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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

VERY INTERESTING CONCEPT MEERA. LOVED IT. VIRMANS HAVE A KID NYC. MANVI SEND A BEAUTIFUL MESSAGE TO VIRAT LIKED IT. FLASHBACK PART IS REALLY NYC. MANVI IN THIS STORY HAD A CANCER. VIRAT IS A DOCTOR. SO I THINK VIRAT WILL TREAT HER. REALLY INTERESTING. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

tq dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_nishal

awesome start dear

love it
manvi and virat were of opposite sides
bt they got married nd had chyld too
woowww they named her as virman.. tats cool
wbt virat??
y he didnt came to meet his chyld??
some mystery kya??
update soon

tx dear keep cpmmenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept. ..liked d mail maanvi wrote..nice...thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept
liked it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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virman: do dil jo milke dhadke hai😊

here i go... Part 2:

so da card writes>>>> Dr. Virat V. ( well everyones guess was absolutely correct) jevika tuk hold of da card nd made a mental note dat she will join chachu to mumbai at any cost...

NOTE:: SORRY I FORGOT TO MENTION IT BEFORE BUT ITS NEVER TOO LATE.. THE CHOWDHURIES R WELL AWARE OF DA FACT DAT VIREN HAS A YOUNGER BROTHER ND HE STAYS IN MUMBAI BUT NOTHING MORE AS VIRAT INSISTED ON INTRODUCING HIMSELF TO HIS BHABI ND HER FAMILY WHEN HE HIMSELF CUMS.

everyone heads to dr\ere house nd chachu excuses himself as he hsd to arrange da ticket... j- chachu aap meri ticket v karwana,, buth beeji nd chachu shocked.. beeji- ye to kya bol rahi hai.. kuch hi dino mei teri shaadi hai aur tu mumbai jana chahti hai.. bilkul nahi.. madan akele jayege.. j wit teary eyes- beeji, chachu agar aap chahte hai mai ye shaadi karu to aap mujhe nahi rookenge.. mere mannu k age meri shaadi nahi hai.. mannu meri zimadari hai mujhe uski bimari k har ilaaz ko janna hai.. usse bilkul thik karna hai.. at dis both chachu nd beeji were lost for words but finally chachu spoke- jeevika beta ghar jakar aapna aur mera saman bandh le mei ticket karwake aata hoon...

madan chachu left for da station nd jeevika nd beeji enters da house, jeevika felt lucky enough today as chachi, dabbu nd manvi were out for da marriage shopping so she cud easily pack her luggage nd leave... dey got da tickets for da evening train but chachu nd jeevika left home much before to time to avoid embarrasing questions from da other family members most importntly manvi nd so dey left bfore deyy returned from da market.. it was decided dat beeji will make an excuse dat jeevika nd madan chachu headed to chandigarh as jeevs wud b in-laws wanted...

MUMBAI:

NXT DEY DEY FINALLY REACHED MUMBAI ND DIRECTLY HEADED TOWARDS VIKRAM MEMORIAL CANCER INSTITUTE AS DEY WERE TO RETURN ON DA SAME DAY EVENING...

virat nd viren's dad vikram vadera too died of cancer nd so vanishka wanted one of her sons to b a cancer spealist nd try hard dat no one has to die a early death coz of dis disease, so it was virat who took da responsibility to fulfill his mom's dream nd viren tuk on da family profession of being a lawyer..

A SHORT INTRO TO VIRAT:

he is an extremly talented guy, vry meritorious, handsome, funloving but serious at da same time. he was da heartthrob of every girl in his school nd college life nd even now but he never fell for anyone coz his 1st nd last love was his nd his mom's dream. to get to dis position he never let his heart to beat for sumone but he is determined he will find his princess sumday... his princess shud b definately beautiful. decent, intelligent, well mannered, polite,mature nd not at all mischiveous in all ways a perfect vadera bahu.. after viren has found his perfect match virat is 100% sure he will too find his princess having all those qualities... da hospital knows him as an extremly serious person nd his presence is marked by pin dro silence noone dares to joke or play pranks with him.. so dis is virat, certainly an angy young man character..

