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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update..Finally Taani decided to let him go..
She is not interested in second hand borrowed happiness..
Im proud of her..


You shouldn't take your partner for granted.. I remember a Spanish saying Entre lo que existe y lo que no existe, el espacio es el amor.(The space between what exists and what doesn't is love)..

I wont blame K... Y cant he open his damn mouth!!!!
Do din mein shaadi 😲
Im loving Swayam.. Mr. Spock the logic guru of ur story..

Big Thanks for not showing gang's drama..

I dunno how r u going to justify TR Milan!..I love them together so much..
Waiting for Rey baba's POV..



New story??? 😃...
Edited by iluvrevolution - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
waiting for Rey's pov
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update
Loved the part of Taani getting nervous for marriage
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Posted: 11 years ago
No no no !!!
You'll definitely not be forgiven !!!
Serial mein kafi nahi tha ki tum itne ache FF mein bhi Taarey ko alag kar rahe ho !!!
Please na itna achcha story hai ... happy ending to banta hai na !!!
Pichle do updates se mujhe to poori tarah rula diya tumne !!!
Mujhe nahi pata !!! But I want Taarey together !!!
Thanx for the PM !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi everyone..thanks for replies and likes
disclaimer- read at ur risk- TR are not going to get married in this .. they r together only😃

if this part seems like its going in circles- i can only say that its kriya thats running this convo so thats why. u know how she is..

part 5



Happy friendship day btw

rey and kriya in the car, rey driving- kriya s
mobile on with sharons voice screaming something making rey grin uncontrollably
and kriya hit his arm indicating him to stop grinning


"Sharon...sharon...stop it ...sab
kuch teek hain..remember swayam ke ghar mein tumhe lekar koi problem nahin
hain, tumhaare ghar mein swayam ko lekar problem hain...tho tum kyun sabko
impress karne ki koshish mein ho? itna tension lekar..."


"kriya u dont understand...any
amount of good impression s never enough..."


"SHARON..." rey intervened,
Sharon stopped," Sharon seriously ?! stop...itna unnecessary tension se
tumhaare forehead par lines aayenge bas aur kuch nahin.."Sharon ran her fingers
on forehead ," so chill, relax and let me drive in peace. Waise bhi we ll reach
there soon " Sharon sighed ," oaky?"


"guess tum log teek kehrahe
ho..fine see u soon"


"taani pahunc gayi kya?" rey
enquired


" ya but she has gone for some
work..tum sab saath ho?"


"yes, hum sab ko on the way pick
karnewaale hain" kriya replied ," bye
now" and they disconnected


Kriya looked at rey and both
burst out laughing shaking their heads- Sharon!


"poor Sharon!" kriya said," hum
has rahe hain but she s actually right -i guess "


"umm, guess so...thankfully we
dont have that problem"


"matlab?"


"matlab everyone in our families
are happy about us..so when we decide to get married humein koi problem nahin
hogi " kriya went quiet and looked out of the window,he continued " actually we should think about it , na kriya?" no
reply,he looked at her surprised " kya hua? Tum chup kyun hogayi?" no reply.
Rey s face showing slight surprise ," ...kri.."


"kya farak padega rey if everyone
s happy or unhappy about us?"kriya answered sharply..Rey frowned," we should be
happy about staying together" stressing on the WE and before rey could open his
mouth," and i didnt know we were getting married" she ended voice still
typically sharp


"yeh tum aise kyun behave
karrahin ho? isn't it obvious?" she
smiled wryly and looked out of the
window. He stopped the car to a side and frowning turned to her," ok, whats the
problem?"


"car kyun stop kiya? Sab wait
karrahe honge chaliye.."


"not till you tell me what the
damn problem is" he shot back completely irritated


Kriya turned to face him and
said," aapne aaj tak kabhi shaadi ke baare mein baat nahin ki .." he gave her a
so? look," tho ab kyun? suddenly"


he still looked at her with a so?
look and as she stared at him as if saying
ur turn to talk
he replied," i guess bcoz i thought its understood..i
dint ...and maybe bcoz ab taani ki shaadi
hain tho ...well"he smiled flirtingly ,"agar tumhe formally propose karna hain
tho i can u know" and stopped catching her with the wry smile still put on her face , she shook her head making him stop
his words and look at her perplexed," what???"


