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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Amazing find arnav funny in this one

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nishkka

@nishkka

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Loving the light bantering going on between Khushi and Arnav.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

So wjho is the stalker?

I feel Khushi is still withholding lots of secrets from Arnav.

La has already fallen for the smooth talker? Looks like she is desperate to have a boyfriend.

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

The story is getting more interesting by every update...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

interesting !!! loved it.. 😃

thanks for mail 😊

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Gosh, this is going great,

I am Loving it!!😆

I am wishing to get more of this FF,

Waiting for the next chapters!!😊

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

res for chapter three!

yaar meko pata hi nahi chalta that u updated

going through the chapter again and again I am STILL unable to put my finger on what is wrong here. Arnav is acting as calm as theif and khushi, well. I can't say anything. .

Lavanya seems to be acting smart. all I want to crack this illusioned mystery...

still reeling under the after effects of this chapter!

sorry for such bekaar comment but you, girl, you write mystery so so well.

Edited by .Avanti. - 11 years ago

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

So happy to come across this. Hope you had a good break. I am guessing you are an avid reader which will explain the versatility of your stories. This reminds me of an unfinished story that I was really enjoying with Kushi being an accomplice to petty little thefts along with NK and Arnav the obsessed detective. However I love your twist with the stalker. I am loving how you are describing this growing employer employee relationship between these 2. She sure does not mince words and he is just a charmer himself isn't he. Wonder how long he will stay as I am sure he is getting bored. Maybe things will heat up at the fundraiser party or even sooner while Kushi is down in her storage room. Did she tell him everything about why she may have a stalker? Loving the quick updates.

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

This was a fun and light chapter.

The way Arnav talked about Lavanya or the way he asked questions feels like he had done this investigation thingy before but than I guess it's the demand f his profession. Provide an ear and get the info.

Arnav and Khushi's banter or rather Khushi's more or less insulting remarks which Arnav took quietly rIses the doubt of whether she likes him and is jealous of him talking/flirting with la and so the treatment. Or she is simply trying to maintain the distance by such remarks and in away telling herself what he is so don't get attached?

What ever it is seems like she is affected.

What say?