A SHORT INTRO TO MANVI:

nothing new here manvi is exactly da one we find in da show.. so she is just opposite to virat's dream princess...

AT DA HOSPITAL:

jeevika nd chachu enters virat's cabin after an hour's waiting..

v- pls cum in.. sry aap logo ko wait karna para, mujhe manan bhaiya ne bataya tha .. pls hav a set.. aap kuch lenge?? j- no thanks.. ji ye4 meri behen ki reports hai.. virat takes da report nd starts examing dem.. v- dekhiye ye to kuch basic reports hai par kuch aur reports karwani padegi so aap mujhe bataiye ki kya aapki sister ko dizziness hoti hai?? j-- ji ha dr bohot bar to woh behos vho gayi thi aur sath mei high fever v rehta hai.. v- ok.. filhal k liye mein kuch dabaiyaa likh deta hoo aur agli appointment nxt month k 5th ko rakhte hai.. j-- ok, thnk u dr.. aise ek baat poochni thi aapse.. v- ji kekiye? j-- dkhiye agle kuch dino meo meri shadi hai to woh to bohot masti kadegi aurr humne use bataya v nahi hai to koi problem to nahi hogi? v- well dkhiye patient se mile bagare mei kaise bataau o physically kitni fit hai par i will insist ki avi mat bataiye aur jst medicines aur rest time se le to bohot hai.. m chachu- bohot sukriya dr sahab, apne hume itni jaldi appoinment di . v- ji ae to mera kam hai.. ok so milte hai agle mahine 5th ko.. j-- sure dr.

DEY FINALLY LEFT MUMBAI WITH SUM HOPES ND REACHED HRISHIKESH...

AFTER 10 DAYS... THE CHAUDHARIES ARE FINALLY IN CHANDIGARH FOR DA WEDDING CEREMONIS... SO DA VADERAS HAD BOOKED A 7 STAR HOTEL SO DAT BOTH DA FAMILIES ALONG WITH DERE RELATIVES AND FRIENDS CAN STAY DERE FOR ALL DA WEDDING FUNCTIONS ( U CAN IMAGINE DA PAN PACIFIC HOTEL IN THE MOVIE DE DANA DAN, IT IS SUMTHING LIKE DAT.. DA BRIDE'S FAMILY WERE GIVEN DA LOWER 10 FLOORS AS DEY NEED DA HALL FOR MANDAP ND ALL AND DA GROOM'S FAMILY HAD DA UPPER 30 FLOORS ALONG WITH DA ROOF FOR DERE RECIPTION PARTY AFTER DA MARRIAGE.

DA 1ST DAY IN DA HOTEL ONLY FOUR DAYS LEFT FOR DA MARRIAGE ND TODAY IS MATA KI CHOWKI ND VIRAT WAS VRY XCITED DAT HE WILL MEET HIS BHABI TODAY,

ITS MORNING TIME DA ARRANGEMENTS R IN FULL SWING AND BOTH VIRAT ND MANVI R BUSY WITH IT, VIREN MAKING PLANS TO MEET JEVIKA ND JEEVIKA WAS OUT FROM DIS WORLD DA ONLY TJHOUGH IN HER MAND WAS MANVI...

