Kriyaansh + swaron os! DOUBLE DATE = RAIN + U! - Page 2

superb
amazing
1st attempt
perfect
impressive jaan
&
but i m crying now
u know why
apne bhai ke liye likha
but mere liye kabhi nahi
pout
behen behen nahi rahi
gaur se dekhiye is larki ko kaise rula rahi hai apni behen ko ek dusre bhai ke liye

Originally posted by: SweetDevil_KR

superb
amazing
1st attempt
perfect
impressive jaan
&
but i m crying now
u know why
apne bhai ke liye likha
but mere liye kabhi nahi
pout
behen behen nahi rahi
gaur se dekhiye is larki ko kaise rula rahi hai apni behen ko ek dusre bhai ke liye

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

The beginning diya. . .Bang on!It was so dann funny!When i read it i realize I m gonna miss ReYam on my tv screen :( Anyways ReYam were really awesome...Gay????Lolzzz!!!!Nakli barish. . .Haila!Hahah!Then SwaRon date awww...the whole set up was amazing:)Kiss. . .Beintehaa<3 KR part was also nicely written :)

achcha chal jhooti
pehle aap ne unke keliya likha abh main kya phada abh
chhor mujhe nahi chahiye os on kr
&
1st take care of ur headache 1st daantoo phirse

Originally posted by: SweetDevil_KR

achcha chal jhooti
pehle aap ne unke keliya likha abh main kya phada abh
chhor mujhe nahi chahiye os on kr
&
1st take care of ur headache 1st daantoo phirse

nahi chahiye os
achchaa hua dant pitti but u r a such lier purre IF ne nahi danta
i m not ur maa i m ur sissy yeh bhi bhul gayi dekh liya aap ka pyaar

Originally posted by: SweetDevil_KR

nahi chahiye os
achchaa hua dant pitti but u r a such lier purre IF ne nahi danta
i m not ur maa i m ur sissy yeh bhi bhul gayi dekh liya aap ka pyaar

diya ..amazing one...enjoyed a lot..kya likha h tune !! superb ya..first line padke i thpught it was pakka sharon bt den swayam ...i wastaken aback.. n d way it proceeded was really good...actually reyam were penned down brillantly... so loved dat portion...!! keep it up

nahi chahiye to nahi chahiye
main ko chup hoon aap chup hojao itna shonk hai chup karwane kaa
main kyun share aur sikhaaoon kaise ziddi hona its my unique talent

bhaghwaan ko pareshaan karna bandh kar
itna pareshaan apne bhai ko karti to aaj aap devil hoti