauty of the girl whose pics were there . Her eyes nose each part of her was beautiful she was jst perfect no words can describe her beauty.
RD : beautiful isnt she?
RM : hmmm yes beta she is really beautiful. No wonder u luv her madly.
RD : hmmm so shall we start
RM : yes I m dying to listen to u
RD : ok so here I start ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Dear
lovely and nicely written👏⭐️
love it😳
Keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Dear

lovely and nicely written👏⭐️
love it😳
Keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Love
Bushra
🤗


Thaks dear
I m really hving a gud time here but being a newbie I m hvin some problem in updating parts as I m new here I m unaware of its process can help me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update asap pritha good one han congrats
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelynanu

update asap pritha good one han congrats


Thanks dear will update today
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me too want to hear the story...
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

me too want to hear the story...


Ok I will update it tonight pakka
Btw Thanks for reading my crap
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RD : OK mom here I start my story.
My story started when during my college day at the age of 19 . One day I was going to college then I got struck in a crowd. It got out of the car in order to know what was going on then I saw some preparations and I got know that it was JANMASHTAMI today . Then a scene caught my eyes a girl of about my age was climbing on the pillar made by men . When she reached at top she did some dancing with her and then broke the matki all this while I was ogling at her .
After she broke the matki she showed her thumbs down at my direction for a sec I sopped breathing I thought she caughtme but then I noticed some children holding their ears mouthing sorry to her then she winked and passed a beautiful smile at them . After that she climbed down and came to them and told * kaha tha na dont challenge me haar jaoge * a child replied * sorry di ab se hum kabhi aapko is tarah se challenge nhi karenge par plzzz us khadus aunty ko mat bolna warna aap to hume orphanage me waapas chhodkar waapas apne ghar chale jaaoge par aapke jaane k baad wo humara band baja degi.* to this she pupulled his cheeks *awww its ok baccha mujhe matki phorrne me bahut hi maza aaya aur ha me aunty ko kuch nhi bataungi pakka* the children almost jumped in relief hearing this. And soon they left to their place all this while I was oogling at herwas lost in her till a noise broke my trance then I realised that I was in middle of the road embarrassingly I made my way to my car went my college . In the college the ehole day I was smiling like idiots thinking about herfortunately my professors didnt noticed me but my friends did . We were in canteen I was again lost in her thoghts then my friend broke my chain of thoghts and asked if I was ok. I told him yes I m what made him ask that . He told that he has been noticing me since morning I m smiling without any reason . To cover up I arrogantly asked him that I hv no reason to smile its jst that I m in a good mood today thats it. Thank god I was not caught then I cotrolled my smile and left the canteen for my another lecture . 5 days passed like this and all these days I was praying to god to meet her again and that day he listened me . As usual I was going to my college but today 2 hrs early from my usual time cuz my friends hv planned to hv some fun today with our juniours. I was passing by a temple then suddenly a child appear in ront of my car as a I stopped the car by applying sudden breaks . I was gettig off my car then suddenly I saw a girl hugging that child I thoght she must be her sister or something so I decided not to create a mess and leave the plce as I knew these stupid girls lack maturity without even knowing about the siuation properly they will burst on the driver doesnt matter whether he is at fault or not. So I was starting the engine just then he came and knocked the window . I knew what was going to happen so I was ready to backfire her so I half opened the window so that I could see her and listen her but she couldnt see me. But what happened next left me awstruck that girl was her about whom I m thinking about so many days I was again lost in her but her melodious voice bring back in reality. And she said was actually opposite to what I thoght she would say she apologised to me for her carelessness and told me that from now she eill take care of iti didnt said any word other that *its ok* and then she left . I was looking at her retreating and thoght of following her so I parked my car outside the temple and was going to follw her then I saw her helping an old lady in climbing the stairs after she climbed all the atairs she gave her the blessing and got inside the temple. I too got inside the temple and was searching her then I heard her voice . I followed the voice . And I found her. Clad in a simple white anarkali she was showing some kathak steps to the children . They were those children with whom she was that day. Even in that she was looking breathtakingly beautiful . I was admiring the way her perfect dancer body moved while dancing , the way her eyes tinkled, the way she corrected the children her each and every move, each and every part was etheral . But I was contantly being disturbed by the vibration of my phone so I lastly picked up and told him that I cant come soon as I m struck some where . And agai I continued what I was doing and after 2 hrs she left with the children . From the people inside the temple I came to know that she daily came here at that time and taght them dance from 2 months. So I decided that I will also come here daily. Soon it became my routine to visit there and admire her even at my leave days.
2 years passed like this . These years changed many things like now I was no more a MCP stone heartd person arrogant jerk , now I m a cheerful lively kind hearted person who is loved by all, is always kind to others, respected by all now my friends were no afraid of me they loved me, now I was not spendin my life I was living and enjoying . She taught me how to loved without even talking to me , without any proper interaction . She changed me for good . I came know many things about her nature in these years . I came to know that she was a brave sweet kind hearted selfless cheerful lively girl . Dancing was her passion her love. She was always kind to others ,makes everyone happy ,is loved by all , but one thing she cant tolerate was injustice . And also that she had anger issues If she loses her temper she can turn violent though she rarely loses her temper it is safe to stay away from her. There are also some things that didnt changed these year was my daily routine I daily visited the temple , I never missed a single day to visit the temple and she too never missed a sinle day to visit the temple even thogh she was ill this showed her dedication to dance and more thing that didnt was me being rank 1 . I was always rank1 . And and and the most important thing I came to know was about my feelings which I mistakenly thought was infatuation but it wasnt it was love yes it is love. Me the RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT was in love that too with a stranger whom I dunno properly , I only knew about her was that those childre called her angel , thats why people called her pari. Now I had started imagining my life with her . Everything was going perfect untill that fatefu day came .
That day as usual I visited the temple but something was unusual today I was sad today but I knew that a mere sight of her was enogh to fade away my hurt , and sadness atleast for the time I was with her . And the magic of her voice worked now I feel like there was no place of sadness in my world when I m with her . I wonder how ca anyone hv such an impact on someone that a mere sight of her is enough to fade away all ur pain and withot eve interacting properly how can one change u this much. 2blissful hrs passed away now she was getting ready to leave but before she could leave I left from there and sat on the stairs of temple and lone tear escaped from my eyes. I was In my own world when someone called me. Ohh it was not someone it was her how can I make any mistake in recognising her voice. I broke my trance and paid my attention to her.
SHE: excuseme wo mera dupatta
She indicated towards my shirt
RD: oh sorry I didnt noticed
An with this I handed her the end of dupatta that was stuck in my shir buttons
SHE: thankyou
I didnt replied and she was going to leave when she noticed the tear that escaped from my eyes then she sat net to me. I was confusingly looking at her but she smiled at me and said
SHE: you know what strangers ko apne dil ki baat batane ke do faayde hai 1stye k obvio man se ek burden kam hota h and 2nd ye k baat bahar aane ka dar nhi hota so u can try it
She said as a matter of fact but still an mcp was inside me which came out today
RD : and mkes u think so k I will do it dekho chupchasp apne kaam se kaam rakho nd leave
I replied rudely thogh I knew I m going to regret it very badly but still
SHE :(smiling) bacchan k fan ho na
I was shocked with her question has she lost it or what but wait how did she know that I likeAmitabh bacchan
RD : tumhe kaise pata
SHE : tumhe dekh k pata chalta hai
RD : sach me ( innocently)
She burst out laghing and nodded in a yes after some time I too gave
RD : I m sad cuz of my mom who left me 7 years ago for sake of her career . For it she handed my responsibility to a person whom she considered as a monster.
Again a lone tear escaped from my eyes as a reflex she unknowingly she held my hand and nodded to cntinue further.

Heya peeps sorry to stop at this point what to do I m so lazy cant type more than this but for u heres the precap
Rd' s mothers story, her letter ( her means the girl) , and surprize.

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