virat carrying a basket full of flowers was cuming to da hall as mata ki chowki was to take place dere.. manvi runninng with a plate full of jelabis nd on jelabi in her mouth half outside nd other half inside.. nd dere dey get clashed with each other , da plate full of jelabi's fell on da ground nd basket was tossed by virat on his attempt to hold da one he clashed with.. virat held her by her waist nd manvi was gripping his kurta vry hard making holes in it.. the flowers fell upon dem nd virat cud not take his eyes away from her nd manvi was bg to make sure she doesn't falls, she finally luks at him nd dere eyes meet.. virat cud hardly speak or breate but he managed to say "wow"hearing dis manvi's eyes widened but she too can't speak but coz of da jelabi.. finally he managed to wave her other hand near his eyes nd he came back to senses nd made herstand nd chuckles seeing her struggling with da jelabi in her mouth as he was still holding her hands.. he leaned a bit closer and tuk a bit of da jelabi dat was out of her mouth nd left after giving his mischiveous smile leaving a totally shocked manvi.. he didn't know whu he did so nd he was never a flirtious guy but sumthing was in dis girl dat made him do so he thought...


after dere 1st meeting virat was totally lost in his dream land nd he entered his room whistling "mere sapno ki rani kab aayegi tu", viren who was already present in virat's rum along with vanishka as both of dere rums were having sum electrical probs.. viren seeing his brother like dis spoke out-- aayegi mere bhai, jaroor aayegi nd winked at him.. v-- aayegi nahi bhai aa gayi nd suddenly his eyes fall towards his mom who too was dere nd bit hiis tongue.. woh mere kehna ka ye matlab tha ki... vi- oye rukh ja, poll khul gayi to ab bahane mat bana, aise kon hai?? with this both vanishka nd viren starts questioning.. --nam kya hai??? umar kya hai?? tere sare demands k mutabik to hai?? khandan kaisa hai??? v-- arre aplog break lagao, aapke sare sawalo ka ek hi jawab hai.. viren n vanishka-- kya?? v-- pata nahi,, viren n vanishka-- pata nahi?? matlab?? v- pata nahi matlab pata nahi.. avi to mili hai pata chal jayega.. viren-- arre mere bhai tune to ate hi rajdhani ki speed pakar li, mai aur ma to tere shadi ke bare mei baat kar rahe the aur yeha tune ladki v pasand kar li.. v-- aisi baat nahi hai vai.. bas achi khasi lagi.. aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa aap log soch rahe hai aur aap dono ko ye pata hona chahiye ki agar aap dono jo v pasand aaye meri pasand o hi banagi.. viren-- oye chal mere bhai ab jab tujhe koi achi khasi lagi to koi nayab piece hogi, kyun ma?? vanishka -- bilkul beta , virat tu bas usse mila de aapni beta ka rista mai khud leke jaongi.. v-- kya aap log v .. avi hume bhai ki shadi mei concentrate karni chahiye aur aaj to bhabi se v milna hoga.. m super excited.. viren-- mai v nd scraches his head with a shy smile.. v-- arre dekho ma masoor lawyer viren vadera sharma rahe hai... ae to pic of da day hoga nd he clicks a photo of shy viren in his ph.. ab ye to bhabi hi dekhengi nd everyone laughs..

evening time at mata ki chowki----

j- mannu tu taiyar hai na.. m-- ha di, j-- dekh jyada uchal kud mat karna, chup chap baithi rehna ek jagah.. m-- kya di?? aapki shadi ho rahi hai aur mai chup chap baithi rahoo?? j-- dekh agar tune masti ki to mai nahi ja rahi bahar.. dekh mannu tu bimar par gayi to?? m-- meri pyari di aap meri fikar choro aur apni shadi k bare mei socho aur aaj to jiju se v mulakat hogi.. jeevika blushes but lines of tension cud b seen in her forehead.. m-- oohoo jiju ka naam liya nahi ki sharmana suru.

everyone heads to da mata ki chowki nd da whole functiongets over nicely with da distribution of haluwa puri as prasad...

