Kriyaansh + swaron os! DOUBLE DATE = RAIN + U!

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SWARON + KRIYAANSH OS
DOUBLE DATE = RAIN + U!
Hey guys,
This os for my icon, my brother!
Hope u like it David bhai!
Sorry first attempt hai toh pata nahi kaisa hai!
Thanks for everything!

Hope u guys like it!
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"Rey! In my house now! And for gods sake am not listening to a NO!" Shouted Swayam on the phone.

Rey woke up with a jerk! He expected Sharon to scream at him on the phone like that but Swayam, seriously. He literally peed in his pants!

"The HELL! Swayam stop acting like Sharon. My pants are wet because of u!" Blurted out Rey

"Loosed up Rey and you're in my house in 5! Oh and on the way wear clean pants not wet ones, I didn't buy a new set for u this time." Joked Swayam and kept the phone

"Jesus Christ! I expected another snooze." Thought Rey hugging his sweet - dream pillow.
Rey got off his bed lazily and went to have a shower. He wore casuals and rushed to Swayam's house. He rang the doorbell.

Swayam opened it and greeted Rey," hullo! Come in."

"Shut the front door to HELL! U WOKE ME UP AT 11 AM TO TELL THAT!" Screamed Rey

"Woah, calm down idiot! Heard something called as a double date?" joked Swayam

"Dude don't tell me you don't know what's a freaking DOUBLE DATE!" Shouted Rey, getting irritated. Rey couldn't believe that he had missed his sweet night sleep just for this stupid definition.

"Am joking idiot!" Said Swayam laughing at Rey's reaction

"Not funny dude! Now tell me what am I doing here?" Asked Rey

"I need to convince Sharon, Rey. She's angry and u are gonna give me ideas." Said Swayam

"Ya,ya! After all am the love guru of St. Louis right?" Teased Rey

"Shut up Rey! Just tell me how to solve this problem." Begged Swayam.

Just then Rey's phone rang, it was from his baatcutter.
"Hey baby!" Greeted Rey

"Wow, I expected this! No sorry-vorry on top of that hey baby!" Shouted Kriya

Rey was taken aback because of Kriya's angry mood. He knew his baatcutter was on fire!
" But what did I do meri baatcutter? Acha, okay..." Started Rey

Was this time different so like always his baatcutter cut him off," U don't even know the damn reason! REY IVE BEEN WAITING FOR U AT COSTA FROM PAST 1 HOUR! We had a freaking date dammit.!" Shouted Kriya

"Shit! I'm definitely gonna get murdered. God , why only me!" Thought Rey. He had completely forgotten about their date. Rey wanted to say a sorry but Kriya had kept the phone. Rey knew that just a sorry wasn't gonna calm his baatcutter down.
His baatcutter was hell angry that she would kill ANYONE now and he was the most obvious person in her mind.

"Anything wrong?" Asked Swayam

Rey hugged him, leaving Swayam shocked. "Dude, please convince Kriya for me. She's really angry with me, puhlease!" Begged Rey

"No freaking ways dude! My life is too precious for me and for now Kriya's the murderer!" Said Swayam

"Hmm we both need to convince our loves. How about..." Asked Rey

Swayam didn't understand what Rey meant but then he gotta know. He pushed Rey back and shouted," Rey I'm a simple man! And moreover a one woman-man! Dude get someone else I can't be gay dude."

Now Rey got confused," what the hell man! Gay! Seriously? Am talking about helping each other in convincing our loves. U think for Kriya and me for Sharon."

"Why the hell are u thinking about Sharon idiot!" Screamed Swayam getting possessive.

"God! This guy." Muttered Rey .
"U think for an idea to convince Kriya and me Sharon. Get it?" Explained Rey

"Okay..." Agreed Swayam

Both of them kept on thinking for ways to convince their lady loves. If, one gave an idea the other rejected it. There wasn't any idea which was perfect for both of them. Finally, an idea clicked!!'
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SHARON'S P.O.V

Sharon kept on wondering why hadn't Swayam called her yet. No sorry, nothing! His was the first time something like that had happend maybe it was her fault only. She thought of calling Swayam but then she stopped herself. It was his fault! He didn't tell me about Huma. Just then her kaka came and asked her whether she wanted to eat now. Sharon rejected it, she didn't feel like eating anything at all! There was only one person who could convince her and that was her Swayu! Her secret admirer! Her boyfriend! Her life!

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KRIYA'S P.O.V

"That Rey, am gonna kill him. How could he forget out date! How?" Thought Kriya
Kriya was so annoyed with him right now that she would have murdered him if Rey was in front of her. She threw her favourite teddy bear which Rey had gifted! That date was so special and he.. Ugh!
Kriya kept on cursing Rey but then she remembered how Rey had forgiven her for leaving him... She had to forgive Rey for this. Just then her phone beeped, it was a message from Sharon:

"Hey kri! Rey messages both of us to come to this address..." Messaged Sharon

"Perfect!" She replied back.

