Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 4

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: pixiegirl

But seriously what's wrong with him?? Kuchh zyaada hi thande nahi padgaye humaare Mukhya Mantri ji??? 😉 Sex starved toh chhodo, yeh toh kiss karma bhi bhool gayye... 😕

Methinks he needs some classes!

We are all willing to teach him?

Hai naa, ! 😳

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Methinks he needs some classes!

We are all willing to teach him?

Hai naa, ! 😳

Hehehe! Anytime, Anywhere! 😉

Bhy phear bhen the ever helpful Dharnakartas are here! 😆

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Hehehe! Anytime, Anywhere! 😉

Bhy phear bhen the ever helpful Dharnakartas are here! 😆

Are you ladies doubting Arnavji's capabilities😲😆

P.S. Swethaji, I owe you a comment for the last chapter - it will come up soon!!!

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amv63

@amv63

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Posted: 11 years ago

#714

Shweta, I have been wanting to comment on your story for the longest time but there was always something or the other that prevented me. I'm finally getting a chance to tell you just how wonderful this story is and what a fantastic job you are doing.

Your attention to detail is truly awesome...whether it is on Rajasthani architecture or the Indian political system. Your description of the whole election process brought it to life even as the real-life elections were going on here. Simply superb.

I know you've faced some flak about your characterization of Arnav and his first love Lexie. But hey, don't let a few naysayers get you down or stop you from writing the story YOUR way.

Arnav and Khushi have come a long way from the arrogant, don't-give-a-damn-about-what -people-say politician and his naive young bride to a mature young couple on the brink of parenthood. Even though they sometimes flounder in their willingness to give this relationship a chance. 😛

Aman and Anjali...a more star-crossed couple I haven't seen, I think. They both need to sit down and clear the air and I hope this latest crisis in their lives forces them to sit down and do just that.

Anjali showed a lot of courage in breaking off this relationship, but she is going to need a lot of strength in facing the gossip and scandal that is bound to follow the TV coverage. I hope Aman can use his contacts to stop further telecasts. None of this has been her fault, but to the world it will appear like she was too drunk or drugged to care.

I am thoroughly enjoying this tale and stalk these pages regularly for updates.😆 And I've got to thank Disha for recommending it.

Edited by amv63 - 11 years ago

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#715

I know I had not been regular in commenting but I follow each and every update...you are building the story excellently and I enjoy it to the bits...even though Anjali was made a pawn...I guess this is the only way Anjali and Aman could be together...However, I wish that video hadnt leaked...Now I wait for ASR's uncontrolled reaction to Jhangid...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#716

Just the thought that they are actually living in the same house that Jhangid used to live

in gave me a creepy feeling ... 🤢 but I'm sure necessary steps were taken to rectify that ...

Khushi sitting and retrospecting on her husbands achievements and feeling quite proud of it ...

The guilt free security a woman gets from the success of her father or husband is unparalleled ...

she considers it her birth right to revel in it and enjoy the success and rightfully so ...

She rightfully distinguished between acquired wealth/position and hard earned wealth/name ...

That was one childish outburst from her regarding their bedroom ...

but in her condition she is entitled to such childish outbursts ... 😆

What to say about the creep ... 😡 Feel like strangling him ... of all the low down things all he could think of was ruining a young girls reputation ! He should at least have been man enough to fight it out face to face with Arnav instead of pulling in an innocent soul into their fight ...

Though the incident had one positive result ... she broke off her engagement with the spineless swine ...

Very rightfully named chapter ... Collateral Damage or...? I hope this incident makes Aman realize why he behaved in the most irrational manner when he heard about Anjali being in a problem and he rushed to her rescue ...

😆 have really lost it ... had written this comment out two days ago and forgot to post it !!!

Thanks Shweta ...

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Lovely update😃 poor anjali has to go through a lot 😭I hope that shyam will rot in hell by the end of the story 😛 thnks fr the pm 😊

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satiisparvati

@satiisparvati

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#718

Last 4 chaps been awesome. I disagree that Khushi is being childish about asking for separate bedroom. It is Arnav being thick that it is taking him this long to realize his love for Khushi.

Poor Anjali why must she suffer so much. I hope she leaves for Cambridge and gets to discover herself. Even Aman does not deserve herself.

☺️

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Aditi Sharma

@ADITI.SHARMA_03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#719

Hey! I have been a silent reader for a long time now but finally wanted to let you know what a fabulous writer you are. I am not at all good with words so i'll simply say that i absolutely adore hopes and ambitions. Honestly, to me its one of the best ff's here at IF! Big fan!!

Do continue soon.

Take care.