pinky chachi has secretlt made two gold bangles from her saving from monthly expenses for jeevika nd gifts it to jeevika nd da whole chaudhuri family except manvi nd dabbu were dere having an emotional time together when viren enters along with virat... viren cums towrds dem standing in front of jeevika, who was sitting nd her head down as she was busy admiring da bangles.. viren-- jeevika. (as he pronounced da name virat's heart skip a beat nd his meeting with dat jeevika who came for her sister's treatment flashes in his head while deep in his heart he prays she shudn't b da same) ye mera bhi , virat.. ( the name virat itself bought da same reaction within jeevika nd she prayed da same while madan chachu already stared st him without travelling into thoughts nd was hell shocked) jeevika collecting all da courage she cud finally looked up nd it seemed as da whole sky has burst upon both of dem, she immediately scanned her eyes for chachu nd dere he was already starring blankly, dere lips were sealed it was even tough for dem to breath.. viren was confused to see da reaction but da atmosphere seemed heavier with every mini scnds passing wen pinky chachi broke it.. pc-- arre putar tu to bara sons hai bilkul apne bhai ki tarah..( and dis was like a shower of water in a barren land for three of dem) virat faked a smile so did jeevs nd mc.. viren who was still confused opened his mouth-- abbe virat jabse aaya hai bhabi se milna hai , bhabi se milna hai ki rat lagaye baitha tha aur ab na hi na hello no namaste.. baat kya hai.. v-- (fhe thought of managing da sitution) o kya hai na bhai mai just match kar raha tha ki bhabi ki sakal apki dream girl se kitni milti hai.. by saying dis he gave a smile of assurance to both jeevs nd chachu, v-- hi bhabi.. j-- hi virat.. viren introduces him to everyone else but virat awaited to meet manvi, who had now bcum more than just a patient, she was now a challenge for him as he has to save her to keep his brother smiling for da rest of da life as he knew it dat viren was so madly in love with jeevika even in a arranged marriage nd he too knew dat jeevika's all concern is for manvi nd wat she meant for her.. he cud easily read it in her eyes wen dey met in mumbai.. but he had to leave without meeting her..

both of dem left nd viren got a call so he went the other way to rv it nd signalling virat dat he will join him later.. virat moved towards da garden nd his eyes caught his "sapno ki rani" who was busy puncturing da tyres of da cars of da organiser as she was not happy with da decorations nd dey didn't even bother to work on her suggestions, she was murmuring sumthing nd moving from one car to another just leaking da tyres.. virat's mind nd heart was full of joy , he never know why nd in no time he found himself behind her..v--hey kya kar rahi hoo?? m(without luking at him)- dikhai nahi deta in organisers ki gari ka tyre puncture kar rahi hoo.. v-- par kyun??? m- kitni ghatiya decoration ki hai isiliye.. v-- oo i c... manvi moves further nd by mistake goes to do da same with virat's car as his was identical with dat of one of da organiser's, virat sees it nd rushes nd holds her hand, v-- par maine kya kia?? mere gari ke sath ae khatanak julm kyun??? m-- o ye tumhari hai nd she looks at him nd in no time recognises him.. m- tttuuummm????????????????????????

v- yeah .. main , hi myself virat, dulhe ka bhai aur tum.. m-- mai madhubala ..(says it in anger nd also to avoid him) nd runs fom dere.. v-- madhubala.. interesting.. par ye to bandariya nikli, noy my type but ... beta virat faltu ki bat chor aur bhabi ki behna ke bare me soch, jakar uski case phirse study karta hoon, par agar usse mulakat hoti to usse examine kar pata, bhai.. ha unse kehta hoon usse milne ki baat nd suddenly he feels sumone's hand on his shoulder, he turns...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Y virat didnt cum 2 c hs baby
I loved it
Continue soon
Ty 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mindblowing
Ur secnd update was superb
Virmans 1st meeting was awesome
Loved it
Update d nxt part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow first part it'self our virman is blessed with a girl child
that's new
awesome update
where is these virat
love manvi
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome awesome
so virat see her sapno ka rani
but fate...
what he will do after knowing these
uodate soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear..

but dont know why i have feeling that i read this work somewhere before too. may be in virman cafe

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