"So now, he wouldn't even talk to me directly huh.." This thought go hers added fuel to her fire which burned more red right now!
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"Everything done na?" Asked Rey

"Ya! Got the nakli baarish for u also." Answered Swayam

"Now bring it on!" Shouted both of them.
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Both Sharon and Kriya reached that address. It was a lonely place, there was no one there. The place was dark with just 1 streetlight giving them company. The only thing going in their minds was," why the hell are we here!"
Someone carried Kriya and took her away from here. He closed Kriya's mouth knowing that she would scream! Who was he?

Sharon got scared but just then someone kissed her in the cheek and said the magical word which melted all her angryness..," Sorry!"
She knew it was Swayam!
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SWARON (guys, kriyaansh is after this..)

"Swayam" Sharon mumbled
Just then the lights were on! Making the place more beautiful, it was filled with all the swaron memories! Lying in the middle was a red canopy.
Sharon looked at Swayam with a big smile in her face and ran inside the canopy with Swayam following her.

The canopy contained a red glowing fire in the middle. There was a table which contained a bottle full of sparking water and just next to it was a message. On all four sides were roses, some red, some white and some yellow!
Swayam gave Sharon the message. Sharon started reading it...
I did so much for my apology to be accepted so I want something too! I want a KISS!

Sharon blushed but Swayam wasn't gonna leave her alone. He gripped her waist and pulled her towards himself, dashing her towards his chiselled chest. Sharon gasped and ran away from Swayam. She held a window panting with Swayam following her. He caught her waist tightly and slides her down making her sit in his lap. Swayam cupped her face but Sharon moved away. She didn't know why but she couldn't stop her desire of tasting his lips. Swayam couldn't resist it today, he pulled her leg and kissed her forehead and neck. Now Sharon couldn't control herself, she came on top of Swayam and kissed his lips hungrily..
In no time it turned into a passionate kiss and to add more flavour, it rained! But Sharon and Swayam didn't care! All they wanted was each other...
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KRIYAANSH

That someone carried Kriya to a room. That someone was none other than Rey. He made Kriya sit comfortably on a chair and removed the blindfold. Kriya opened her eyes but all she could see was Rey's hot and chiselled body. She couldn't help gawking at him with her mouth open. Rey smirked at the effect he had on his baatcutter. Drops of water started entering from the roofless room, it started raining! Rey knew how to convince Kriya. He started dancing on malang.. His steps were in sync and the stunts were perfect. But the only thing Kriya saw was his oh so hot chiselled body and his wet hair! Now no one could stop Kriya ghai from starting at Reyaansh Singhania,

"Damn! How can he remove all my anger. Now I can't resist it." Thought Kriya.

She got up from the chair and walked towards him, completely wet. She pulled his neck towards her and started dancing.. Rey caught her waist and kissed her cheek. Kriya ran almost slipping if two pairs of hands hadn't caught her. Rey carried her in his hands and started kissing her passionately. Rey poured all his love for Kriya and Kriya was no less.

Both of them were totally wet but their bodies were the only thing that gave them warmth...


"" DOUBLE DATE = RAIN + U!!!"""
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Hope u guys liked it!
Am not telling u guys whether my headache is gone or definitely u guys will kill me!
Really nervous, just hope it's good
Jhootas and chappals welcome!


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nature-beauty thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh My God i was literally ROFL🤣
i thought kria called rey reading the first line😆
pehla line padke and the ReYam convo through phone

and phir when Swayam says that he is not a Gay 😆

and then ReYam mission to convince their GF hayee kitna acha tha😳

nice work diya do write more 😃
i would love to read ur writings
Edited by nature-beauty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice OS👏

swayam hell worried tat hw will he convience sharon😆
n waking up rey fr solving his problem bt rey is also on trouble😆
poor they both of them trying to manofy their gf😆
at last the sharon n kriya nt angry with their bf😊
loved d swaron n kriyansh scene😉
loved d whole OS my DRAMAQUEEN😃
Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing OS
love the concept and storyline
the beginning was funny when swayam screamed at rey over the phone
love how they are trying to get their love one back to being happy with them
beautifully writte
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey drama queen nice update double date ha I love reyam's convo swaron part I remember d kiss sequence kriyansh date was also nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the concept...its amazin!!!
Superb OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u everyone!
Glad u guys liked it 😊
Don't kill me but this is something I wrote with a headache! So pls don't kill me!

Thx for spending time and commenting 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is superb diya..
omg reyam convo was damn funny...

nd that gay wala part is wow..

loved it diya ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nature-beauty

res

unres

Oh My God i was literally ROFL🤣
i thought kria called rey reading the first line😆
pehla line padke and the ReYam convo through phone

and phir when Swayam says that he is not a Gay 😆

and then ReYam mission to convince their GF hayee kitna acha tha😳

nice work diya do write more 😃
i would love to read ur writings

Thx di!
Pm karungi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The beginning diya. . .Bang on!It was so dann funny!When i read it i realize I m gonna miss ReYam on my tv screen :( Anyways ReYam were really awesome...Gay????Lolzzz!!!!Nakli barish. . .Haila!Hahah!Then SwaRon date awww...the whole set up was amazing:)Kiss. . .Beintehaa<3 KR part was also nicely written :)

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