"jab tak taani ki shaadi nahin
hua tab tak aapko shaadi ki idea nahin aaya tha haina rey?" her voice dripping
with sarcasm


He wondered for a second what she meant and then as he looked at her
hurt expressions, it struck him - she s
jealous, no wonder she has been acting funny
and suddenly grinned," kriya ur jealous?! " she avoided his
eyes , he grinned more broadly trying to
catch her eye, making her get angry," i cant believe it ki tumhe itna ..."


"rey.." she began..he laughed out
loudly holding the steering wheel


"stop it rey, its not funny"
kriya shot at him his laugh angering her more


he controlled his laugh, lifted
his hands up in peace and then placing
his hand on hers said," kriya but it is funny, u know i love you"Kriya looked
at him, he was earnest but before she could feel nice he said ...," and taani
ki ab shaadi honewaali hain.. so what are u jealous about?" he asked smiling


"and if she wasn't getting
married then?" she blurted wanting desperately to know


" then...then what? " rey replied
for a second thinking of taani free of all other commitments and as his heart leapt
up, he immediately stopped that train of thought and looking at kriya - keeping kriya s hurt
face in front of him squeezing her hands in his said," look kriya i dont know
and i..i dont want to think about things that aren't ...im happy ab hum
saath..."


"but rey ..."


"no listen..im happy with what we
have now..yeh sab baton ki koi zaroorat hi nahin hain..taani s happy im happy
and ive moved on with life "he smiled
not realising his smile looked forced


"aapko dekh ke tho lagtha nahin"
she replied " ki you ve moved on in life" her voice imitating his.


He frowned at her feeling cornered ,"matlab"
she didnt reply to him instead said," i think humein jaana chahiye ,everyone ll
be waiting"


He lost his patience," so let
them...if you cant tell me in straight words, tum start kyun karthi ho argue karna?
i can understand thoda sa jealousy but
tum itni unreasonably behave..."


"UNREASONABLE? AUR MAIN??
Rey aapko apni khudh ki behaviour dikh nahin rahin hain ya jaan bhoojke
dekhna nahin chahthe? Jabse wo aayi hain tabse aap...bilkul different ..." her
voice broke a little but she pulled her hands back and continued ," if you ve moved on aapko tho
farak nahin padna chahiye" she said sarcastically," but no, aapko tho taani ki shaadi yeh and shaadi wo..."


Rey also pulled his hands from hers getting angry," cut the sarcasm kriya" his voice rising," its
not like that , u dont understand.."


"really?! I dont understand what?
ki aap... i mean aapne Sharon ko dance performance na dene keliye manaya!! Kyun ? "


"because its her wedding and she
didnt want it bas"


"and what she wants , aap dene ke
liye ready hojaaoge?"


Rey looked at her and couldn't believe
he was having this conversation - he saw her hurt expressions - its
natural she feels like this...but main ... mera behaviour mein itni difference
hain?
before either of them could talk- mobile rang loud - Vicky - he received
it Vicky was screaming at him for being late, he screamed back at Vicky making
kriya shake her head and then as he cut the call , restarted the vehicle
and looked at her sideways said," kriya , tum samaj nahin rahin ho.."


"kya rey? main kya nahin samaj
rahin hoon? clear tho hain ki aapkeliye
kaun kitna important... ! " she was
fast losing her cool at his -im not wrong
and guilt free attitude-
and the
sarcasm showed in her voice


His face darkened and he cut her sentence," haan hain important
taani mereliye , uski khushi, uski feelings sab kuch mereliye hain important "
his tone was blunt, voice matter of fact shutting her up completely for a second making her unable to even
process what he was saying," she has been a important hissa meri life ka...and i
cant forget what she..." he stopped not wanting to remember took a breath and
said again ," ...and dont tell me ki
maine tumhe bataya nahin tha uske baare mein..."


"yeh nahin bataya tha ki aapko
abh bhi ..." she stopped not able to verbalise - that he loved her even now


Rey turned to her , understood
what she wanted to say and found himself unable to deny what she was saying. By then ,
he found the rest of the gang waving to
them and stopped . Kriya immediately got down from the car, went to the
backseat telling Vicky - u can sit front- making Vicky look at her oddly and then at rey
with raised eyebrows. Rey didnt look at him


Within few minutes of rey
starting to drive however Vicky stopped him and took over the driving saying-
mujhe shaaadi main jaana hain marna nahin, tu chod.


Rey sat in the co passenger
seat both he and kriya ignoring each
other and everyone else as well. Kriyas thoughts going in circles , in
disappointment and anger he seemed so sure
what he felt wasn't wrong at all tho hamare beech jo hain jo t ha...atleast jo
mujhe laga wo sab jhoot tha ?but he doesn't lie kriya
she told herself
confused


Rey wondering if he was really at
fault knowing that the whole conversation was incomplete -yeh mujhe blame kyun karrahin hain? he hadn't cheated anyone had he? Maine kabhi yeh chupaya tho nahin tha
ki maine taani se sachha pyaar kiya hain , that we were in a serious
relationship and that i spoiled it due to my stupidity..
he sighed and
closed his eyes pretending to sleep ignoring the gangs masti ..and
taani ki shaadi horahin hain.. kisi aur ke saath whats the point in trying to
rake up all this now? and she seemed happy as well...so contented ..taani i
mean ...happy matlab atleast excited ...good for her..usse wo sab kuch mil
rahaan hain jo usse hamesha se chahiye tha jo wo deserve karthi thi...she
always wanted to belong somewhere- ab hain uske paas- families, business
friends ...everything ...and a perfect husband ...not you though
some inner voice taunted she s nt with you


he suddenly opened his eyes
looking out of the window the realisation striking him hard somewhere in the stomach - he felt a bad
taste in the mouth and wondered if he was going to be sick, he opened the
window more and breathed in the fresh air trying to get over the urge to
suddenly scream his heart out ...it wasn't
him who was going to be with her all her life, it wasn't him who was going to
be with her when she wanted to celebrate her sucessess , it wasnt him who was
going to be with her when she wanted advise , it wanst him who was going to kiss
her good morning or good night or while going to work..
.he clenched his
fist and took another deep breath willing his thoughts to stop ...no it
wasn't going to be him
he replied strongly to that taunting voice inside but it was him whom she would think of first each time there was any
change in her life just as he would think of her each time there was a change
in hsi life ..wo khush hain aur rahegi and it s my happiness thats going to
keep her happiness complete just like hers s going to keep me going
the
unexpected surge of emotions passed just as suddenly and he breathed normally


he heard Vicky asking him
something and answered mechanically and
happened to look back through the rearview mirror- kriya was sleeping her face
dull- yeh main tumhe ya kisiko bhi kaise
samjhaaooo ki mere aur taani ke beech kya hain kriya!
And then smiled but i know tum samaj jaaogi just like how vishesh did ...ki feelings dont die kriya relationships do


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Some office - taani and vishesh working ( ive forgotten visheshs face -
imagine who u want- or ignore)


"so done...hogaya..." taani
closed her laptop and bent closing visheshs as well making him smile


"haan and im glad we had
this warna koi mujhe tumse milne nahin
de rahaan tha" she smiled ," i wanted to see you once ..."he stopped , she
looked at him and his unasked question but didnt reply, he continued ," tum
teek ho ? see taani if u .." and stopped again uncertain


"im fine , kitne baar poochenge? No if s and buts " she smiled genuinely ," and
agar nahin hothi tho aapke elawa aur kisse baat karthi? Bas thoda sa time laga
adjust hone mein " he smiled back relieved
and lifting up her hands kissed it


as she saw him she had another reality check- in do saal mein vishesh had become more
attached to her than before ..thanks you krishnaji for not letting me jump off
the window
she smiled at him




Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

No no no !!!

You'll definitely not be forgiven !!!
Serial mein kafi nahi tha ki tum itne ache FF mein bhi Taarey ko alag kar rahe ho !!!
Please na itna achcha story hai ... happy ending to banta hai na !!!
Pichle do updates se mujhe to poori tarah rula diya tumne !!!
Mujhe nahi pata !!! But I want Taarey together !!!
Thanx for the PM !!!



thanks for reply but...see ...well..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

amazing update
waiting for Rey's pov



rey s pov yet to complete..thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess1926

Amazing update...
Loved Taani 's POV...it was beautiful...
Kriya is insecure...
Loved Rey 's thoughts... It was truly nice...




thanks...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yoyoaishwarya

<font size="3">awesome update, taani back in normal mood, rey in confusing state , Kriya insecure , taarey still can feel eachother heart aur tum unko kisi aur ke saath couple karne ka plan kar rahi ho , update soon</font>



Sorry but thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
loved rey's statement that taani her feelings her happiness everything matters him a lot
and i won't be the guy ... that was really awesome line dear
update soon dear

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